"" ChamaktA SitaarA "":Shayri-E-Dard

nirala

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roshan ek Sitara tha
lgta bada hi pyara tha

jhilmil sa chamkta tha
kabhi jlta kabi bujhta tha

dukhiyaron ka sathi woh
tanhaiyo me sabi ka dulara tha

dard se chalkte askon ka
wahi ek sahara tha

khushiyo ke mauke pr bhi jhilmilata woh,mgar
kisi ko nazar na aata tha,sabhi ka usse kinara tha

fitrat hai insano ki,domukhi
ise kaha uska naata tha

inteha bhi ho gai dekho ab Nirala
toot kar bikharte waqt bhi woh apna farz nibhata tha

bikhrte waqt bhi logon ke
anchahi murado ka sahara tha


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manzil-e-ishq

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2011, 11:22:27 AM »

eisa laga jaise main koi kahani padh rahi hu...
sweet & simple si....
par sahi kaha nirala ji...
chand tare na hote to raat kitni feeki feeki lagti...


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KOYAL46

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #2 on: January 19, 2011, 11:38:37 AM »

mast poem hai aapki Nirala ji..... Applause

Last 2 lines I like the best....


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sbechain

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2011, 12:00:29 PM »


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nirala

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2011, 01:03:21 PM »

sabko Thanku sukriya
dua salaam sabko
"
thanx
"


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Matrix Guy

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2011, 01:03:36 PM »

bahot hi dil se lkiha he niaral ji apne......

jesa priya ne kaha sach ek kahani jesa hi laga.........wonderful creation dear........keep it up


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nirala

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2011, 02:35:24 PM »

bahut sukriya Matrix ji.
lekin ye iss kuch line me ek kahani jarur hai.
jo bilkul sachhi hai.
aapka thanx sarahne ke liye.
"
thanx
"


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Anshumali

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2011, 02:36:37 PM »

Quote from: nirala on January 19, 2011, 11:15:31 AM

Very Nice Creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause

aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ... ! khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !


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nirala

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2011, 04:52:25 PM »

Anshumali ji--
sarahne ke liye bahut sukriya
khus rahen
"
thanx
"


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #9 on: January 21, 2011, 06:03:29 PM »

Nice Kb JI


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nirala

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2011, 11:03:44 AM »

Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on January 19, 2011, 11:22:27 AM

eisa laga jaise main koi kahani padh rahi hu...
sweet & simple si....
par sahi kaha nirala ji...
chand tare na hote to raat kitni feeki feeki lagti...

manzil ji…
itna bada reply to aapne shayd kisi ko nai dia hoga aajtak…
hahaha Usual Smile


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2013, 05:24:02 AM »

Nice


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Advo.RavinderaRavi

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #12 on: April 24, 2013, 05:24:48 AM »

Nice Line


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nirala

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Re: "" ChamaktA SitaarA ""

«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2013, 08:37:53 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 24, 2013, 05:24:48 AM

Nice Line

thanx


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