Chaman jal gaya !!!!

by Talat on March 23, 2007, 12:45:36 PM
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Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah se
Kaisi giri ye barq, muskurata chaman jal gaya

Har paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas se
Kyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gaya

Ugta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har roz
Wo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gaya

Jo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor se
Ye kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gaya

Kahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thi
Aapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2007, 01:00:25 PM »
sad5  sad5  sad5
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2007, 02:49:38 PM »
nice Talat!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2007, 04:37:27 PM »
Wow..

its awsome.. A real nice one Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2007, 05:19:17 PM »
Rajbir sad5 Thanks Pooja.... Thank you so much Ricky Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 25, 2007, 02:31:11 PM »
wow awesome TalaT.
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«Reply #6 on: March 25, 2007, 05:14:22 PM »
Thank You Nidhi :D
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«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2007, 03:33:16 AM »
Bohat Umdah Talat...
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«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2007, 04:45:56 PM »
"Chaman jal gaya par chingaari abhi baaki hai,
 meri rooh me teri khushboo abhi bhi baaki hai,
 bhulaa dun kaise wo pal jo tere saath guzare thhe,
 meri zindagi me tere bin kuch bhi nahi saathi hai."
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«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2007, 05:38:49 PM »
Bahut achhe Talat Ji and Nidhi...

Is dilka chaman jala teri judayi ki aag se,
mere ashqon ki barish bhi ise bujha na paayi,
Ab to aa jaa pyar kar rimjhim sawan banke,
kahin maar hi na daale mujhe ye teri judayi...
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«Reply #10 on: March 27, 2007, 12:42:12 PM »
Thanks Nidhi and Angel.... Usual Smile

Bohot khoob Nidhi and Angel..!!
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paani
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«Reply #11 on: March 28, 2007, 04:21:27 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah se
Kaisi giri ye barq, muskurata chaman jal gaya

Har paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas se
Kyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gaya

Ugta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har roz
Wo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gaya

Jo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor se
Ye kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gaya

Kahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thi
Aapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!


khub talat ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 28, 2007, 07:01:51 AM »
Chaman jal gaya...Nice Topic aur isse bahoot kubsurati se bayan kiya hai aapne.... Dam Good!
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«Reply #13 on: March 28, 2007, 11:15:31 AM »
Thanks Aryaan, Paani and Divs for appreciation. Usual Smile

Phool to khilte hain, sookhte hain, murjhaate hain
Phoolon se na jaane kyun hum rishte banaate hain
Kaante dete hain sada saath bahaar ho ya khizaan
Kyun kaanton ki chubhan se hum ghabraate hain !!
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«Reply #14 on: March 28, 2007, 12:26:33 PM »
gud start talat kuddiye par tumari yeh akhri reply mujhe kuch zada hi achi lagi,
nidhi aur deepika...very nice reply as well...

Usual Smile
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