Chaman jal gaya !!!!

by Talat on March 23, 2007, 12:45:36 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 28, 2007, 12:41:05 PM »
Thanks Meena..tum bhi kuch likhon..itne din baad dekha hai....
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«Reply #16 on: March 28, 2007, 12:45:25 PM »
hmm let me try phir...

kaanton se nahin hum to yaha phoolon se gabrate hai,
kyuki aksar log duniya me phoolon se hi zakhm khate hai,
apno ka saath dekh liya aur azma bhi liya "Meena",
apno ko chod aab hum gairon ko apnate hai!
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: March 28, 2007, 12:47:12 PM »
That was a nice one Meena Usual Smile

Ghairon ne saath nibhaaya, apno ne haath chorha hai
Kaanton ne nahin phoolon ne kar diya daaman chalni !!
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«Reply #18 on: March 28, 2007, 12:52:59 PM »
shukriya nice one as well!!!

phoolon ki raha pe chal kar  bhi humne zahkm khaye hai,
nazuk gulshan ki paato se apne pair chilwaye hai,
gairon se bhi kya umeed kare jab apne hi apne nahin te,
issliye hum puri duniya se dooriyan banaye hai!!!

ok kuddiye, lunch break katam hua... aab chalti hoon.! was very nice to have a shayari conversation with u Usual Smile tata
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: March 28, 2007, 12:54:54 PM »
take care...see ya soon Usual Smile ..and that was nice Usual Smile
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angel4u
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«Reply #20 on: March 28, 2007, 06:01:30 PM »
Thanks sad5
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: March 29, 2007, 10:30:16 PM »
Chaman se aaj chale, apne daaman main..
Kuch sookhe hue kaante samete kar
Is gulshan ke haseen mehekte hue phool,
Shayad hume raas nahin aaye,
Phoolon se jo mila hai zakhm hum ko,
Shayad bhar jaaye wo kaanton ki chubhan se !!!!!
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«Reply #22 on: March 30, 2007, 04:35:34 AM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Chaman se aaj chale, apne daaman main..
Kuch sookhe hue kaante samete kar
Is gulshan ke haseen mehekte hue phool,
Shayad hume raas nahin aaye,
Phoolon se jo mila hai zakhm hum ko,
Shayad bhar jaaye wo kaanton ki chubhan se !!!!!


Niceeeeeeeeeeeeee Talat
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«Reply #23 on: October 25, 2007, 05:32:38 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah se
Kaisi giri ye barq, muskurata chaman jal gaya

Har paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas se
Kyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gaya

Ugta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har roz
Wo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gaya

Jo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor se
Ye kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gaya

Kahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thi
Aapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!


BAHUT KHOOB TALAT... =D>  =D>  =D>
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SHONA
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«Reply #24 on: October 26, 2007, 03:45:05 PM »
Quote from: "Talat"
Banaya tha maali ne jo chaman badi chaah se
Kaisi giri ye barq, muskurata chaman jal gaya

Har paudhe ko seencha tha pyar ke ehsas se
Kyun khilta hua phool pairon se masal gaya

Ugta tha jahan muskurate hue suraj har roz
Wo suraj kyun waqt se pehle hai dhal gaya

Jo dil jude the ek doosre se ek anjani dor se
Ye kaunsa ehsaas aaj un dilon ko chhal gaya

Kahan gayi wo mohabbat jo ek doosre se thi
Aapas main kyun shak ka yeh teer chal gaya !!


Beautiful one talat... =D>  =D>
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Pooja
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«Reply #25 on: October 26, 2007, 05:38:42 PM »
bahoot khoob talat!! Good Job!!!
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Talat
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«Reply #26 on: November 15, 2007, 04:04:22 PM »
Thanks a lot Paani, Khwaish, Shona and Pooja Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #27 on: September 22, 2008, 06:58:08 PM »
Thankyou ! Yoindia
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #28 on: July 28, 2009, 07:51:20 PM »
the lines are so lovely
just cant think beyond it  icon_salut
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