chand tanha hay

by Pooja on November 23, 2005, 04:21:10 PM
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Pooja
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Chand tanha hai aasman tanha
Dil mila hai kahan kahan tanha
Bujh gae aas chup gaya taara
Thartharata raha dhuwan tanha
Zindage kiya issi ko kehte hain?
Jism tanha hai aur jaan tanha
Hamsafar koi ager mile bhi kahin
Donon chalte rahe tanha tanha
Jalti bujhti roshni ke pare
Simta simta sa ik makan tanha
Raah dekha kare ga sadiyon tak
Chor jaen ge yeh jahan tanha(nm)
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Silence
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«Reply #1 on: November 23, 2005, 04:37:10 PM »
nice!

waqt waqt ki baat hai, waqt pe kiska zor hai,
mehefil me rehne wale aaj tanhayi se baat karte hai,
sulje huye te hum, zindagi ka matlab auron ko samjhate te,
aaj auron ki chodo hum bathi ke khud se larte hai!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2005, 12:35:07 PM »
Good one Pooja and Silence ...
Keep it up both ...


Sun sako to ek kahani hoon main,
Rakh sako to nishani hoon main,
Paa sako to ek saaya hoon main,
Rok na paayi jise saari duniya,
Wo ek boond aakhon ka paani hoon main ...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2005, 02:53:12 AM »
Bohat khoob Pooja...Silence & JHL.....
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2005, 08:02:37 AM »
nice one u all...........bahut sahi kahaa JHL" woh ek boond aankhon ka paani hoon main "
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akela
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2005, 08:25:18 PM »
nice written pooja ....silence...and jhl...........

aaj phir sapne mai tumhe dekha
socha ye dokha hai...par dil nahi maana
maine dekha unn phoolo ko ...jo..
 tumhare chehre par girkar khilkhila rahe thy
shayad mujh par hans rahe they.

tab jab mere aankh khuli
tho maine dekha tum nahi ho....kahi nahi ho
 mujhe koi mat rokna....maine tay kar liya hai
mai tumhare paas aaunga..humesha saath rahne ke liye.
 
 ab mujhe neend sona hai..
tumse milna jo hai......
auur aaj tumse milne ke baad
mai nahi lautunga
aaj bas dil chahta hai ki
mai phir kabhi na utthu.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2005, 10:32:59 PM »
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: November 28, 2005, 05:25:03 PM »
Thanks Silence, JHL, Akela and Aryaan!!

App sabne bahoot acha likha hai!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #8 on: November 28, 2005, 11:01:02 PM »
Thanx Pooja...
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #9 on: November 29, 2005, 04:32:21 AM »
chand lamho me bichadgaye ........

milne me laga tha hume waqt kitna........

guzare the pal tere sath tujhe asapna samajhker....

aab bhulunga nahi un lamho ko dard bhara sapna samajhker......
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Delicate_Doll
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«Reply #10 on: November 29, 2005, 01:56:05 PM »
bahut he khoob.........pooja jee.......n alllllll..........!!!
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Ravi_Dave
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2005, 06:19:50 PM »
Kya baat hai Pooja, mind-blowing!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #12 on: December 02, 2005, 03:15:03 PM »
Thanks a lot Aryan, Isha and Akela ...
You are welcome Pooja ...
Very well written Aryan. It was fantastic one ...
And you too Tushar ...


Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindagi,
Koi jalata bhi nahi aur bahata bhi nahi,
Is kadar akele hai dil ki raahon mein,
Koi satata bhi nahi aur manata bhi nahi ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: December 02, 2005, 03:36:23 PM »
wah kaya baat hai....Koi satata bhi nahi koi manata bhi nahi... bahoot khoob JHL JI!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #14 on: December 02, 2005, 03:37:20 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja for appreciation ...
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