!!CHANDNI RAAT!!

by nidhi_yadein on January 26, 2005, 05:55:57 PM
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"Aaj phir chandni raat ka aagaaz hai,
 yaad karne ko bohat kuch dil k paas hai,
 us chand ka noor,tere chehre ka hoor,
 paida kar raha hai mere dil me suroor,
 chahat me tere khoya hai dil ye mera,
 roshan asman ho jaise mera har savera,
 phir kali raat bhi aati hai................,
 yadon k na jane kitne khandar gira jati hai,
 dil mera kuch betaab sa ho jata hai,
 tere pyar mein bas kho hi jata hai,
 tumhe mehsoos karta hai dil hamesha paas,
 jeevan me tumhe pane ki lagai hai maine aas,
 ye aas jaise mere jeene ka adhar hai,
 tere deedar ka har ek pal khhas hai,
 chori chori tera deedar kiya hai,
 itna aur kahungi,pyar tumse bohat kiya hai."    

 (26-1-2k5,9:45-9:50pm.)
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«Reply #1 on: January 26, 2005, 06:23:02 PM »
nice one Nidhi!!!!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 26, 2005, 06:32:59 PM »
thank god,ek comment to mila Winking .Thank u pooja ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: January 26, 2005, 06:36:49 PM »
Chandini Raat, chand se wo baat!!!
ab hui bahoot purani baat,
magar ajj bhi lagati hai
jaise ho, wo sab, kal ki baat!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 26, 2005, 06:54:05 PM »
wow........excellent pooja ji,u r really superb. Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: January 26, 2005, 06:57:21 PM »
Shukariyan Nidhi!!!!!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: January 26, 2005, 09:11:58 PM »
Bohat khoob Nidhi...

nice1 Pooja...
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2005, 06:43:18 AM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Chandini Raat, chand se wo baat!!!
ab hui bahoot purani baat,
magar ajj bhi lagati hai
jaise ho, wo sab, kal ki baat!!!!


very nice pooja ji  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2005, 06:58:08 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Aaj phir chandni raat ka aagaaz hai,
 yaad karne ko bohat kuch dil k paas hai,
 us chand ka noor,tere chehre ka hoor,
 paida kar raha hai mere dil me suroor,
 chahat me tere khoya hai dil ye mera,
 roshan asman ho jaise mera har savera,
 phir kali raat bhi aati hai................,
 yadon k na jane kitne khandar gira jati hai,
 dil mera kuch betaab sa ho jata hai,
 tere pyar mein bas kho hi jata hai,
 tumhe mehsoos karta hai dil hamesha paas,
 jeevan me tumhe pane ki lagai hai maine aas,
 ye aas jaise mere jeene ka adhar hai,
 tere deedar ka har ek pal khhas hai,
 chori chori tera deedar kiya hai,
 itna aur kahungi,pyar tumse bohat kiya hai."    

 (26-1-2k5,9:45-9:50pm.)


 :oops:  :oops:  :oops: aapki shayari bahot achchi hai nidhi. main to fida ho gayi aapki shayari pe. kaash main bhi aisa likh paati. bada khushnaseeb hoga wo jiise aap pyar itna karti hain, sachche dil se itna yaad karti hain Puzzled !
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #9 on: January 27, 2005, 07:11:54 AM »
very gud job by all

sunte sunte thak gaya hoon main baat mujhe bhi apni kahne do
pyar , wafa, mohobaat, dosti, imaan sab kitabon mein likha rahne do..............nm
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«Reply #10 on: January 27, 2005, 07:13:22 AM »
very nice nidhi, pooja and tanha
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #11 on: January 27, 2005, 07:18:06 AM »
It was cool one nidhiji...poojaji... and offcourse you tanha...

Ki thi shuruaat chhoti si mazak se,
Mazak dard ban jayega ye malum na tha,
Samajte the jise apna yaar,
Woh pyaar ban jayega malum na tha...
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tanha dil tanha safar
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«Reply #12 on: January 27, 2005, 07:51:58 AM »
thanks rashmi ji & jhl

& superb jhl
i understand what u mean to say.
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #13 on: January 27, 2005, 12:32:34 PM »
kabhi sochta hai dil, khud se ye sawal karta hai,
kyun baar baar ye tumhaara khayaal karta hai,
dil bhi ab to khud to tasalli nahi deta,
ek ek beeta pal mujhe bekaraar karta hai...

tanhai ka ghum itna, ke saha nahi jaata,
yaad aati hai tumhaari, ab raha nahi jaata,
neend nahi aati raaton mein karvatein badal badal,
kisi se ye dard e dil, ab kaha nahi jaata...

akele mein wo beete lamhe yaad karta hai,
tumse milne ki pal pal fariyaad karta hai,
tumhaari yaad mein ro roke wo haal hai mat poocho...
kyun ye pagla tumhein itna pyaar karta hai...


Puzzled !
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: January 27, 2005, 03:39:32 PM »
bahoot hi acha, shaandaar, kamal ka likha hai apne Amit. Bahoot Khoob!!!!!

Dil ki bakrari ke halat batai kaise
Jo ansoo nikal kar roj bicharty hai
Unse dil ko ab bahalaai kaise,

Yaanden aa aa kar, sanso ka rokati hai rasta
Dil ke jakhamo ko, khud hi se chupai kaise
Dil ab dimaag se laga hai bolane jhooth
khud hi khud ke haal ko, kahi le jau kaise!!!!

Tarap kar jab bhi aaine mai khud se muskurana chaha
Dil mai hui cheekh ko, ansoo se chupau kaise!!!!!
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