!!CHANDNI RAAT!!

by nidhi_yadein on January 26, 2005, 05:55:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 27, 2005, 04:51:14 PM »
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"Aaj phir chandni raat ka aagaaz hai,
 yaad karne ko bohat kuch dil k paas hai,
 us chand ka noor,tere chehre ka hoor,
 paida kar raha hai mere dil me suroor,
 chahat me tere khoya hai dil ye mera,
 roshan asman ho jaise mera har savera,
 phir kali raat bhi aati hai................,
 yadon k na jane kitne khandar gira jati hai,
 dil mera kuch betaab sa ho jata hai,
 tere pyar mein bas kho hi jata hai,
 tumhe mehsoos karta hai dil hamesha paas,
 jeevan me tumhe pane ki lagai hai maine aas,
 ye aas jaise mere jeene ka adhar hai,
 tere deedar ka har ek pal khhas hai,
 chori chori tera deedar kiya hai,
 itna aur kahungi,pyar tumse bohat kiya hai."    

 (26-1-2k5,9:45-9:50pm.)


beautifullllllll nidhi! such a lovely poem! keep it up kuddiya!!!!


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«Reply #16 on: January 27, 2005, 04:51:58 PM »
well done too pooja, tanha ji, JHL and heart!

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«Reply #17 on: January 28, 2005, 05:12:27 PM »
Thank u so much friends.

Very nice written by tanha,JHl,amit,pooja ji.

Excellent work.
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«Reply #18 on: January 28, 2005, 05:16:30 PM »
"Jo dard diya hai tune,zindagi bhar dukhega,
 jo pyar kiya maine,amar woh bhi rahega,
 pyar aur dard ka ye rishta jo hai............,
 use mere siwa koi aur na samajh sakega."
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«Reply #19 on: January 28, 2005, 05:21:47 PM »
wowow  wow excellent work all..........  superbbbbbbbbbbb ..........nidhi......pooja...............

hans hans ke javaan dil ke ham kyon na chunen tukade
har shakhs ki qismat mein inaam nahin hotaa

bahate hue aa.nsuu ne aankhon se kahaa tham kar
jo mai se pighal jaaye vo jaam nahiin hotaa

din duube hain yaa doobi baaraat liye kashti
saahil pe magar koi koharaam nahin hota...................
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«Reply #20 on: January 28, 2005, 05:33:03 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
bahoot hi acha, shaandaar, kamal ka likha hai apne Amit. Bahoot Khoob!!!!!


thanks for too much appreciation pooja ji. this was written for the one i love. you have also written very nice!  Usual Smile  very very beautiful like always!!!

Quote from: "Meena"
well done too pooja, tanha ji, JHL and heart!
:D


thanks Meena sis

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Thank you so much friends.

Very nice written by tanha,JHl,amit,pooja ji.

Excellent work.


Thanks Nidhi


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wowow  wow excellent work all..........  superbbbbbbbbbbb ..........nidhi......pooja...............


thanks waheed. your work is also nice
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«Reply #21 on: January 28, 2005, 05:36:01 PM »
ur alwayas heart..............  :lol:
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«Reply #22 on: January 29, 2005, 04:32:04 PM »
Thanx waheed and excellent work. Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: January 30, 2005, 06:18:58 PM »
Thank you very very much Meenaji n Nidhiji...
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«Reply #24 on: January 30, 2005, 06:29:37 PM »
Maine masjido me mangithi dua ki,
Jise hum chahte haiwoh hume mile,
Hamara farz tha humne pura kiya,
Ab agar khuda bhula jaye to hum kya kare...
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«Reply #25 on: January 31, 2005, 01:19:14 AM »
Shukariyan dosto!!!! bahoot khoob nidhi, waheed and JHL.

KHUDA SE KAYA SHIKAYAT KARU,
SAB USSI KA TO KIYA HUA HAI
DE KAR PAYAR KE CHAR PAL
JUDAI KA SAFAR DIYA HUA HAI!!!!
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«Reply #26 on: January 31, 2005, 05:15:00 AM »
Nice one Poojaji...
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«Reply #27 on: January 31, 2005, 09:21:09 AM »
wow..........superb waheed.JHL and pooja ji.
Thanx pooja ji.
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«Reply #28 on: January 31, 2005, 03:57:43 PM »
Quote from: "Just_Hate_Love"
Maine masjido me mangithi dua ki,
Jise hum chahte haiwoh hume mile,
Hamara farz tha humne pura kiya,
Ab agar khuda bhula jaye to hum kya kare...



wow just_hate.........


Yeh Unke Mandir, Yeh Unke Masjid
Yeh Zar Paraston Ki Sajda-Gaahen
Agar Yeh Unke Khuda Ka Ghar Hai
To Is Mein Mera Khuda Nahin Hai.............................
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«Reply #29 on: January 31, 2005, 04:01:40 PM »
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Shukariyan dosto!!!! bahoot khoob nidhi, waheed and JHL.

KHUDA SE KAYA SHIKAYAT KARU,
SAB USSI KA TO KIYA HUA HAI
DE KAR PAYAR KE CHAR PAL
JUDAI KA SAFAR DIYA HUA HAI!!!!


welcome  all....................  :lol:

superbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.......................  pooja.............

aaj tak main nahin samjha teri duniya kia hai
Aay khuda tu hee bata day yeh tamasha kia hai

yeh suna hai ke lakeeron kee zunban hooti hai
bol daiti hain k iss haath main likha kia hai...................
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