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«Reply #15 on: July 25, 2007, 07:08:06 AM »

Berukhi "manasi" ne nahi waqat ne dihkayi hai
Khuda ne bafa ke saath hi bewafai banayi hai
Ye to karishma hai kudrat ka ye mere dosht
Yaha to haath ki lakeeron main bhi likhi judayi hai
Har rang feeke lage hain ab to is judayi se
Haathon ki heena bhi kaha rang laayi hai
Kal beetaye the do pal saath main jinke
Na kaho aaj wo harzayi hai

Manav ji bahut achcha likha aapne but inshan waqat ke aage bebas ho jaata hai, kuch majburi unki bhi rahi hogi jaisa ki hum tum ji already kah chuke hai


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«Reply #16 on: July 25, 2007, 07:50:11 AM »

bohot ache manav ji...puri kavita apki samajh me to nahin ayi par jo bhi aya woh acha likha hai!!!! keep it up!!! :D

poem ji: "Khuda ne bafa ke saath hi beafai banayi hai" yeh lines apki bohot hi achi hai aur very true bhi hai. par insaan ki fitrat hai ke woh jab usko sirf ek pehlu zindagi ka dikhta hai to doosre ke liye tarasta.
waqt mazboor zaroor karta hai lekin har galti insaan ki waqt ke mohotaz nahin hoti. well thats what i thinK!
keep it up writing!!! :D


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«Reply #17 on: July 27, 2007, 08:36:43 AM »

Meena ji Lajawwab.. Taarif Kubul ho.. humtum, manav nice additions..


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«Reply #18 on: July 29, 2007, 12:15:44 PM »

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bohot ache manav ji...puri kavita apki samajh me to nahin ayi par jo bhi aya woh acha likha hai!!!! keep it up!!! :D

mohtarma.. maf kijiyega... aap jaisi maharat hasil nahi hai abhi iss na-cheez ko... aur bohaat bohaat sukhriya aapne mere likhe alfaz ko pasand kiya..

thanks paani... aapki id kafi gehri hai !!!


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«Reply #19 on: July 29, 2007, 12:31:55 PM »

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woh payar hi kya jisse waqt hara jaye
woh vaffa hi kya jo bewafai sa ehsaas de jaye

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rakho jab dum, izhar-e-mohaabat ka mere dost
kaanton bhari rah pe chalna phir aana chahiye

mushkilein kaisi bhi waqt paida karde jeevan mein
har mushkil mein apne dilbar ka sath nibhana chahiye

jhonke hawa ke bohaat hai "poem143s" asamaan mein
be-lagam fiza ko payar mein mehkhaana aana chahiye

rone wale aksar dhoonda karte hain,kandha kissi ka "Manav"
burre waqt mein ussi kandhe ka "Manasi", sahara banNa chahiye


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«Reply #20 on: July 30, 2007, 03:54:49 AM »

Waah manav bahut khoob you r 101% right
Bahut achcha likhte ho yaar tum keep it up
Lakin yaar mayush hokar zindagi jeene ka bhi to maza nahi na


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«Reply #21 on: July 30, 2007, 07:34:23 AM »

Thanks Sameer.Aapko kuch kehna chahunga.here it goes...

har mayusi ke sath ek nayi umeed bhi rakhta hu
judai ke gum ke baad, milaan ki khushi bhi samjhta hu

aaisa nahi sirf dard hi mila mujhse meri "Manasi" se
uski mohaabat ka main ajj bhi dum bharta hu

lekin,har lamha hassi ka naqaab pehanNa mumkin nahi
lafzon se issi liye apne dil ka zehar bhi ulgalta hu

khush-kismat hain jo apne mehboob ko samjh pate hain
"Manav" main toh bas apni hi nadaanioN se darta hu


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«Reply #22 on: July 30, 2007, 12:36:50 PM »

paan ji...shukriya ji shukriya!!!!

manav ji...wonderful reply!!! dono apki poems bohot hi achi hai. really, keep it up, would like to c more of ur poetry!!!

ishq me har ashiq apne gum bhula lete hai,
sapno ki duniya me ghar apna basa lete hai,
par jab toote hai yeh mithi ke mehel "Meena",
hasane wali ki waja se do askh baha lete hai!!!


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«Reply #23 on: July 30, 2007, 02:28:23 PM »

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Meena ji bohaat khoob.

do pal ke liye jeena chahta tha
sarri zindagi bhar intezar raha
do pal ke liye phir jee main saka
par mujhko na mera talabGaar mila


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«Reply #24 on: August 02, 2007, 09:11:41 AM »

nice manav ji!!

do pal ki kushi ke badle umar bhar ka gum mila,
wafa jo janta na tha, hume to aisa sanam mila,
Kehte hai Khuda to sirf insaaf karta hai "Meena",
par humare dard ka to hume kabhi na marham mila!


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«Reply #25 on: August 02, 2007, 09:42:54 AM »

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Hello dosto, phir se ek nayi koshish leke hazir hui hoon Usual Smile

i hope u will like it:

Phir baithe hai akhele par man me shanti bhi samayi hai,
Talash ti jis manzil ki, akhirkar wohi humne aaj payi hai,

Phir bhi, ek bechaini si bhi hai dil ke kisi kone me,
Kya kush hoon mai is manzil se, jo zindagi ne hume dikhayi hai,

Kya badla hai akhir? Kuch bhi to nahin anth me,
Pehle bhi te akhele hum, mili aaj bhi to hume tanhai hai,

Ankhon me sapne lekar chal pade the apni manzil ki aur,
Kya jana tha, humne to sirf khwabon me hi zindagi basayi hai,

Ek manzil hi nahin anth zindagi ke raston ka, ke chup chap baith gaye,
Manzil se aage bhi chalna hota hai, yehi zindagi ki karwayi hai.

Chalo “Meena”, agge ke aur bado apni zindagi ki raha me,
Bahare to mili nahin, bas charon aur virani si chayi hai!

Wonderful Meena ...as always......! Usual Smile


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«Reply #26 on: August 08, 2007, 10:02:26 AM »

thanks Talat kuddiye!!

:D


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«Reply #27 on: August 08, 2007, 02:26:44 PM »

bahoot khoob poem ji, Manav ji and Meena!!!!

bahoot hi acha likha hai sabhi ne!!! Good thread to read one by one all posts Usual Smile


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«Reply #28 on: August 08, 2007, 03:06:09 PM »

now its ur turn to write :evil: and our turn to read :evil:


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Manav Mehra

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«Reply #29 on: August 09, 2007, 10:56:57 AM »

Thanks Pooja!!!


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