~~*Chashm-E-Junoon*~~

by badnaam_shayar on June 16, 2006, 05:52:07 PM
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #15 on: June 17, 2006, 06:33:03 AM »
Gud reply Shikha....

Kyu bhara hai Dil tera Dard se.....
Yeh kiss Jurm ki saja hai......

Ki tune aisi kya khata.....
Jo WaQt tujhse yoon ruswaa hai.....

Na badal khud ko yeh WaQt badal de......
Mita do harr uss Gum ko jo khushion ke beech dhakhal de......

Kab talak yoon hee ghut ghut ke tum jeeti jaogi.....
Kya milega ant me tum bhi wai safed kafan paogi......!!!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #16 on: June 17, 2006, 07:08:55 AM »
shukriya GAURAV ,SHIKHA .........GUB JOB BOTH OF U.........
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #17 on: June 17, 2006, 09:45:25 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
bahut hi sundar likha Gaurav,Sangy ,Nitiesh.................

woh aksar mujhse khawabo.n mein baate karta hai
dil puchta hai mujhse ki akhir woh mera kya lagata hai

meri aankho ki nagari mein jab aansu ka dera lagata hai
woh  mere ashaq ban ke mere dard mein dhala karta  hai

puchta hai aksar dil mera mujhe ,ek hi sawaal
woh bhi kyu mere saath pal- pal jeeta hai ,pal-pal marta hai

meri baate hai kai ankahi hi mujhe
per woh meri unkahi baato ko apni nazmo mein kaise likhta hai


Lagte hai hum tere Deewane tujhe apni Jaan nazar karte hai.....
Likhe kuch Shabd tune aise ki ab hum bhi lafz chuna karte hai......

Tere nagar ki harr gali me naam tera humne sajaya hai......
Tu kar yakin humne tujhe Dil me nahi ab aankhon me basaya hai......

Teri ankahi baatein teri aankhien keh jaati hai......
Jab jab Sochta hu baare me tere toh woh ek Ghazal bann Kagaz par utar aati hai......!!!!!!!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #18 on: June 20, 2006, 03:59:49 AM »
Chashm-e-Junoon se humne apna Dard chalkaya hai......
Poochti hai Kismat humse tune use chaha ke kya paya hai......

Dil tera hota toh tujhe me batata ki Mahobbat Cheez kya hai......
Milti hai kya Khushi or issme Dard kya hai......

Bas ab binn bataye mujhe le chalo kahin.....
Jahan ho na ab koi bhi bas me hu or Tanha raahein ho sabhi.....!!!!!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #19 on: June 20, 2006, 04:23:58 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Chashm-e-Junoon se humne apna Dard chalkaya hai......
Poochti hai Kismat humse tune use chaha ke kya paya hai......

Dil tera hota toh tujhe me batata ki Mahobbat Cheez kya hai......
Milti hai kya Khushi or issme Dard kya hai......

Bas ab binn bataye mujhe le chalo kahin.....
Jahan ho na ab koi bhi bas me hu or Tanha raahein ho sabhi.....!!!!!!!!


Nice one Gaurav.....

Yu Tanha Rahon sey gujrogey to kya payogey,
Do kadam fasla tey karogey aur thak jaogey....

Bewafaii kaho isey ya Pathar dil keh lo humko,
Yu tootey dil sey dil lagaogey to pachtaogey....

Khud hi ro detey hai humko hasaney waley,
Yeh Koshish karogey tum bhi to toot jaogey....

Har roz naye gul khiltey hai gulistaan mey,
Kab tak kaaton sey tum apna dil behlaogey....

Jao hum tum sey har umeed tod detey hai,
Phir bhi mud key dekhogey to humko yahin paogey....



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ranjana
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«Reply #20 on: June 20, 2006, 04:31:43 AM »
Too Good SHIKHA JI.........BAHUT KHUB.......
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Shikha12
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«Reply #21 on: June 20, 2006, 04:38:01 AM »
Shukriya Ranjana Ji......[/b]
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #22 on: June 20, 2006, 04:38:03 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Chashm-e-Junoon se humne apna Dard chalkaya hai......
Poochti hai Kismat humse tune use chaha ke kya paya hai......

Dil tera hota toh tujhe me batata ki Mahobbat Cheez kya hai......
Milti hai kya Khushi or issme Dard kya hai......

Bas ab binn bataye mujhe le chalo kahin.....
Jahan ho na ab koi bhi bas me hu or Tanha raahein ho sabhi.....!!!!!!!!


Nice one Gaurav.....

Yu Tanha Rahon sey gujrogey to kya payogey,
Do kadam fasla tey karogey aur thak jaogey....

Bewafaii kaho isey ya Pathar dil keh lo humko,
Yu tootey dil sey dil lagaogey to pachtaogey....

Khud hi ro detey hai humko hasaney waley,
Yeh Koshish karogey tum bhi to toot jaogey....

Har roz naye gul khiltey hai gulistaan mey,
Kab tak kaaton sey tum apna dil behlaogey....

Jao hum tum sey har umeed tod detey hai,
Phir bhi mud key dekhogey to humko yahin paogey....



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Briliiant Reply Shikha..... =D>


Thokar maari Kismat ne par tujhs yeh Umeed iss Dil ko toh na thi......
Chala gaya jab me Zindagi se tumhari toh Nazar tumhari kisi gali kisi raste par toh na thi......

Ab bhi Chahata hoon tumhe par tum Dil-e-Zazbaat kabhi na samajh paogi......
Sochogi jitna Buraion ke baare me utna hee inn Khushion se door chali jaogi......

Kambhakht na kehna hume humne chede tere Dil ke taar hai......
Ab jhoomegi tu bhi iss Dard me yahi ab iss Nakaam Zindagi ke saaj hai.......!!!!!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #23 on: June 20, 2006, 05:04:56 AM »
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Briliiant Reply Shikha..... =D>


Thokar maari Kismat ne par tujhs yeh Umeed iss Dil ko toh na thi......
Chala gaya jab me Zindagi se tumhari toh Nazar tumhari kisi gali kisi raste par toh na thi......

Ab bhi Chahata hoon tumhe par tum Dil-e-Zazbaat kabhi na samajh paogi......
Sochogi jitna Buraion ke baare me utna hee inn Khushion se door chali jaogi......

Kambhakht na kehna hume humne chede tere Dil ke taar hai......
Ab jhoomegi tu bhi iss Dard me yahi ab iss Nakaam Zindagi ke saaj hai.......!!!!!!!!



Bahut achha likha hai Gaurav...


Jis manzil par kadam rakhna ho mushkil,
Us manzil tak tum jaogey kaisey.....
Purzey Purzey ho kar bikhar gaya hai yeh,
Is khiloney sey dil behlaogey kaisey....


Jazbaat unkey samajh gaye to chup ho gaye,
Ab aur kuch humko samajhogey kaisey....
Zindagi ka yeh saaz jo toot gaya hai,
Ispar bhala nayi sargam gaogey kaisey....


Chand ban kar chupp jaatey ho badlon mey,
Apni chandni ko tum chuppaogey kaisey....
Tumhey dekhtey hai kitney hi sitarey lekin,
Tum har sitarey ko dekh paogey kaisey....



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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #24 on: June 20, 2006, 05:26:45 AM »
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Briliiant Reply Shikha..... =D>


Thokar maari Kismat ne par tujhs yeh Umeed iss Dil ko toh na thi......
Chala gaya jab me Zindagi se tumhari toh Nazar tumhari kisi gali kisi raste par toh na thi......

Ab bhi Chahata hoon tumhe par tum Dil-e-Zazbaat kabhi na samajh paogi......
Sochogi jitna Buraion ke baare me utna hee inn Khushion se door chali jaogi......

Kambhakht na kehna hume humne chede tere Dil ke taar hai......
Ab jhoomegi tu bhi iss Dard me yahi ab iss Nakaam Zindagi ke saaj hai.......!!!!!!!!



Bahut achha likha hai Gaurav...


Jis manzil par kadam rakhna ho mushkil,
Us manzil tak tum jaogey kaisey.....
Purzey Purzey ho kar bikhar gaya hai yeh,
Is khiloney sey dil behlaogey kaisey....


Jazbaat unkey samajh gaye to chup ho gaye,
Ab aur kuch humko samajhogey kaisey....
Zindagi ka yeh saaz jo toot gaya hai,
Ispar bhala nayi sargam gaogey kaisey....


Chand ban kar chupp jaatey ho badlon mey,
Apni chandni ko tum chuppaogey kaisey....
Tumhey dekhtey hai kitney hi sitarey lekin,
Tum har sitarey ko dekh paogey kaisey....



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Manzilon ki nahi Khawahish mujhe......
Hume toh bas raston ki fikar hai.....

Bhatak na jayye koi Musafir......
Bhataki hui yeh Mahobbat ki dagar hai.......

Jab ho Raste apne toh Manzilein bhi Intezaar hamare aane ka karti hai......
Kamjor nahi na hee Lachaar me Dard hai toh kya warna Khushian bhi mere liye aahein bharti hai........!!!!!!!
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Shikha12
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«Reply #25 on: June 20, 2006, 05:52:14 AM »
VERY NICE REPLY GAURAV....

 =D>  =D>  =D>
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Shikha12
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«Reply #26 on: June 20, 2006, 05:57:34 AM »
Ab bhi waqt hai sambhalo isko..
Zindagi hai yeh teri… kisi naye rang mey dhalo isko…..

Hum Gumnaami mey khush rehtey hai,
Achha lagta hai tanha rehna humko…
Ab to tum bhi Pehchaan gaye ho humey,
Sochtey hai ab aur kya kehna tumko...

Gum ho chala hai naam apna is bheed mey kahin,
Dekey aawaz tum na Pukaro isko....

Dekha hai humney bhi manziley ko
Intezaar kartey hue kisi rahgir ka ….
Lekin Khandar jaantey hai apni kismat ko,
Isliye taktey nahi raasta kisi ka.....

Dil  tera ley jaaye naa tujhey khandaro mey kahin,
Koi nayi raah sey ab nikolo isko….

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ranjana
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«Reply #27 on: June 21, 2006, 03:21:14 AM »
nice gaurav and shikha

na manzlio ka pata hai mujhe
na kisi raha  ki talash  hai

tanha ki raha hai saath mere
aur koi hamsafar na ab mere saath hai

dekhte hain hum apen hi kadamo ke nissan
kab chala is safar per koi mere saath hai

ajab si dagar  hai ,ajab sa hai manzar
mere dil mein ek sehara  ki pyaas hai

ek haath thama thaa hamne sahare ke liye
woh haath nai hai mere pass ab
per un haato ki garmahat abhi bhi mere pass hai................
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #28 on: June 21, 2006, 03:43:41 AM »
Quote from: "ranjana"
nice gaurav and shikha

na manzlio ka pata hai mujhe
na kisi raha  ki talash  hai

tanha ki raha hai saath mere
aur koi hamsafar na ab mere saath hai

dekhte hain hum apen hi kadamo ke nissan
kab chala is safar per koi mere saath hai

ajab si dagar  hai ,ajab sa hai manzar
mere dil mein ek sehara  ki pyaas hai

ek haath thama thaa hamne sahare ke liye
woh haath nai hai mere pass ab
per un haato ki garmahat abhi bhi mere pass hai................


Manzilein apni Jagah toh Raste apni jagah theher jaya karte hai.......
Woh poochte hai sabaab humse mahobbat ka aur Lafz hum chupa liya karte hai.......

Na koi Dagar na hee koi Safar hai.......
Lagta hai sab Josh-e-Junoon na jaane yeh kaisa Prem Amar hai.......!!!!!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #29 on: June 21, 2006, 06:58:07 AM »
bahut khub Gaurav....... Usual Smile
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