Chhod de mujhko satana

by klaskar on April 06, 2010, 04:49:02 PM
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mitana to hai par asaan na hoga mohabbat mitana,
samjhega ye dil nahi aur na aasaan hoga tujhe bhulana,

is ghadi tujhe yaad karke aa raha hai humko to rona,
aaj teri yaad me hai ho raha ye dil deewana,

kaash tu ne ek baar mujhse kaha hota rukne ko,
aa main jaata paas tere hota na koi bahana,

tab tujhe ehsaas na tha, pyaar kya hai na ye pata tha,
aaj jab meri hai nahi tu, gunaah hai tera yaad aana,

dard leke dil diya tha, pyaar bas tujhi se kiya tha,
chhod k tu gayi hai jabse, sunsaan lagta hai zamana,

isliye to kehta hoon aaj, baahon me mere tu aaja,
rok na khud ko tu yun, main hoon tera ashiq purana,

dil hai mera, dard mera, ghum hain mere, hum hain tere,
laut aa mere paas tu, chhod de mujhko satana...
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«Reply #1 on: April 06, 2010, 09:48:53 PM »
Bhott hi Khoob Kapil ji .....

Yaad uski aana , Yhe koi naya afsana nahi...
DOst jo chod ke chale gaye , kissa yeh agar Naya nahi to purana bi nahi...
Maat batain kaaro abhi Dilzalo jaise,
Deewana hai tu , Ya Keh do ki DEE-W-A-Na Nahi.......
Quote from: klaskar on April 06, 2010, 04:49:02 PM
mitana to hai par asaan na hoga mohabbat mitana,
samjhega ye dil nahi aur na aasaan hoga tujhe bhulana,

is ghadi tujhe yaad karke aa raha hai humko to rona,
aaj teri yaad me hai ho raha ye dil deewana,

kaash tu ne ek baar mujhse kaha hota rukne ko,
aa main jaata paas tere hota na koi bahana,

tab tujhe ehsaas na tha, pyaar kya hai na ye pata tha,
aaj jab meri hai nahi tu, gunaah hai tera yaad aana,

dard leke dil diya tha, pyaar bas tujhi se kiya tha,
chhod k tu gayi hai jabse, sunsaan lagta hai zamana,

isliye to kehta hoon aaj, baahon me mere tu aaja,
rok na khud ko tu yun, main hoon tera ashiq purana,

dil hai mera, dard mera, ghum hain mere, hum hain tere,
laut aa mere paas tu, chhod de mujhko satana...
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2010, 03:18:44 AM »
Wah kya baat hai          klaskar ji.......



kash mohabbat ham apni bhool pate
phir toh kabka ham aapko bhool jaate
itna aasan nahi hai mohabbat ko dil se mitana
hosakhe toh lout aao ab "CHHOD DE MUJHKO SATANA"
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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2010, 05:18:02 AM »
Wah Kapil ji great creation.bahut khoob.beautiful lines by Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 07, 2010, 05:40:53 AM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 06, 2010, 04:49:02 PM
mitana to hai par asaan na hoga mohabbat mitana,
samjhega ye dil nahi aur na aasaan hoga tujhe bhulana,

is ghadi tujhe yaad karke aa raha hai humko to rona,
aaj teri yaad me hai ho raha ye dil deewana,

kaash tu ne ek baar mujhse kaha hota rukne ko,
aa main jaata paas tere hota na koi bahana,

tab tujhe ehsaas na tha, pyaar kya hai na ye pata tha,
aaj jab meri hai nahi tu, gunaah hai tera yaad aana,

dard leke dil diya tha, pyaar bas tujhi se kiya tha,
chhod k tu gayi hai jabse, sunsaan lagta hai zamana,

isliye to kehta hoon aaj, baahon me mere tu aaja,
rok na khud ko tu yun, main hoon tera ashiq purana,

dil hai mera, dard mera, ghum hain mere, hum hain tere,
laut aa mere paas tu, chhod de mujhko satana...

Bahut khoob Kapil Ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 07, 2010, 07:15:29 AM »
Wah wah Kapil ji bahut achha likha. Nice creation.
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«Reply #6 on: April 07, 2010, 01:23:44 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Neel hamari kavita pasand karne k liye aur hamara hausla badhane k liye....

sach kaha hai dost aapne ki wo laut k aa sakte nahin,
par sach hai ye bhi ki unki yaadon ko  rok hum sakte nahi,
ek hawa k jhaunke ki tarah wo roz aati hai mere khwaabon me,
yaadon ko to rok le hum par khwaabon ko rok sakte nahi....

Aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Neel... bahut hi khoobsurat lines likhe hain aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Quote from: neelgold on April 06, 2010, 09:48:53 PM
Bhott hi Khoob Kapil ji .....

Yaad uski aana , Yhe koi naya afsana nahi...
DOst jo chod ke chale gaye , kissa yeh agar Naya nahi to purana bi nahi...
Maat batain kaaro abhi Dilzalo jaise,
Deewana hai tu , Ya Keh do ki DEE-W-A-Na Nahi.......
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2010, 01:34:43 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Cara ji... aur aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...

zulm hai yaadon ka ki wo bhoolne deta nahi,
har ghadi main chahun fir bhi dur wo jaata nahi,
har ghadi mere paas aake shor wo karta hai roz,
ishq ko mere pyaar ko bhool main paata nahi...

Quote from: cara on April 07, 2010, 03:18:44 AM
Wah kya baat hai          klaskar ji.......



kash mohabbat ham apni bhool pate
phir toh kabka ham aapko bhool jaate
itna aasan nahi hai mohabbat ko dil se mitana
hosakhe toh lout aao ab "CHHOD DE MUJHKO SATANA"
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«Reply #8 on: April 07, 2010, 01:38:03 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji..... thanx a lot...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 07, 2010, 05:18:02 AM
Wah Kapil ji great creation.bahut khoob.beautiful lines by Cara ji. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 07, 2010, 01:39:43 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Riyaaz Ji... Thanx a lot...!!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 07, 2010, 07:15:29 AM
Wah wah Kapil ji bahut achha likha. Nice creation.
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2010, 08:27:13 AM »
awesome klaskar.

Har choti choti baat pe tera satana acha lagta tha,
tera roothna aur mera wo manaana acha lagta tha,
aaj sab kuch adhura hai,tu nahi to kuch nahi hai,
saanse chal rahin par rooh me jaan baaki nahi hai,
aa jao laut ke ye dil pal pal fariyaad karta hai,
haan ye sirf aur sirf tujhse hi pyaar karta hai.
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«Reply #11 on: April 08, 2010, 08:41:21 AM »
wah bahut hi khoob, klaskar ji, cara ji and nidhi ji...

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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2010, 01:51:57 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Jasbir ji...!!!

Quote from: jasbirsingh on April 08, 2010, 08:41:21 AM
wah bahut hi khoob, klaskar ji, cara ji and nidhi ji...

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«Reply #13 on: April 08, 2010, 02:05:01 PM »
Shukriya ...  n aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Nidhi ji...

tere aane se jaise mere jeene ki wajah mil gayi,
pyaar tera paake saare jahaan ki khushi mil gayi,
tere jaane se ye jahaan shamshaan sa tha,
tere aane se jaise mere maut ko zindagi mil gayi,

ab to bas intezaar hai jab tera deedar hoga,
na koi bandishen hongi bas hamara pyaar hoga,
barso se tadap rahen the jis pyaar k liye,
tere milne se hamara wo sapna sakaar hoga...

Quote from: nidhi_yadein on April 08, 2010, 08:27:13 AM
awesome klaskar.

Har choti choti baat pe tera satana acha lagta tha,
tera roothna aur mera wo manaana acha lagta tha,
aaj sab kuch adhura hai,tu nahi to kuch nahi hai,
saanse chal rahin par rooh me jaan baaki nahi hai,
aa jao laut ke ye dil pal pal fariyaad karta hai,
haan ye sirf aur sirf tujhse hi pyaar karta hai.
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«Reply #14 on: April 08, 2010, 06:12:54 PM »
Quote from: klaskar on April 08, 2010, 02:05:01 PM
Shukriya ...  n aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai Nidhi ji...

tere aane se jaise mere jeene ki wajah mil gayi,
pyaar tera paake saare jahaan ki khushi mil gayi,
tere jaane se ye jahaan shamshaan sa tha,
tere aane se jaise mere maut ko zindagi mil gayi,

ab to bas intezaar hai jab tera deedar hoga,
na koi bandishen hongi bas hamara pyaar hoga,
barso se tadap rahen the jis pyaar k liye,
tere milne se hamara wo sapna sakaar hoga...


WAH WAH WAH KLASKAR JI.. WAH

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