Chiraag Jal Raha Hai......MKV

by mkv on February 09, 2012, 09:56:25 AM
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Chiraag jal raha hai roushnee  naheeN dikhtee
Udaas aaNkhe bhala kyuuN namee  naheeN dikhtee

Liye sawaal yahee barsoN se main baitha huN
javaab milne ki  surat koee naheeN dikhtee

thi ek aas ki kismat kabhee ye badlegi
Vo dil ki aas bhi poori huee naheen dikhtee

Hai manmutao dikhe dooriyaN haiN ghar-ghar meiN
kahaN vo pyar bhari zindgee naheeN dikhtee

“Mukesh” chhor de ummeed baadloN  se ab
Khuli ghataayeN haiN  baarish abhee naheeN dikhtee
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2012, 10:04:31 AM »
Quote from: mkv on February 09, 2012, 09:56:25 AM
Chiraag jal raha hai roshnee nahee dikhtee
Udaas aaNkho meiN kyuuN namee  nahee dikhtee

Chipaa sawaal mere dil meiN barsoN se hai
javaab milne ki  surat koee nahee dikhtee

Lakeer  kismat ki soNcha badal jaayegee
Ab badalne ki, ummeed bhee nahee dikhtee

Badhee haiN dooriyaN diloN ke beech ghar-ghar meiN
Jafaa ka daur hai, wafaa kahee nahee dikhtee

“Mukesh” chhod de ummeed baadloN  se ab
Khulaa hai aasmaan, barkhaa kahee nahee dikhtee



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mkv ji kya khoob likha hai Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2012, 10:06:01 AM »
mukesh ji ek shaan daar ghazal ke saath aaye hain aap vqai ye ghazal hai. satish ji ke sher ki line aapke liye bilkul fit hai "khudaa ke fazl se chalne lagaa meraa qalam kuchh kuchh. khush raho.
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2012, 10:11:24 AM »
Quote from: mkv on February 09, 2012, 09:56:25 AM
Chiraag jal raha hai roshnee naheeN dikhtee
Udaas aaNkho meiN kyuuN namee  naheeN dikhtee

Chipaa sawaal mere dil meiN barsoN se hai
javaab milne ki  surat koee naheeN dikhtee

Lakeer  kismat ki sochaa badal jaayegee
Ab badalne ki, ummeed bhee naheeN dikhtee

Badhee haiN dooriyaN diloN ke beech ghar-ghar meiN
Jafaa ka daur hai, wafaa kahee naheeN dikhtee

“Mukesh” chhod de ummeed baadloN  se ab
Khulaa hai aasmaan, baarish kahee naheeN dikhtee



Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob Mukesh Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Faraaz Saheb ka Ek Sher yaad Aa Gaya..Arz Karta Chaloon..


Aaj Bhi Intezaar Mein Unn LogoN Ke Din Guzar Gaye......"Faraaz"
Mashroof Log Apni Marzi Se Aur Maghroor Log Apne Matlab Se Yaad Kiya Karte Hai
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2012, 10:21:55 AM »
Quote from: mkv on February 09, 2012, 09:56:25 AM
Chiraag jal raha hai roshnee naheeN dikhtee
Udaas aaNkho meiN kyuuN namee  naheeN dikhtee

Chipaa sawaal mere dil meiN barsoN se hai
javaab milne ki  surat koee naheeN dikhtee

Lakeer  kismat ki sochaa badal jaayegee
Ab badalne ki, ummeed bhee naheeN dikhtee

Badhee haiN dooriyaN diloN ke beech ghar-ghar meiN
Jafaa ka daur hai, wafaa kahee naheeN dikhtee

“Mukesh” chhod de ummeed baadloN  se ab
Khulaa hai aasmaan, baarish kahee naheeN dikhtee

BAHUT HI GAJAB KI PESKASH MKV JI....
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"tareekh hzaron saal me faqat itni si bdli hai,
tb daur tha patthar ka,ab log hain ptthar k."
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Sch me na?
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2012, 10:30:55 AM »

mkv ji,

Waah waah bahut khoobsoorat peshkash
kya kahne. Maza aa gaya.

Har she'r men umda khayaal...

Dili mubaarakbaad aur aglee post ke
liye shubkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2012, 10:34:58 AM »
bahot bahot umdaa kalaam
MKV ji--
ek shadaar post par dili daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
janaab aise hi likhte rahen
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2012, 10:57:07 AM »
boht khoob mukesh ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2012, 12:09:06 PM »
MKV Jee Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab, bahut khoob... aapki badti lagan
aur mehnat is kalaam meiN saaf nazar aa rahi hai... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur rawaaN kahe hai... Usual Smile

aik dilkash aur umda kalaam par humari dili daad o
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

koshish jari rakhiye... mehfil ko aabaad rakhiye... Usual Smile
khush o aabaad rahiye...
khuda hafez...
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2012, 03:24:31 PM »
Bohot hi umda khayal hai mukeshji
Dil se daad
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2012, 05:51:09 PM »
Quote from: adil bechain on February 09, 2012, 10:04:31 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mkv ji kya khoob likha hai Applause Applause Applause
  bahut bahut shukriya adil bhai  bas yu hi saath dete rahiye.
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2012, 02:33:33 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on February 09, 2012, 10:06:01 AM
mukesh ji ek shaan daar ghazal ke saath aaye hain aap vqai ye ghazal hai. satish ji ke sher ki line aapke liye bilkul fit hai "khudaa ke fazl se chalne lagaa meraa qalam kuchh kuchh. khush raho.
Kya kahu Sir
aap to sab jaante hai...
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2012, 02:48:17 AM »
wow. this is superb and beautiful. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: February 10, 2012, 06:19:26 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on February 09, 2012, 10:11:24 AM

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khooob Mukesh Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Jazbaaton Se Bharpoor...

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Faraaz Saheb ka Ek Sher yaad Aa Gaya..Arz Karta Chaloon..


Aaj Bhi Intezaar Mein Unn LogoN Ke Din Guzar Gaye......"Faraaz"
Mashroof Log Apni Marzi Se Aur Maghroor Log Apne Matlab Se Yaad Kiya Karte Hai
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Khwaish ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 10, 2012, 09:27:32 AM »
Quote from: Kohinoor on February 09, 2012, 10:21:55 AM
BAHUT HI GAJAB KI PESKASH MKV JI....
.
"tareekh hzaron saal me faqat itni si bdli hai,
tb daur tha patthar ka,ab log hain ptthar k."
.
Sch me na?

PattharoN ka sach..Bahut khoob.
Allah na karey. Na
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