cho.d dia....

by laaiba on August 11, 2012, 05:23:43 PM
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ziNdagee ko bas pya.r ke saHare cho.d dia
              dil ki kashTee ko dar.d ke kinAre cho.d dia
              
              zaBt kee had se to guzar hi jaate ham lekin
               yaa.d kee lehrON NE to pya.r dhaare cho.d dia
     laaiba ali
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2012, 06:45:05 PM »
kya baat hai laaiba ji bahut khoob...

wo kashti bhi kya wo saahil bhi kya...
tufaan me sab tabaah to dil bhi kya...
ek dafa humsafar tu ho jaaye Laaiba
to doob kar paar nikalna mushkil bhi kya...!!!

Intezar !
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2012, 07:05:42 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on August 11, 2012, 05:23:43 PM
ziNdagee ko bas pya.r ke saHare cho.d dia
              dil ki kashTee ko dar.d ke kinAre cho.d dia
               
              zaBt kee had se to guzar hi jaate ham lekin
               yaa.d kee lehrON NE to pya.r dhaare cho.d dia
     laaiba ali

gud
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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2012, 08:01:24 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2012, 08:32:40 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on August 11, 2012, 05:23:43 PM
ziNdagee ko bas pya.r ke saHare cho.d dia
              dil ki kashTee ko dar.d ke kinAre cho.d dia
               
              zaBt kee had se to guzar hi jaate ham lekin
               yaa.d kee lehrON NE to pya.r dhaare cho.d dia
     laaiba ali

bahut Khooob
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2012, 12:50:25 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2012, 02:40:54 AM »
very nice... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2012, 04:19:17 AM »
bahut khoob Laiba ji....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2012, 04:22:42 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on August 11, 2012, 05:23:43 PM
ziNdagee ko bas pya.r ke saHare cho.d dia
              dil ki kashTee ko dar.d ke kinAre cho.d dia
               
              zaBt kee had se to guzar hi jaate ham lekin
               yaa.d kee lehrON NE to pya.r dhaare cho.d dia
     laaiba ali
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2012, 08:48:37 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2012, 05:00:28 PM »
Bahut khoob Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2012, 01:30:45 AM »
 Applause Applause :clap
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2012, 10:39:05 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #13 on: August 16, 2012, 10:08:44 AM »
Quote from: Intezar on August 11, 2012, 06:45:05 PM
kya baat hai laaiba ji bahut khoob...

wo kashti bhi kya wo saahil bhi kya...
tufaan me sab tabaah to dil bhi kya...
ek dafa humsafar tu ho jaaye Laaiba
to doob kar paar nikalna mushkil bhi kya...!!!

Intezar !
shukria & nyc sher
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«Reply #14 on: August 16, 2012, 10:09:09 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on August 11, 2012, 07:05:42 PM
gud
thanku...
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