cho.d kar saat koi chalaa gayaa hai....

by laaiba on September 22, 2012, 02:55:06 PM
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too.T  kar dil biikha.R saa gaYaa haii
cho.D kar saa.T koi chaLaa gaYaa haii

dar.d kee chiiNgaari sey dei khh yee.....
man ki bastee hi koi jalaa ga yaa haii

dil   ka gulshan ujaa d kar meraa woh
rooh  main kaaNte  ugaa ga yaa haii

chei d kar dil k taaR waq te rukhsat
un kahee daaStaa sunaa gayaa haii

aaNkhen chaar  kar k  ik  shakhs toh
aag  paanee mein hee la gaa ga yaa haii..

laaiba ali
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«Reply #1 on: September 22, 2012, 03:50:10 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
Badhiya hai Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2012, 03:54:54 PM »
wah laaiba ji bahut khub bahut hi badhiya

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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2012, 05:55:04 PM »
Quote from: laaiba on September 22, 2012, 02:55:06 PM
too.T  kar dil biikha.R saa gaYaa haii
cho.D kar saa.T koi chaLaa gaYaa haii

dar.d kee chiiNgaari sey dei khh yee  ( DEKHIYE).....
man ki bastee hi koi jalaa ga yaa(GAYAA) haii

dil   ka gulshan ujaa d kar meraa woh
rooh  main kaaNte  ugaa ga yaa (GAYAA) haii

chei d kar dil k taaR waq te rukhsat
un kahee daaStaa.n sunaa gayaa haii

aaNkhen chaar  kar k  ik  shakhs toh
aag  paanee mein hee lagaa gayaa haii..

laaiba ali


naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice , lailba sahiba--agar aap apne lafzo.n ko roman mein correct pronunciation sey likhein to asaani sey padhaa ja sake ga aur lutf bhi aaye gaa

 maslan--- aag paani mein hee lagaa gayaa hai
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2012, 01:08:47 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2012, 06:03:33 AM »
bahut sunder Laaiba beti khush raho thoda words par dhyaan den
saath (with)
saat (seven) shaayad saat aur saath urdu men ek jaise likhe jaate ho.
daastaa naheen daastaaN hotaa hai
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2012, 06:05:58 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: September 24, 2012, 07:26:56 AM »
bahut khoob laaiba ji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: September 24, 2012, 09:42:55 AM »
mashallah zabardast likha hai aap ne laaiba jii...

      kalam chalta rahe ,kadam chaltey rahe,
      shayeri banti rahe,shayer banta rahe.
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«Reply #9 on: September 24, 2012, 10:12:03 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on September 22, 2012, 02:55:06 PM
too.T  kar dil biikha.R saa gaYaa haii
cho.D kar saa.T koi chaLaa gaYaa haii

dar.d kee chiiNgaari sey dei khh yee.....
man ki bastee hi koi jalaa ga yaa haii

dil   ka gulshan ujaa d kar meraa woh
rooh  main kaaNte  ugaa ga yaa haii

chei d kar dil k taaR waq te rukhsat
un kahee daaStaa sunaa gayaa haii

aaNkhen chaar  kar k  ik  shakhs toh
aag  paanee mein hee la gaa ga yaa haii..

laaiba ali

laibaa hi.............. kalaam behr se khariz hai......... magar aisa kyun?
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2012, 01:45:20 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob Laaiba ji....!!!
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2012, 11:16:00 AM »
Quote from: mkv on September 22, 2012, 03:50:10 PM
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
Badhiya hai Applause Applause
bohat shukria mkv ji............
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2012, 11:16:47 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on September 22, 2012, 03:54:54 PM
wah laaiba ji bahut khub bahut hi badhiya

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bohat shukria aapka..........
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«Reply #13 on: September 25, 2012, 11:18:27 AM »
Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on September 22, 2012, 05:55:04 PM

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice , lailba sahiba--agar aap apne lafzo.n ko roman mein correct pronunciation sey likhein to asaani sey padhaa ja sake ga aur lutf bhi aaye gaa

 maslan--- aag paani mein hee lagaa gayaa hai
bohat shukria ....sure i ll do it next time.........
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«Reply #14 on: September 25, 2012, 11:18:58 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on September 23, 2012, 01:08:47 AM
bahut khoob
bohat shukria...........
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