Choodyaan na todo:Shayri-E-Dard

salil2002

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doston isme ek aisi ladki k emotion hai jiska pati mar chuka hai aur log oose keh rahe kii yu widhwa hai aur yeh saare shringar chhod de.....hope u all like it

choodiyoon ko dekha maine
aur aankh nam huyi

kya khata huyi thi mujhse
zindgi yeh gham huyi

tu hi tha woh
jo inhe laaya tha

mujhko yaad hai
tumne hi inhe pehnaaya tha

aur phir tum gaye chhod kar mujhe
bheed badti rahi akela paa kar mujhe

par maine sanam inhe toda nahin
iske rangon main dikhte ho kaahin

yeh to hai teri nishani
mere saajan , haan kaisi hai apni kahani

do pal ka saath phir hai tanhaayi
yaad mujkho teri hi aayi

logon ne kaha mujhe kii maintujhe bhula doon
kaise samjhenge yeh mera haal jo bata doon

inse tum kaho na tode na choodiyaan
yaad hai tumhaari hai chand jab tak ghadiyaan


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Talat

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2009, 07:09:55 AM »

Salil, bohot hi khoob....Khuda kabhi kisi ko aisa din na dikhaaye.


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deepika_divya

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #2 on: April 21, 2009, 08:16:19 AM »

bahoot khoob salil. Very well expressed.


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pankshivam

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #3 on: April 21, 2009, 08:49:50 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 20, 2009, 11:27:28 AM

Bahoot Khoob Salil Bhai


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jannatjahan

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #4 on: April 21, 2009, 09:00:34 AM »

Bahut khub Dear Salil
Every sentence having deep emotions in it.


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diya786

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #5 on: April 21, 2009, 09:27:47 AM »

too good Salil ji
bahut khoobsurat likha hai
it's really nice to see that there are still people who feel what ohers have lost icon_salut


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salil2002

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #6 on: April 21, 2009, 10:33:16 AM »

all credit goes to talat di.as i had deleted this thread but she put it back here thank u talat di


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salma786

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #7 on: April 21, 2009, 11:12:09 AM »

Waah tremendous throw of words salil... Great work


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Talat

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Re: Choodyaan na todo

«Reply #8 on: April 21, 2009, 11:14:52 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on April 21, 2009, 10:33:16 AM

all credit goes to talat di.as i had deleted this thread but she put it back here thank u talat di

You are welcome dear..aur aage se apni koi poem delete karne se pehle ek baar humse poochna zaroor Winking

Keep writing.


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