-----/// Choton ki aadat ///----- Hriday

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kashtiyaan  saahil  ke  kareeb  aakar  doob  jaayaa karti hain
khwaahishein  dil  ki  aksar  toot ke  bikhar jaayaa karti hain

hasratein  hazaaron  jagti  hain,  dil  mein  hamaare  har  roz
har  raat  woh  sangh  hamaare,  fir  se  so  jaayaa karti hain

samundar  ki  ret par, roz ek  nayaa  ghar banaate hain hum
lehrein  aakar  us  ghar  ko, bahaa  kar  le  jaayaa  karti  hain

kitnaa  hi  sambhal  lein hum, aur koshishein  kar lein hazaar
puraani  yaadein  hain, roz zakhm nayaa de jaayaa karti hain

fursat  hi  kahaan  choton  se ki mohabbat kisi se kar sakein
choton ki  yun  aadat bani ki humko hi aazmaayaa karti hain

in  haathon  ki  lakeeron  ko bhi, aataa hogaa taras hum par
ab dekh kar hamaaraa haal woh, bas muskuraayaa karti hain





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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2014, 04:54:51 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: October 26, 2014, 08:17:53 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2014, 03:08:51 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2014, 06:28:46 PM »
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