Chubbhi ek Tanz seene mein .. Kisi ko nahin pata !!

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Here is another Poem, obviously its about pain ..

    Hume malum hai ki koi nahi jaanta,
        Hume malum hai ki kisi ko nahin shubaah,
        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!

        Zakhm hua ab gehra, Mili ek hai ek saza,
        Gunehgaar bane hum, koi thi nahin khata,
        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!

        Kisi nae nahin jana, zamane ab aur na sata,
        Saans atki hai halaq mein,iss fande ko hata,
        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!

        Jaan naa payega yeh jahaan..
        Hum ko bhi iska gham kahaan…
        Bass rahegi ek tees seene mein..
        Ki unhe tha nahi isk gumaan…

        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!
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«Reply #1 on: May 09, 2007, 02:59:54 PM »
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Here is another Poem, obviously its about pain ..

    Hume malum hai ki koi nahi jaanta,
        Hume malum hai ki kisi ko nahin shubaah,
        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!

        Zakhm hua ab gehra, Mili ek hai ek saza,
        Gunehgaar bane hum, koi thi nahin khata,
        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!

        Kisi nae nahin jana, zamane ab aur na sata,
        Saans atki hai halaq mein,iss fande ko hata,
        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!

        Jaan naa payega yeh jahaan..
        Hum ko bhi iska gham kahaan…
        Bass rahegi ek tees seene mein..
        Ki unhe tha nahi isk gumaan…

        Ki Dard hua iss dil mein..
        Chubbhi hai ek tanz seene mein, Kisi ko nahi pata !!


:cry: very touchy sad5  Keep Up. Nice reading u
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2007, 05:13:50 AM »
Bohat acchey..
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2007, 06:05:14 PM »
Thankyou Roja & Nirbhay!
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2007, 01:38:17 PM »
Its nice....
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«Reply #5 on: May 26, 2007, 03:16:50 AM »
very nice bro.
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«Reply #6 on: May 30, 2007, 04:51:27 PM »
Thankyou Usual Smile ..

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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2007, 04:22:13 AM »
Ricky ji... its really beautifull.. every lines having their own feelings.. good wriiten by u


Best wishes
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«Reply #8 on: May 31, 2007, 06:12:02 PM »
Thankyou Deepika !
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2013, 03:29:01 AM »
Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2013, 08:31:47 PM »
Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 02, 2013, 03:29:01 AM
Bahut Khoob.
Have you even gone through it or just gave your comment ?
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