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Pucho na hijr ke lamho ki chuban....
Kanto se bhi jyada thi pholo se chuban....
Humna jeene ki saja yun payi hai....
Hoti hai apni hi saanso se chubhan..
Ek tu kya gaya chod kar daman mera..
Aankho ko hone lagi khawabo se chubhan..
Khamoshiya jiski bahut satati hai mujhe..
Jane kyu usko hai baato se chubhan.
Kaash hum bhi ho pate teri tarah..
Hoti na yun to ehsaaso se chubhan..
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2011, 11:14:20 AM » |
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Behad khubsurati se dard ko pesh kiya hai priya ji bahut khoob..
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 02:39:51 PM » |
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wah manjil:: ye poetry achi hai… aapne mera fav. word use kia hai “ chubhan” fir sanso ki chubhan… bht bht khub… umda kalaam… aaplogo ko parh ke sochta hu mai bhi faltugiri chhod kar achi post likhna start kar du…fir sochta hu ki ek to kam se kam betuka shayar hona hi chahiye yahan par  hai na !!! |
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«Reply #6 on: May 22, 2011, 12:46:38 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2011, 12:47:10 PM » |
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shukria geet ji... Behad khubsurati se dard ko pesh kiya hai priya ji bahut khoob..
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2011, 12:49:45 PM » |
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pasandgi ka shukria nirala ji... par is baar aapne koi reply kyu nahi diya.. rahi aapki faltugiri ki baat to aap jaisa likhna sab ke bas ki baat nahi hai.. u resemble ur name... wah manjil:: ye poetry achi hai… aapne mera fav. word use kia hai “ chubhan” fir sanso ki chubhan… bht bht khub… umda kalaam… aaplogo ko parh ke sochta hu mai bhi faltugiri chhod kar achi post likhna start kar du…fir sochta hu ki ek to kam se kam betuka shayar hona hi chahiye yahan par hai na !!! |
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«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2011, 12:50:26 PM » |
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«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2011, 12:51:12 PM » |
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thanx alot shihab ji... Dard Bhari, Par Bahut Khub Peshkash Manzil e Ishq Ji
Shad o Aabad Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2011, 12:52:02 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2011, 01:15:53 PM » |
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Pucho na hijr ke lamho ki chuban....
Kanto se bhi jyada thi pholo se chuban....
Humna jeene ki saja yun payi hai....
Hoti hai apni hi saanso se chubhan..
Ek tu kya gaya chod kar daman mera..
Aankho ko hone lagi khawabo se chubhan..
Khamoshiya jiski bahut satati hai mujhe..
Jane kyu usko hai baato se chubhan.
Kaash hum bhi ho pate teri tarah..
Hoti na yun to ehsaaso se chubhan..
Dil Ko Chhuu Gaye Ehsaas .... Manzil Ji ! Dil Se Daad ....... !!! |
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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2011, 09:54:49 AM » |
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Wah..waah..wah..waah..very good...Raqeeb
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«Reply #14 on: May 24, 2011, 02:08:32 PM » |
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shukria anshumali ji... Dil Ko Chhuu Gaye Ehsaas .... Manzil Ji !
Dil Se Daad ....... !!!
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