Chup reh kar woh hame rula gaye.

by deepika_divya on November 29, 2007, 10:11:50 AM
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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2007, 05:27:00 AM »
hello divya suffi is here

      phoolo sang hotte hai kante
      jin ko aapnana padta hai
      kucch dard hotte hai esse
      jin ko dil m chupana padta hai

rahha nahi koyyi bhi aassa
phir bhi un rasto pe janna padta hai
manjile to bahut hai rasto m
per mussfiro ko tikhana kahha milta hai

divya tum bahut lagan s kaam karti ho tum  m janun hai maine dekha tumhara likha huua . so issliyya soccha tumhe commentes de doo vaise divya mujhe amit suffi kehte hai or meri do ktabe bhi market m mill jayye ge . pehli yaade or dusari betiya anmol . any way keep it up ur shayari god blss you take care .

amit suffi

suffi_amit @yahoo.co.in
 
thank U Amit. thank u so so much.. mujhe bahoot acha laga.. seriously...thank u fr ur appreciation.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2007, 05:45:11 AM »


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BAHUT KHOOB DEEPIKA..BEHTEREEN LIKHA HAI AAPNE..
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Thank u kwaish ji.. aapne bhi bahoot khoob likha hai.. really good one.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #17 on: December 11, 2007, 06:07:05 AM »

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Wah wah divya & Usman kya baath hai... bahut khoob
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thank u Roja Dear.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #18 on: December 11, 2007, 06:13:13 AM »
bahoot khoob najaf n tushaar .. really beautiful lines by u both... Good work.. Keep writing
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Talat
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«Reply #19 on: December 11, 2007, 01:05:53 PM »
Beautilful Divs...........Good ones Usman, Suffi, Khwaish, Najaf, Tushar !
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #20 on: December 12, 2007, 03:56:39 AM »
Thank u Talat aapa
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Advo.RavinderaRavi
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«Reply #21 on: March 25, 2013, 03:29:42 AM »
So Nice................
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