~Daag~

by honeyrose on September 04, 2008, 10:45:20 AM

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honeyrose

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Wada karke aap humen bhul gaye
Lagaker iss zindagi mein daag aap chale gaye

Muhabbat karke humne sab se munh pher liye
Aapse dil lagne ki keemat humne chuka diya

Dard sahete humne aapne jazbaat chupa liye
Logon ke sawal humare dil mein chubne lage

Zindagi ko hanste hanste ikhtiyaar kiye
Raaston mein aaye zakhm ko humne uttar diye

Aapki kami mehsus karte tanhaa rahe gaye
Dard ke toofan mein zillat se chuur hogaye

Sukoon ki zindagi mein aag laga gaye
Door hote hue aapse nazar nahi mila sake

Aapke nafarat humne khushi se aapnaye
Zindagi se aur koi rishta nahi aapnaye


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diya786

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2008, 10:54:25 AM »

Bahut hi accha likha hai jaya di aapne
its great keep it up !!! Applause


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k.shael

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2008, 11:01:20 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB HONEY DI,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL


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honeyrose

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2008, 12:17:45 PM »

Thank you diya dear..

Thank you shally dear..


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Azeem Azaad

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2008, 02:44:06 PM »

Nice One Honey Sis,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.


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Aryaan

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2008, 12:39:04 AM »

Very Nice Honeyrose..


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Kanta

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2008, 04:44:13 AM »

very good HR, I like your style


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2008, 04:53:17 AM »

good creation honey ji


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baadal102

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #8 on: September 05, 2008, 09:48:28 AM »

rose ji bahut khoob
keep it up

Baadal


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honeyrose

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2008, 08:58:36 AM »

Thank you Azeem bhai,,,Aryaan,,Kanta dear,,bhawna dear,,baadal ji..

aapka bohat bohat shukriya...


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angel4u

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #10 on: September 08, 2008, 02:48:58 PM »

Very very touching honey...


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Muhammed

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Re: *~Daag~*

«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2008, 06:39:14 AM »

Jee Honey
Bahot Hi badhiya ashaar Likhe Hai aapne
Har MIsra Dil Ko Chhoone waala aur Lafz bhi saada va suffaf aur dard bhi ahesaas bhi
Aur " Daag " oonwaan bhi bahot khoob va sahih hai
Aur
Dua Hai ki Gumo k baadal hat jaaye aur aapki Zindagi Mei Rehmat-o-Noor ki Barish hoti Rahe.