*Daag-daar Bahut Hai*

by Roja on October 02, 2007, 02:44:01 PM
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Roja
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Be-sabab, Be-wafa Pehredar Bahut Aaye
Aabaad Chaman Ke Haqdaar Bahut Aaye

Badi Mushkilon Se Mila Hai Sahil
Wafa Ke Dariya Main Majdaar Bahut Aaye

Labon Pe Muskaan.. Kuch Is Tarah
Apni Mehfil Main Rangdaar Bahut Aaye

Jaha.n Na Thi Umeed Na Gunzarish Koyee
Wahi Per Dekhiye Rajdaar Bahut Aaye

Ye Kiski Sadawo Ka Asar Hai Yaaron,
Bewakoofon Ke Shehar Main Samajdaar Bahut Aaye

"Roja" Ne Kya Lagaye Wafawon Ke Mele
Ujale Libaas Main Daagdaar Bahut Aaye..
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sapnaa
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2007, 03:13:25 PM »
Quote from: "Roja"
Be-sabab, Be-wafa Pehredar Bahut Aaye
Aabaad Chaman Ke Haqdaar Bahut Aaye

Badi Mushkilon Se Mila Hai Sahil
Wafa Ke Dariya Main Majdaar Bahut Aaye

Labon Pe Muskaan.. Kuch Is Tarah
Apni Mehfil Main Rangdaar Bahut Aaye

Jaha.n Na Thi Umeed Na Gunzarish Koyee
Wahi Per Dekhiye Rajdaar Bahut Aaye

Ye Kiski Sadawo Ka Asar Hai Yaaron,
Bewakoofon Ke Shehar Main Samajdaar Bahut Aaye

"Roja" Ne Kya Lagaye Wafawon Ke Mele
Ujale Libaas Main Daagdaar Bahut Aaye..
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Very Nice lines...roja..too good
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SHONA
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2007, 03:28:45 PM »
Quote from: "sapnaa"
Quote from: "Roja"
Be-sabab, Be-wafa Pehredar Bahut Aaye
Aabaad Chaman Ke Haqdaar Bahut Aaye

Badi Mushkilon Se Mila Hai Sahil
Wafa Ke Dariya Main Majdaar Bahut Aaye

Labon Pe Muskaan.. Kuch Is Tarah
Apni Mehfil Main Rangdaar Bahut Aaye

Jaha.n Na Thi Umeed Na Gunzarish Koyee
Wahi Per Dekhiye Rajdaar Bahut Aaye

Ye Kiski Sadawo Ka Asar Hai Yaaron,
Bewakoofon Ke Shehar Main Samajdaar Bahut Aaye

"Roja" Ne Kya Lagaye Wafawon Ke Mele
Ujale Libaas Main Daagdaar Bahut Aaye..
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Beautiful one roja.. =D>  =D>
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Pooja
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«Reply #3 on: October 02, 2007, 03:38:00 PM »
wah kaya baat hai Roja, bahoot khoob.. bahoot hi acha likha hai!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 02, 2007, 05:05:42 PM »
BAHUT KHOOB..BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI AAPNE...
YEH LINE  BAHUT ACHI THI...GOOD GOING

"BADI MUSHKIL SE MILA HAI SAHIL
WAFA KE DARIYA MAIN MAJDAAR BAHUT AAYE" =D>  =D>
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2007, 05:30:29 AM »
Superb One....!!!
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faiiz_76
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2007, 08:45:09 PM »
bohat acha
likha karain
app acha likhte ho
keep it up
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rahul soul
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2007, 08:57:06 AM »
Bahut Khoob roja G.
   ye lines bahut hi auchi hain,


    "ROJA" Ne Kya Lagaye Wafawon Ke Mele
    Ujale Libaas Me Daagdaar Bahut Aaye.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2007, 11:01:08 AM »
Amazing.... Just Superb...

Good Work Roja...
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sanya310
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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2007, 12:53:27 PM »
too gud Roja... love it!!!
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 05:15:58 PM »
Thank you very much friends (sorry for late reply )
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