-----/// Daastaan wafaa ki ///----- Hriday

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naa  tu  aayi , naa   hi  teraa  koi  paigaam  aayaa
ek  teraa  chehraa  mujhe yaad  har  shaam aayaa

koshish  bahut   kee   tujhe  bhul  jaane  ki maine
magar  mere  geeton  mein bas teraa naam aayaa

kami  nahi   ki   kabhi   maine tujhe chaahne mein
par  mere  hisse  bas   nafraton   kaa inaam aayaa

tu    qatl   karti  rahi   mere   armaano  kaa har pal
magar  mujh  par  hi    har  qatl  kaa  ilzaam aayaa

tujhe  sukuun   milaa   kisi   gair  ki  baahon  mein
mere   hisse   bas  aansuon  se bharaa jaam aayaa

tadaptaa  rahaa  main  apne dhadkano ke shor se
mujhe tadaptaa huwaa  dekh tujhe aaraam aayaa

tu  mashoor  hoti  rahi  ameeron   ki  mehfil mein
is   gareeb   ke   hisse   to bas  kissa-e-aam aayaa

tujhe   talaash  rahi  mehlon  ke  shohrat   ki, aur
main  ek  kankad  jo kabhi  naa  tere  kaam aayaa


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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2013, 11:09:51 PM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 16, 2013, 10:45:03 PM


naa  tu  aayi , naa   hi  teraa  koi  paigaam  aayaa
ek  teraa  chehraa  mujhe yaad  har  shaam aayaa

koshish  bahut   kee   tujhe  bhul  jaane  ki maine
magar  mere  geeton  mein bas teraa naam aayaa

kami  nahi   ki   kabhi   maine tujhe chaahne mein
par  mere  hisse  bas   nafraton   kaa inaam aayaa

tu    qatl   karti  rahi   mere   armaano  kaa har pal
magar  mujh  par  hi    har  qatl  kaa  ilzaam aayaa

tujhe  sukuun   milaa   kisi   gair  ki  baahon  mein
mere   hisse   bas  aansuon  se bharaa jaam aayaa

tadaptaa  rahaa  main  apne dhadkano ke shor se
mujhe tadaptaa huwaa  dekh tujhe aaraam aayaa

tu  mashoor  hoti  rahi  ameeron   ki  mehfil mein
is   gareeb   ke   hisse   to bas  kissa-e-aam aayaa

tujhe   talaash  rahi  mehlon  ke  shohrat   ki, aur
main  ek  kankad  jo kabhi  naa  tere  kaam aayaa


*****HRIDAY*****




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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2013, 12:28:27 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 16, 2013, 10:45:03 PM


naa  tu  aayi , naa   hi  teraa  koi  paigaam  aayaa
ek  teraa  chehraa  mujhe yaad  har  shaam aayaa

koshish  bahut   kee   tujhe  bhul  jaane  ki maine
magar  mere  geeton  mein bas teraa naam aayaa

kami  nahi   ki   kabhi   maine tujhe chaahne mein
par  mere  hisse  bas   nafraton   kaa inaam aayaa

tu    qatl   karti  rahi   mere   armaano  kaa har pal
magar  mujh  par  hi    har  qatl  kaa  ilzaam aayaa

tujhe  sukuun   milaa   kisi   gair  ki  baahon  mein
mere   hisse   bas  aansuon  se bharaa jaam aayaa

tadaptaa  rahaa  main  apne dhadkano ke shor se
mujhe tadaptaa huwaa  dekh tujhe aaraam aayaa

tu  mashoor  hoti  rahi  ameeron   ki  mehfil mein
is   gareeb   ke   hisse   to bas  kissa-e-aam aayaa

tujhe   talaash  rahi  mehlon  ke  shohrat   ki, aur
main  ek  kankad  jo kabhi  naa  tere  kaam aayaa


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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2013, 02:37:54 AM »
Bahut Khub Hriday Ji


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2013, 03:22:29 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 16, 2013, 10:45:03 PM


naa  tu  aayi , naa   hi  teraa  koi  paigaam  aayaa
ek  teraa  chehraa  mujhe yaad  har  shaam aayaa
achi baat hai her shaam mujhe yaad kar liya karo . abhi imtehaan sar pe hai to kisi ki yaad nahin aati hai mujhe icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
koshish  bahut   kee   tujhe  bhul  jaane  ki maine
magar  mere  geeton  mein bas teraa naam aayaa
kahin bhi main ne apna naam nahin dekha. aur geet mein mera naam lo ge to composition kharaab ho jaaye gi geet ki icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
kami  nahi   ki   kabhi   maine tujhe chaahne mein
par  mere  hisse  bas   nafraton   kaa inaam aayaa
tumhaari mohabbat bhi aisi hai jaise ek pyaala daal mein 5 chammach namak.phir bhi main ne kuch nahin kaha .ye imaan tumhein tumhaari apni harkat se mile hain main ne koi imnaamishinaam kisi ko nahin diya. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
tu    qatl   karti  rahi   mere   armaano  kaa har pal
magar  mujh  par  hi    har  qatl  kaa  ilzaam aayaa
main sirf muchhcar maarti hoon ji iske alawa kisi tarah ke qatl ka ilzaam mujh pe nahin hai Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
tujhe  sukuun   milaa   kisi   gair  ki  baahon  mein
mere   hisse   bas  aansuon  se bharaa jaam aayaa
tauba tauba ye kya ilzaam laga baithe ho mujh pe . main itni zaalim bhi nahin hoon ji icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
tadaptaa  rahaa  main  apne dhadkano ke shor se
mujhe tadaptaa huwaa  dekh tujhe aaraam aayaa
bander kitna bhi boodha ho jaaye gulati maare ga hi to main kya karoon chup chaap dekti rahi araam se Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
tu  mashoor  hoti  rahi  ameeron   ki  mehfil mein
is   gareeb   ke   hisse   to bas  kissa-e-aam aayaa
mujhe samajh kaya rakha hai main koi qeemti cheez hoon jo ameeron ke yaha nazar aao.n main bhi tum jaisi ek insaan hoon. mere bhi jazbaat hain, khawahishaat hain, khawaab hain.......aur main kisi ke hisse ki cheez nahin hoon samkjhe... bewakoof kahin ke icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
tujhe   talaash  rahi  mehlon  ke  shohrat   ki, aur
main  ek  kankad  jo kabhi  naa  tere  kaam aayaa

haan khawaab to mere hamesha oonche rahe per kankad ka main kya karoon gi ...! icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower


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nice......!
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2013, 03:26:59 AM »
बेहतरीन बहुत खूब
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«Reply #6 on: July 17, 2013, 08:22:22 AM »
bahut khoob hriday ji.
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«Reply #7 on: July 17, 2013, 11:14:23 AM »
superb
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«Reply #8 on: July 17, 2013, 11:58:15 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob hriday jee..behad khoobsurat..umda peshkash hai..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2013, 12:30:07 PM »
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waah waah waah. bahut achchi peshkash hriday ji. kya khoob likhe ho aap. ek dam dil ko choo gayi aapki yeh peshkash. hazaron dili daad is kalaam par.
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«Reply #11 on: July 18, 2013, 03:16:11 AM »
good one!
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«Reply #12 on: August 03, 2013, 03:11:21 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rohan ji.....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2013, 03:19:22 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Adil ji...!!!

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«Reply #14 on: August 08, 2013, 03:11:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shihab ji....!!!

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Bahut Khub Hriday Ji


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