Daastan-e-Dil

by nishi gahlaut on August 26, 2012, 07:14:14 AM
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Meri chahat tujhe paa na sake main,
Tujhse milne ke aaj bhi hai arzoo.
Tujhe paane ke aaj bhi hai justuju,
Kaise hue juda hum sanam
kaash moka mile toh dastaan tujhe Sunaynge hum.
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«Reply #1 on: August 26, 2012, 08:15:12 AM »
waaah nishi ji,
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«Reply #2 on: August 26, 2012, 08:38:39 AM »
Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 26, 2012, 07:14:14 AM

Meri chahat tujhe paa na sake main,
Tujhse milne ke aaj bhi hai arzoo.
Tujhe paane ke aaj bhi hai justuju,
Kaise hue juda hum sanam
kaash moka mile toh dastaan tujhe Sunaynge hum.





            DAASTAAN -E- DIL .HOGA MOHTARMA Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: August 26, 2012, 10:18:13 AM »
ok ji thank u Khamosh ji.... ab correct hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: August 26, 2012, 10:21:43 AM »
Thanks Saahill ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: August 26, 2012, 10:25:10 AM »
Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 26, 2012, 10:18:13 AM
ok ji thank u Khamosh ji.... ab correct hai... Usual Smile


               kah kar 'shamaa'abb loag mujhey pukaarney lagey yahaan nishi!
               mujhey khabar nahin, jalti rahi main to terey pyaar mein .!! Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
              
              
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«Reply #6 on: August 27, 2012, 04:12:45 AM »
bahut khoob nishi khamosh ji kaa correction bilkul theek hai God bless you
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«Reply #7 on: August 27, 2012, 07:49:39 AM »
Thank u Saini ji........
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