Daastan-e-ishq

by Ricky on July 28, 2004, 11:23:22 AM
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Toh daastain kuch iss tarah thi..

Apne khayalon ko mujhe batlaya to hota
Dil ke kuch raazo gar tune yun naa dabaya hota
Naa samjhtey be'wafa tumko hum,
Agar tune apne ansuon ko na chipaya hota

Ab hum par jab saare raaz khul gaye
Ab humey maloom hai tum hamesha se humarey hi rahe
Khud ko ab hum khatawaar mantey hai
Ke tere ghumo ke liye hum khudko zimmewar mantey hai

Khot humarey hi pyar mein hogi ke tujhe naa samajh sake
yun toh tum khud ba khud jalti rahi
Hum uss mohabbat ki aag ko naa samajh sake

Agar shak tha tumhe is Pyaar per toh tu jaanley aaj
Hum aiso me se nahin jo gham-e-ishq per dede jaan
Hum toh woh hain jo jee kar marenge aur rakhenge ishq laaj

Naa ansoo hain, naa yaadein hain hai , naa tum ho
ab hain to sirf hamarey khataen aur tasveer hai un ankhon ki,
keh rahi hain apni gahraiyon se jo
kash tumney ek baar toh jhanka hota inme,
kash tumney kuch apna kho kar dekha hoto inme,

Hum ghareeb-e-haalat in manzorein se ghuzrey
ke apno mein hote hue bhi anjaan thae
Zamane ho gaye iss dasta'an-e-ishq ke
Par anjaam wahi rahe!!!
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nishita
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2004, 01:13:53 PM »
good work
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2004, 07:30:53 PM »
nice Ricky
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2004, 01:26:40 PM »
Well thank you all.. Will see you in General discussion section..
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yasir_sensitive
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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2004, 07:42:06 PM »
good ricky....but how is mine



Torde har Aas ki Dori Anson may Kiya Rakha hai....
Ishq Mohabbat Batain hain So Baton may Kiya rakha hai...
Qismat may jo Likha hai akhir hokar rehta hai....
Chund Lakerain Uljhi sin Or Haton may Kiya rakha hai....
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2004, 07:48:57 PM »
bahoot khub Yasir

Rakh Umeed, ki umeed per duniya kayam hai
kar khud per yakin, yakin per duniya kayam hai.
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yasir_sensitive
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«Reply #6 on: July 30, 2004, 08:54:55 PM »
Thanx pooja ji
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amrita
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«Reply #7 on: July 23, 2005, 03:55:50 PM »
Mere jazbaaton ko jo tune samjha hota
toh apne khayalon ko batlaya hota.

khawafai ko tune bewafai samjha
kabhi poocha hota toh batlaya hota..

gairon ko apnaya, jab apno ne thukraya
kabhi poocha hota toh batlaya hota..

khuda bhi humse rutha kyon tera dil dukhaya
kabhi poocha hota toh batlaya hota..

tujhse tere haal ka sawaal tab hota agar mera mann behaal na hota
kabhi poocha hota toh batlaya hota...

mere ashq keh rahe the meri kahani jine samjh raha tha tu paani
kabhi poocha hota toh batlaya hota..
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: July 24, 2005, 06:16:32 PM »
wah kaya baat hai.....bahoot khoob amrita ji...........................................
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2005, 06:38:06 PM »
wah!!!!!!!   bahot  khoob...........Ricky.........Pooja,,,,Yasir......Amrita........

aaj  yeh  ishq  ki mujhse  baat  karte  hain
bina  sune woh meri jindagi  ka faisla kar dete hain
maine  yeh  umar   unke   naam likh  diya hai
phir bhi apne daaman  mein jagah  nahi dete hain
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #10 on: July 25, 2005, 05:35:06 AM »
Bahut Khoob  u all.........................cant quote all but damn nice !!!!!
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khushiiiii
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«Reply #11 on: July 25, 2005, 06:39:23 AM »
Quote from: "Ricky"
Toh daastain kuch iss tarah thi..

Apne khayalon ko mujhe batlaya to hota
Dil ke kuch raazo gar tune yun naa dabaya hota
Naa samjhtey be'wafa tumko hum,
Agar tune apne ansuon ko na chipaya hota

Ab hum par jab saare raaz khul gaye
Ab humey maloom hai tum hamesha se humarey hi rahe
Khud ko ab hum khatawaar mantey hai
Ke tere ghumo ke liye hum khudko zimmewar mantey hai

Khot humarey hi pyar mein hogi ke tujhe naa samajh sake
yun toh tum khud ba khud jalti rahi
Hum uss mohabbat ki aag ko naa samajh sake

Agar shak tha tumhe is Pyaar per toh tu jaanley aaj
Hum aiso me se nahin jo gham-e-ishq per dede jaan
Hum toh woh hain jo jee kar marenge aur rakhenge ishq laaj

Naa ansoo hain, naa yaadein hain hai , naa tum ho
ab hain to sirf hamarey khataen aur tasveer hai un ankhon ki,
keh rahi hain apni gahraiyon se jo
kash tumney ek baar toh jhanka hota inme,
kash tumney kuch apna kho kar dekha hoto inme,

Hum ghareeb-e-haalat in manzorein se ghuzrey
ke apno mein hote hue bhi anjaan thae
Zamane ho gaye iss dasta'an-e-ishq ke
Par anjaam wahi rahe!!!


veryyyy nice ...............Ricky.................
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: July 25, 2005, 03:43:59 PM »
Daastan-e-ishq kahty hai jise, bas itani si kahani hai
Ankho se giregi shabnam aor dhool mai mil jaani hai!!!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #13 on: July 25, 2005, 04:25:00 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Daastan-e-ishq kahty hai jise, bas itani si kahani hai
Ankho se giregi shabnam aor dhool mai mil jaani hai!!!!!


hmmmmmmmm wow  pooja.............2  line mein  kya  khoob  kaha....

yeh  kya kam  hai  ki mar  jaane per  duniya yaad  karti hai
kisi  ke  ishaq  mein duniya lutakar  hum  bhi  dekhenge..............nm
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2009, 04:39:33 AM »
Quote from: Ricky on July 28, 2004, 11:23:22 AM
Toh daastain kuch iss tarah thi..

Apne khayalon ko mujhe batlaya to hota
Dil ke kuch raazo gar tune yun naa dabaya hota
Naa samjhtey be'wafa tumko hum,
Agar tune apne ansuon ko na chipaya hota

Ab hum par jab saare raaz khul gaye
Ab humey maloom hai tum hamesha se humarey hi rahe
Khud ko ab hum khatawaar mantey hai
Ke tere ghumo ke liye hum khudko zimmewar mantey hai

Khot humarey hi pyar mein hogi ke tujhe naa samajh sake
yun toh tum khud ba khud jalti rahi
Hum uss mohabbat ki aag ko naa samajh sake

Agar shak tha tumhe is Pyaar per toh tu jaanley aaj
Hum aiso me se nahin jo gham-e-ishq per dede jaan
Hum toh woh hain jo jee kar marenge aur rakhenge ishq laaj

Naa ansoo hain, naa yaadein hain hai , naa tum ho
ab hain to sirf hamarey khataen aur tasveer hai un ankhon ki,
keh rahi hain apni gahraiyon se jo
kash tumney ek baar toh jhanka hota inme,
kash tumney kuch apna kho kar dekha hoto inme,

Hum ghareeb-e-haalat in manzorein se ghuzrey
ke apno mein hote hue bhi anjaan thae
Zamane ho gaye iss dasta'an-e-ishq ke
Par anjaam wahi rahe!!!


Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Ricky.. Bahoot Khoob!
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