~Dafnaoun kaise~ by Rahim:Shayri-E-Dard

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Diya hai tune mujhe jo dard woh main bhulaoun kaise,
Tere mere beech agayi dhooriyan main mitaoun kaise…

Ankhein bandd karta hoon toh teri yaadein mujhe rula deti hai,
Tu hi bata aisi tadap main; main apne apko sulaoun kaise…

Dusron kay liye tere paas bahaut waqt hai; bas mere liye nahin,
Ab aisi baichani main; main apne dil ko dilasa dilaoun kaise…

Ager saath chorrna tha toh haath thama hi kyun tune mera Zalim,
Samaj nahin ata meri rooh ko tujse main juda karaoun kaise…

Mat sochna kay jee nahin paega ‘Khamosh’ bin tere yeh zindagi,
Lachar hoon iss soch main kay teri yaadon ko main dafnaoun kaise…

~Rahim~


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Re: ~Dafnaoun kaise~ by Rahim

«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2010, 03:48:19 PM »

Dard Ko Lafzon Ki Maala me Piro Diya Ho Jaise Aapne Rahim Bhai.. Aapki Yeh Nazm choo gai Dil Ko.. Tadap, Intzaar, aur Is Dard Me Chupi Mohabbat.. har ek Cheez Ko Aapne Bakhoobi Apni is nazm Me Utaara hai..

Daad Kuboool karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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Re: ~Dafnaoun kaise~ by Rahim

«Reply #2 on: July 19, 2010, 08:12:02 PM »

Bahaut bahaut shukriya Vikas bhaijan...teh dil se shukriya waqt dene kay liye..bas jo dil ne kaha woh likh diya...!


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Re: ~Dafnaoun kaise~ by Rahim

«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2010, 02:30:38 AM »

bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Rahim bhai... bahut gehrai se dard ko shabdon me bayaan kiya hai aapne... bahut khoob dost...!!!


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Re: ~Dafnaoun kaise~ by Rahim

«Reply #4 on: July 20, 2010, 05:58:05 AM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on July 19, 2010, 03:28:46 PM

~Rahim~

Very Impressive Creation........Rahim Ji..dil se daad !


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Re: ~Dafnaoun kaise~ by Rahim

«Reply #5 on: July 20, 2010, 12:11:25 PM »

Shukriya Kapil dost aur Anshumali jee..Bahaut bahaut shukriya jee!!


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