Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish":Shayri-E-Dard

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Survey Results Year 2010-2011...
"The Indian police say that they receive over 2,500 reports
of bride-burning alone
every year while the number of dowry deaths is about 9000.
These numbers increase at a rate of 1-2% every year.
It is also a reason why many parents don’t want to have daughters,
because of the dowry they will have to shell out at her marriage,
and the stress they go through due to never-ending demands from her in-laws.
In fact dowry deaths of a newly married bride are regularly in the news

Today dowry is not the innocent practice that it started out as
but has turned into a social menace that cannot be reverted back
to its original form; hence it must be eradicated from our society permanently."

Iss Topic Par bahut Pehle Hi Socha Tha,Kuch Likhoon Par Phir LafzoN Ne Saath
Naa Diya Par jab Kal 'Satyamev Jayate" Ka Episode Dekh Raha Tha Khud Ba Khud
Lafz Judte Gaye Aur Yeh Kalaam Likh Gaya..Mujhe Kisi Ki Daad Se Zyaada Uss Ehsaas
Ko Jagaane Ki Khwaish Hai, Ke Koi Yeh Kalaam Padhe Aur Iss Prata Ko Rokne Ki Koshish
Mein Juud Sake..Shukriya

Kamre Mein Baithi Thi Dulhan Saj-Daj Kar Sharmaai Hui
Ek Ajnabi Se Bahut Si Umeedein Thi Lagaayi Hui

Aeane Mein Khud Ko Dekhti Rehti,Mann Hi Mann Khush Hoti..!!!!
Duniya Ki Saari Khushiyan Thi jaise Uske Dar par Aayi Hui

Laal Jode Mein Baiti,Haathon Mein Chudiyan Pehne
Chehre Par Muskaan,Aankhein Thi Kaajal Se Sajayi Hui

Phir Kuch Der Baad Awaaz Aayi,"Yeh Shaadi Nahi Ho Sakti"
yeh Suunkar Dulhan Ka Dil Toota Aur Thi Woh Ghabrayi Hui

Ladke Ke Maa-Baap Ne Kahaa, "Dahej Aur Chahiye"
Ladki WaloN Ne Socha Ab Baat Izzat pe Hai Ban Aayi Hui

Sab Kuch Bech-Baach kar Apni bitiyan Ki Shaadi Ki..!!!
Maa-Baap Ka Dil Tha Bhara Hua Aur Aankhein bhi Thi bhar Aayi hui

Beti Ne Paraye Ghar Ko Apna Ghar Samjha,Dil Se Seva Ki
Par Har kadam Par Apne TamanyoN ko Thi Woh Dabayi Hui

Dulhan Ka Mol...Ek Sofa, Ek Car, Ek Fridge, Ek Bistar..!!!!!!!
Yeh Kaisi Shaadi Jisme Dulhan Ki Boli Thi Paiso Se Lagaayi Hui

Har Baat Par Bahuu Ko Taane "Kya Diya Tere Maa-baap Ne??" !!!
Dulhan Ke Khwaab,Umeedeein,Khushiyan Sab Pal Bhar Me Parayi Hui

Dulhan Roti-tadapti Par Apne Maa-Baap Se Kuch Naa kehti
Iss Haal Mein Kya Uske pati Ko Bhi Koi Sharm Naa Thi Aayi Hui

"Khwaish" Puchta Hai Sabse,Kya yeh Shaadi hai yaa Saude-Baazi
Jahaa Pyaar Hona Chahiye Wahaan Hisaab-Kitaab Ki baatein

AAKHIR KISNE HAI YEH DAHEJ KI AAG LAGAYI HUI??

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2012, 11:45:47 AM »

khwaish ji aapne bahut hee buning topic par ye kalaam pesh karke qaabile taareef kaam kiyaa hai main dil se mubarakbaad detaa hoon


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2012, 11:49:36 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 21, 2012, 11:41:46 AM

Survey Results Year 2010-2011...
"The Indian police say that they receive over 2,500 reports
of bride-burning alone
every year while the number of dowry deaths is about 9000.
These numbers increase at a rate of 1-2% every year.
It is also a reason why many parents don’t want to have daughters,
because of the dowry they will have to shell out at her marriage,
and the stress they go through due to never-ending demands from her in-laws.
In fact dowry deaths of a newly married bride are regularly in the news

Today dowry is not the innocent practice that it started out as
but has turned into a social menace that cannot be reverted back
to its original form; hence it must be eradicated from our society permanently."

Iss Topic Par bahut Pehle Hi Socha Tha,Kuch Likhoon Par Phir LafzoN Ne Saath
Naa Diya Par jab Kal 'Satyamev Jayate" Ka Episode Dekh Raha Tha Khud Ba Khud
Lafz Judte Gaye Aur Yeh Kalaam Likh Gaya..Mujhe Kisi Ki Daad Se Zyaada Uss Ehsaas
Ko Jagaane Ki Khwaish Hai, Ke Koi Yeh Kalaam Padhe Aur Iss Prata Ko Rokne Ki Koshish
Mein Juud Sake..Shukriya

Kamre Mein Baithi Thi Dulhan Saj-Daj Kar Sharmaai Hui
Ek Ajnabi Se Bahut Si Umeedein Thi Lagaayi Hui

Aeane Mein Khud Ko Dekhti Rehti,Mann Hi Mann Khush Hoti..!!!!
Duniya Ki Saari Khushiyan Thi jaise Uske Dar par Aayi Hui

Laal Jode Mein Baiti,Haathon Mein Chudiyan Pehne
Chehre Par Muskaan,Aankhein Thi Kaajal Se Sajayi Hui

Phir Kuch Der Baad Awaaz Aayi,"Yeh Shaadi Nahi Ho Sakti"
yeh Suunkar Dulhan Ka Dil Toota Aur Thi Woh Ghabrayi Hui

Ladke Ke Maa-Baap Ne Kahaa, "Dahej Aur Chahiye"
Ladki WaloN se Socha Ab baat Izzat pe Hai Ban Aayi Hui

Sab Kuch Bech-Baach kar Apni bitiyan Ki Shaadi Ki..!!!
Maa-Baap Ka Dil Tha Bhara Hua Aur Aankhein bhi Thi bhar Aayi hui

Beti Ne Paraye Ghar Ko Apna Ghar Samjha,Dil Se Seva Ki
Par Har kadam Par Apne TamanyoN ko Thi Woh Dabayi Hui

Dulhan Ka Mol...Ek Sofa, Ek Car, Ek Fridge, Ek Bistar..!!!!!!!
Yeh Kaisi Shaadi Jisme Dulhan Ki Boli Thi Paiso Se Lagaayi Hui

Har Baat Par Bahu Ko Taane Ke, Kya Diya Tere Maa-baap Ne!!!
Dulhan Ke Khwaab,Umeedeein,Khushiyan Sab Parayi Hui

Dulhan Roti-tadapti Par Apne Maa-Baap Se Kuch Naa kehti
iss Haal Mein Kya Uske pati Ko Bhi Koi Sharm Naa Thi Aayi Hui

"Khwaish" Puchta Hai Sabse,Kya yeh Shaadi hai yaa Saude-baazi
Jahaa Pyaar Hona Chahiye Wahaan Hisaab-Kitaab Ki baatein

AAKHIR KISNE HAI YEH DAHEJ KI AAG LAGAYI HUI??

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

haan sahab ye bahut hi ghaur-o-fikr ki baat hai

bahut gambhir aur aham peshkash khawaish ji Clapping Smiley


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2012, 12:44:16 PM »

sahi kaha aapne khwaish ji,
betiyon ko abhishaap bana diya chand logo ne lalach ki khatir afsos to is baat ka hai chand log ab kuchh pratishat tak ho gaye hein aur apne aapko jamane ke saath chalta hua mahsoos karte hein,
aapki rachna bahut hi achhi ban padi hai aapke dil ki awaaj logon tak pahunche aur log apne vichar badlen aur betiyon ko vardaan samjhen, yahi meri kaamna hai

ghansham das ahuja


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2012, 02:54:12 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on May 21, 2012, 11:45:47 AM

khwaish ji aapne bahut hee buning topic par ye kalaam pesh karke qaabile taareef kaam kiyaa hai main dil se mubarakbaad detaa hoon

Saheb Aapne Apna Waqt Diya, yehi bahut Hai..

Aapka Bahut bahut Shukriya


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2012, 03:17:45 PM »

Kawaish ji . Aap mubarakbaad ke mustaheq hain ki apni poems mein aksar bahut aham muddon ko uthhate hain aur readers ko food for thought dete hain . Dahej samaj ki eik badi laanat hai jiska khatma jitni jaldi ho jaaye achha hai . Lekin iske liye na sirf aam raai bulki kuchh sakht samaaji paabandiyaan bhi zaroori hain .Isska eik pahloo bahut aham hai jo main share karna chaahoonga . Mujhe yaad padta hai mere eik dost eik ladki ke ishq mein giraftaar ho gaye thhe jo doosri zaat ki thhi aur jiske parents ke paas jahez mein dene ke liye kuchh khaas na thha . Mere dost darmiyaani haisyat lekin oonche khaandan ke thhe . Isliye unke parents rishte ke liye raazi nahi thhe . Mere dost ne hum kuchh doston ko apne parents ko convince karne ki zimmedari sounpi . Hum ne dost ke parents ko zaat mein farq per to convince kar liya lekin unki mother ki eik baat ka hamaare paas koi convincing jawaab na thha . Unki mother ne kaha thha : ' Mera eik ladka hai 3 ladkiyaan hain . Meri itni haisyat nahi ki in ladkiyon ka jahez de sakoon . Jo is ladke ke jahez mein loongi use baaqi ko niptaane mein madad milegi . Agar main jahez na loon to is baat ki kya guarantee hai ki mujhe mere jaise hi jahez na maangnewaale ladke mil jaayeinge aur meri ladkiyaan ghar mein baithi na rah jaayeingi' . Yeh samaaj ki eik kadvi haqeeqat hai . Satyamev Jayate mein eik achha hal bhi eik organization ki koshishon se mila hai jo society ki kuchh sanctions (e.g. unka decision ki aisi koi shaadi na attend kareinge jismein jahez liya jaata ho ) ki wajah se mumkin hua hai. ... Khuda kare aapki poem dahez ki laanat par sanjeeda soch paida kare . HASAN


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2012, 04:06:42 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on May 21, 2012, 11:49:36 AM

haan sahab ye bahut hi ghaur-o-fikr ki baat hai

bahut gambhir aur aham peshkash khawaish ji Clapping Smiley

Aapka Teh Dil Se Shukriya Adil ji, Jo Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..

Thanks a Lot For Your Appreciation


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2012, 04:18:05 PM »

Bahut khoob Khwaish ji
people have already expressed their positive views on the topic. you have really touched the hearts.

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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #9 on: May 22, 2012, 03:49:16 AM »

hmmm khawahish ji bahut gambhir mudda hai .....aur yeh aaj se nahi kaisalon se haamare desh ki sabse badi samsyon mein se ek hai...aapne apni nazm ke jariye ise utara hai bahut hi achhe tarike se ....par main sochta hoon ki yahan yoindia par itne log ise nahi padh payenge koi aisa tareeka aapnaye jisse net ki dunia ke alawa bhi log ise padhein sune aur is gambhir samasya ko samjh kar ise dur karne mein madad karein........aapke kuch kalm padhe maine har bar aap aamir khan ki tarah ek naye aur gambhir mudde par likhte hai ...jo na sirf kabil-e-tareef hai balki himmat-e-daad bhi hai.


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #10 on: May 22, 2012, 05:08:53 AM »

iss topic pr kuch kehne ka sahas hi nhi hua--
jo aapne kaha h wo sach hai--
jab kisi ke sapne tootte hain mahaz kuch rupayon ki khatir
kisi ki zindgi ujadi jati hai kuch apni lalach ko poori krne ke lie--
to iss pr kya keh skte h--ye aisi samvednaayen hain jo jite ji insaan ko laash bana deti h--
agr iss pratha ko rokna h tab mere khyal se Auraton ko jada jagruk hona hoga
logo ko khud smjhna hoga is bat ko--
kanoon to bht h pr issko rokna bht muskil h qki
aaj ka insaan paise ka pujari h!!

khus rahen


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2012, 05:27:06 AM »

bahut umda bahut khoob khwahishji....

Clapping Smiley

Views already expressed....girls need to be taught to live independently..education can help but change in psychology is reqd..which is lacking in our society....

U hv beautifully expressed ur views....daad....


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2012, 06:53:12 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on May 21, 2012, 11:41:46 AM

Survey Results Year 2010-2011...
"The Indian police say that they receive over 2,500 reports
of bride-burning alone
every year while the number of dowry deaths is about 9000.
These numbers increase at a rate of 1-2% every year.
It is also a reason why many parents don’t want to have daughters,
because of the dowry they will have to shell out at her marriage,
and the stress they go through due to never-ending demands from her in-laws.
In fact dowry deaths of a newly married bride are regularly in the news

Today dowry is not the innocent practice that it started out as
but has turned into a social menace that cannot be reverted back
to its original form; hence it must be eradicated from our society permanently."

Iss Topic Par bahut Pehle Hi Socha Tha,Kuch Likhoon Par Phir LafzoN Ne Saath
Naa Diya Par jab Kal 'Satyamev Jayate" Ka Episode Dekh Raha Tha Khud Ba Khud
Lafz Judte Gaye Aur Yeh Kalaam Likh Gaya..Mujhe Kisi Ki Daad Se Zyaada Uss Ehsaas
Ko Jagaane Ki Khwaish Hai, Ke Koi Yeh Kalaam Padhe Aur Iss Prata Ko Rokne Ki Koshish
Mein Juud Sake..Shukriya

Kamre Mein Baithi Thi Dulhan Saj-Daj Kar Sharmaai Hui
Ek Ajnabi Se Bahut Si Umeedein Thi Lagaayi Hui

Aeane Mein Khud Ko Dekhti Rehti,Mann Hi Mann Khush Hoti..!!!!
Duniya Ki Saari Khushiyan Thi jaise Uske Dar par Aayi Hui

Laal Jode Mein Baiti,Haathon Mein Chudiyan Pehne
Chehre Par Muskaan,Aankhein Thi Kaajal Se Sajayi Hui

Phir Kuch Der Baad Awaaz Aayi,"Yeh Shaadi Nahi Ho Sakti"
yeh Suunkar Dulhan Ka Dil Toota Aur Thi Woh Ghabrayi Hui

Ladke Ke Maa-Baap Ne Kahaa, "Dahej Aur Chahiye"
Ladki WaloN se Socha Ab baat Izzat pe Hai Ban Aayi Hui

Sab Kuch Bech-Baach kar Apni bitiyan Ki Shaadi Ki..!!!
Maa-Baap Ka Dil Tha Bhara Hua Aur Aankhein bhi Thi bhar Aayi hui

Beti Ne Paraye Ghar Ko Apna Ghar Samjha,Dil Se Seva Ki
Par Har kadam Par Apne TamanyoN ko Thi Woh Dabayi Hui

Dulhan Ka Mol...Ek Sofa, Ek Car, Ek Fridge, Ek Bistar..!!!!!!!
Yeh Kaisi Shaadi Jisme Dulhan Ki Boli Thi Paiso Se Lagaayi Hui

Har Baat Par Bahuu Ko Taane "Kya Diya Tere Maa-baap Ne??" !!!
Dulhan Ke Khwaab,Umeedeein,Khushiyan Sab Pal Bhar Me Parayi Hui

Dulhan Roti-tadapti Par Apne Maa-Baap Se Kuch Naa kehti
Iss Haal Mein Kya Uske pati Ko Bhi Koi Sharm Naa Thi Aayi Hui

"Khwaish" Puchta Hai Sabse,Kya yeh Shaadi hai yaa Saude-Baazi
Jahaa Pyaar Hona Chahiye Wahaan Hisaab-Kitaab Ki baatein

AAKHIR KISNE HAI YEH DAHEJ KI AAG LAGAYI HUI??

~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2012, 08:37:55 AM »

Dahej ek aisa roop bhi h jisme ye lagta hai var paksh ko ki unhone to bete ko ghar diya ,padhaya likhaya ,mehnat ki kharcha kiya.aur isko pati banakar iss ladki ke hawaale kar diya.iss ladki ke hisse mein jo aaya wo kahan hai.??
Bus yahi mansikta rehti hai var paksh ki.Iska solution bataaye please....

aapne bahut sunder tareeke se pesh kiya hai ek ladki ki feelings ko.
daaad kubool kijiye.


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Re: Dahej Ki Aag 'Shaadi Yaa Saudebaazi??' "Khwaish"

«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2012, 10:03:28 AM »

Quote from: ahujagd on May 21, 2012, 12:44:16 PM

Ghansham Ji Aapke Khayalaat Bade Nek Aur Khoobsurat Hai..

Aapne Apna Waqt Diya..Aapka Bahut Bahut Shukriya


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