Dar Lagta Hai

by thycreator on June 11, 2007, 06:06:44 PM
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Pooja
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«Reply #15 on: June 13, 2007, 08:17:41 PM »
wah kay abaat hai!! bahoot tadap hai apki lines mai!!

dard mil ahai shabdo mai nikal atta hai
armaano ka lahu, ankhon se nikal atta hai
kami rah gai kaya, yah sawal her baar kiya
her baar, ek khamosh, jawab chala atta hai
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thycreator
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«Reply #16 on: June 13, 2007, 09:29:01 PM »
wah wah.........bahut khoob.......

Ulajh gayi hai jindagi jane kin sawalon mein,
Jo jawab maine dhoondhe itne saalon mein..

Aaj jab taulta hu main toh wahi ka wahi khada,
Jane kya sabz-e-baag banaye khayalon mein..

Har koi yahan gumgeen, ek khushi ko tarse sab,
Andhera hi andhera hai yahan ab toh ujalon mein..
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thycreator
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«Reply #17 on: June 14, 2007, 05:30:21 PM »
Koi toh ek chehra ho jiske dekh dil sukoon paye,
Kab talak iss mayoos mahaul mein jeeya jaaye..
Koi toh dhoondh laye wo hansi jo kho gayi kahin,
Kis tarah ab insaa ko jeena seekhaya jaaye..
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #18 on: June 15, 2007, 05:24:29 AM »
mil jaye akagar koi yuhi raah chalte humsafar
tho har koi mohbaat mea Diwana ban firta yahan
ban jaatein har kone pe mobahht ki minar
har koi Shahjaahn aur Mumtaj kehlata yahan

Dil lagana azaan bahoot hai ''yaaro''
par umbar ka saath nahi mil pata yahan
Dil ka humraaz ban kar jaatein hai log kai vaade
par apne hi vaso aur kasamo pe ki nahi tik paata yahan
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thycreator
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«Reply #19 on: June 15, 2007, 05:27:20 PM »
Nice one divya........well written....
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«Reply #20 on: June 15, 2007, 08:00:28 PM »
APNI BEBASI PE
AAJ RONA AAYA
GAIRO KO NAHI
HUMNE TO APNO KO AZMAAYA
HAR ROTE HUE,
KO EK MUSKAAN DI MAINE
PAR JAB KHUD ROYA
TO KHUD KO TANHA PAYA
HAR DOST KI TANHAI
DOOR KI MAINE
PAR KHUD KO HAR MOD PE AKELA PAYA
YEH ANJAAM HI SAHI..
ZINDAGI KE SAFAR KA
CHALO ZINDAGI SE
KUCH TO MAIN SIKH PAYA
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nikki
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«Reply #21 on: June 16, 2007, 07:09:08 PM »
wonderfull work Amit ji..baaki sabne bhi superbb likha hai

sabse kehte firte hain hum ke darne ki koi baat nahi
magar na jaane kyun khud ko hi darr lagta hai

khone ke liye kuch mere paas nahi
magar fir bhi darr lagta hai

dua to kissi ki bhi asar karti nahi mujhpar
magar fir bhi badua ke naam se darr lagat hai

iss dil-e-nadaan ko samjhaon to kaise samjhaon
kahin yeh galat na samajh le..darr lagta hai
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thycreator
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«Reply #22 on: June 17, 2007, 06:51:26 AM »
Thanks a lot Nikki.............bahut khoob likha hai apne...........Winking

Halat hi kuch aise hain ki hum kuch kar nahi sakte,
Ghut ghut kar jee rahe hai lekin mar nahi sakte...
Nibahayi humne wafa hi sada, muhabbat ya jindagi,
Inn dono se koi bewafai hum kar nahi sakte...
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thycreator
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«Reply #23 on: June 29, 2007, 06:29:21 PM »
Dard ka ye aalam hum sahe bhi toh kaise,
Uss dilbar se juda hum rahe bhi toh kaise,
Ye sach hai ki wo mera ho nahi sakega phir bhi,
Usko iss dil se juda hum kare bhi toh kaise...
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Pooja
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«Reply #24 on: February 15, 2008, 07:15:18 PM »
bahoot khoob nikki, khwaish ji and Amit!!
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thycreator
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«Reply #25 on: April 26, 2008, 04:59:34 AM »
Thanks a lot Pooja ji....aaj bahut dino ke bad yahan aane ka mauka mila.....posts check kar raha hun.....silsila aage badhaiye kabhi toh....aap toh bahut khub keh ke chup ho jati hain.
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Shikha12
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«Reply #26 on: April 26, 2008, 05:05:03 AM »
Nice Replies Amit, Pooja di, Sophi, Nikki and Khwaish... Applause
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thycreator
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«Reply #27 on: April 26, 2008, 05:06:49 AM »
Nice Replies Amit, Pooja di, Sophi, Nikki and Khwaish... Applause

Thanks a lot Mahiya ji....aap hi kuch likh dijiye, hum silsila aage badha lenge...Usual Smile
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: April 28, 2008, 09:19:30 PM »
Thanks a lot Pooja ji....aaj bahut dino ke bad yahan aane ka mauka mila.....posts check kar raha hun.....silsila aage badhaiye kabhi toh....aap toh bahut khub keh ke chup ho jati hain.

likhne ka mood hi nahi ban raha hai.... yah do week busy hu uske baad jaroor kuch likhugi
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thycreator
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«Reply #29 on: April 28, 2008, 10:23:51 PM »
Koi bat nahi....main wait kar lunga apke mood ka...Usual Smile
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