dard ban kar lafz...

by Affluent on October 27, 2007, 05:49:23 PM
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Eh Waqt! tu mujhe kahan le aaya hai
na koi manzil, na sathi humne paya hai

kaanch se sapne,ek-ek kar tootein hain
dard ban kar lafz, kagaz par utar aaya hai
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2007, 05:55:16 PM »
Affluent

Bahut khoob !

Nice one !

Welcome to Yoindia !
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2007, 08:16:45 PM »
Welcome To YoIndia!
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2007, 01:12:01 PM »
Bahoot Khoob Likha Hai Aapne Affluent Ji,.
Allah Khair Kare,.

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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2007, 01:16:50 PM »
Na Dard Se Ab Gila Hai, Na Shikayat Hai Gham Se,.
Bas Jee Rahe Hain Sab Ko Gale Lagaa Kar Hum,.

_________________________________-Jaanasheen-

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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2007, 03:21:33 PM »
bahoot khoob Affluent and lil bro
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«Reply #6 on: October 29, 2007, 03:27:11 PM »
Shukriya Didi,.

Humse Na Poocho Tum Kitne Dard Dil Mein Samaaye Hain,.
Hum To "Jaanasheen" Dard Ke Saath Jeete Aaaye Hain,.

_______________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #7 on: October 29, 2007, 03:29:03 PM »
Good one Lil Bro...

Dard mai roye hai hum, ya khud dard ko rulaya hai
Na puche ab koi sawal, her jawab humne  bhulaya hai!!!
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2007, 04:42:40 AM »
Thanks again Rajbir and  Ravi, Jaanasheen & Pooja

Chaand lamhe aor, phir zakhm bhar jayega
reh jayega daag, jo umbhar humein jalayega
jo dil tujh par gumaan kiya karta tha pehle,
abh tera naam sunte hi, sharam se jhuk jayega
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2007, 07:15:15 AM »
Good one Affluent.. N Jaansheen... keep it upp..

Welcome Affluent to YOINDIA

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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2007, 03:56:29 AM »
Thanks deepika for welcoming and commenting on my writing.
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«Reply #11 on: November 04, 2007, 05:10:43 PM »
Shukriya Didi,.
Deepika Ji,.
Thank U,.
Aap Bhi Agar Kuch LIkh Kar Jaate To Seekhne Ka Maukha Milta,.
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«Reply #12 on: November 06, 2007, 08:59:20 AM »
dekhu main jidhar lage khali-khali
suuni yeh dharti, ambar khali-khali

beshkeemti leebaz mein lipate sunehri armaan
haste huye chehre,lekin andar se khali-khali

dekhti hai mujhe,jo uthe woh har nigaah-e-pashema'
lub par hazaron shikayatein,lekin juban khali-khali

'khayalon' ke samundar mein hum toh loote iss qadar
baacha hai jism ab jahan mein,dil-rooh se khali-khali
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«Reply #13 on: November 08, 2007, 01:00:45 PM »
nice One affluent Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #14 on: November 11, 2007, 08:39:52 PM »
thanks dost

ek ek lamha kabhi tere intezar ke mukhatib tha
abh sirf ghutan ghi ghutan har ghadi paayi hai

na jaane kis rang mein rang kar khush hai teri duniya
mere charon aor toh gehri  tanhai hi tanhai chaayi hai

sambhal kar bhi na sambhle, yeh mera awara dil
choot chahe tumse humne jism-o-rooh tak khaayi hai

zakhm de kar kitna nirdayi ban gaya hai tu sanam
kya tu jaane nahi, maut se badtar ,yaar ki bewafai hai
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