apki shayri ke liye wah likhna acha nahi lag raha hai Affluent, kyun ki apki kavita mai shabd apke dil se aa rahe hai aor kisi ke dard-e-bayan per wah kaise likh du!!!
Apne bahoot hi ache shabdo main, apne dard ko, apni kavitao mai sameta hai!!! Good job!!!
Her lamha ek hi khayal, her lamha ek hi sawal
Kyun kaise yah sab mujhse ho gaya
Kaise yah dil itna nirdai ho gaya
Kyun nahi suni maine apne dil ki
Kyun mera her ek armaan so gaya!!
Khayalo ki nagari mai, mai aor mera rajkumar
Kaise mere khayalo se juda ho gaya
Khali hai nigah, khali khayal, aor wo hi sawal
Na hai koi jawab, dil mai bas her pal rahta hai ek malal
Thak kar kismat ko de deti hu sara dosh
Apne hi diye dard mai rahta nahi koi hosh
Zindagi lagne lagi hai bahoot bada bojh
Ek ek kar ke nikalta ja raha hai her ek roj (din)!!!
samjh nahi aa raha tha, kis lehaj se aap ne yeh kavita mujhe reply ke roop mein di. issi liye jawb dena bohaat kathin lag raha tha, jitna samjh aaya apko reply dene ki koshish ki. hope i had done justice with my words.
pathar dil ki nagri wale
pathar hi ban jate hain
aadhe adhure khawab dikha kar
massomiyat woh loot jate hain
khud karte hain izhar-e-vaffa
lalach apni ko nakab pehnate hain
batate hain usse "tumsa koi nahi"
aor mann hi mann muskaate hain
jab tadapta hai woh phir insaan
athaas uska,mehfil mein sunate hain
Ishq,gudda-guddi ka koi kheil hai jaise
nanhe rajkumar ki kahaniyan banate hain
karte rehte hain umbhar bewafai aoro sung
magar,khud sung hui bewafai ki baat dohrate hain
khud ke mann par tinke sa bhoj nahi,
aur zamaane ko apni hasti 'jogan' dikhate hain
on eTI community..
