***dard bankar baste hain***

by kaushikbhawna008 on August 25, 2008, 06:54:34 AM
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kal tak jo dil k paas tha
jisko meri har saans ka ehsaas tha
wahi aaj bankar diwane kisi aur k
aur hamse khwabon mei bhi ajnabi ki tarah milte hain

haan shaq tha hamei wo wafaa na kar paayega
par sochte the wo dil mera najuk na tod paayega
par jhoota har waham mera nikla
jise kehte the ham kabhi apna
wahi harjaayi nikla

rahe dunia khushiyon se bhari
fir bhi yahi dua ham karte hain
wo mile gairon se to kya hua
par dil mei mere wo aaj bhi dard bankar baste hain
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: August 25, 2008, 07:19:05 AM »
GOOD WORK,
KAUSHIK JI,
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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baadal102
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«Reply #2 on: August 25, 2008, 08:15:23 AM »
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bahut hi aacha likha hai bhawna ji






Baadal
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #3 on: August 25, 2008, 08:21:59 AM »
shukriya shally ji and baadal ji
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sayani kuri
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2008, 08:36:16 AM »
wah bohat umda kalaam hai...
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2008, 08:46:42 AM »
shukriya ji
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2008, 08:49:10 AM »
Very nice lines bhawana dear... Clapping Smiley
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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2008, 09:09:13 AM »
shukriya honeyrose ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2008, 12:26:14 PM »
it could be much better just dont hurry kaushik
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2009, 07:44:28 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Kaushikbhawan ji mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2009, 03:06:46 AM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work bhawna!!
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