Dard, dil key bahut qareeb rahaa!

by abdbundeli on July 03, 2008, 06:08:58 AM
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'Haal apnaa, barhaa ajeeb rahaa!
 Dard, dil key bahut qareeb rahaa!!'

                  - abd bundeli
 
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Talat
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2008, 11:46:28 AM »
Nice lines Abd Ji !!
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2008, 02:31:42 PM »
Nice lines Prakash jee!! Pahli baar apki thread main, apke sath likhne ki koshish kar rahi hu, Asha hai apko yah lines pasand ayegi!!

Jitna chaha dil ne uske pass rahna
utna he dil, dard ke kareeb raha!!
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #3 on: July 04, 2008, 02:12:55 AM »
Pooja ji,
  'Bas, usee dard key liye to log jeetey hain!
   Dard hota na, to 'woh dard' bhi naheen hotaa!!
   Jo qaraabat mein, us haseen key, chain miltaa hai;
   Woh hizr-e-yaar mein, bey shak, kabhi naheen hotaa!!'

                                  - abd bundeli
   
 
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Sonia01
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«Reply #4 on: July 04, 2008, 02:53:28 AM »
Pooja ji,
  'Bas, usee dard key liye to log jeetey hain!
   Dard hota na, to 'woh dard' bhi naheen hotaa!!
   Jo qaraabat mein, us haseen key, chain miltaa hai;
   Woh hizr-e-yaar mein, bey shak, kabhi naheen hotaa!!'

                                  - abd bundeli -

very good ABD jee and pooja di
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Sonia01
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«Reply #5 on: July 04, 2008, 02:54:59 AM »
Aankh mein khushak ho gaye aansoo
Ek katra lahoo ka dil main nahi
Kaunsa jurm hai mere liye
Kis kadar tarang ho gayi hai zameen..
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #6 on: July 04, 2008, 04:26:11 AM »
Quote:
Aankh mein khushak ho gaye aansoo
Ek katra lahoo ka dil main nahi
Kaunsa jurm hai mere liye
Kis kadar tarang ho gayi hai zameen..

Sonia01 ji,
'Khudaa karey, na kabhi khushk houn uyoon unkey!
 Woh, mujhey deykheyn, aur mein bhi unhain dekhoon, jiyun!!
 Uyoon sey uyoon miltey hi, khudaa ki qasam,
 Ashk-e-aab-e-hayaat roz jiyun, roz piyun!!'
       Apnee aakhree do lainoun ko dobaaraa parhney ki takleef gawaaraa keejiyegaa, mujhey aisaa lagtaa hai jaisey kuchh chhoot gayaa hai (muaaf keejiyegaa)! Aapkeen pahleen do laaineyn bejmisaal hain!




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