Dard hai yaadon ka jaal

by vikas2210 on February 14, 2010, 01:37:36 PM
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Doston kuch likh raha hun aaj bahut dino ke baad. Sayad din aisa hai.Yaadon se pareshan ho gaya hun

Umeed hai aapka saath milega.



aaj phir unka chehra dikhne laga
jab bhi dekha aaina chehra unka dikhna laga
na soya jata hai na hi jaga jata hai
har pal chehra unka dikhne laga

paayr hai hai judaai ki tadap
par ab aur nahi jeeya jata hai
chehre main unke main phir khne laga
aaj phir chehra unka dikhne laga

Meri mehboob ke baat ki kuch aisi rahi
har pal main unki yad mai ghulne laga
wo sirf mer hai yeh sochne laga
main phir behkne laga unka chehra dekihne laga

Ajj ujhe phir unka chenra dkhne laga
har chehre main main unko dhundhne laga
main unko baht yaad karne laga
aaine main unko dekhne laga.

missing my jaan very much.

vikas
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #1 on: February 14, 2010, 02:31:08 PM »
MINDBLOWING VIKAS JI.... icon_thumleft

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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: February 14, 2010, 03:44:46 PM »
Quote from: thinkhattk on February 14, 2010, 02:31:08 PM
MINDBLOWING VIKAS JI.... icon_thumleft

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Thanks ji...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: February 14, 2010, 03:53:06 PM »
Awww. thats so beautiful.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Vikas.. You always Rocks... This is really Beautiful !
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riyaz106
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«Reply #4 on: February 14, 2010, 04:29:31 PM »
Vikas ji badi sundar kavita likhi hai aapne. Bahut achhi lagi.
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2010, 11:46:24 AM »
Bahut Khub Vikas Ji
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vikas2210
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«Reply #6 on: February 15, 2010, 11:59:33 AM »
thaks Sophi , Riyaz and Rishi.. aane ke liye or pasand karne ke liye.

I am greatfull of u all........
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cara
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«Reply #7 on: February 15, 2010, 12:16:30 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI       VIKAS2210 JI......

DARD HAI YAADON KA JAAL
DARD HAI TOOTE HUE WADON KA KAMAAL
DARD JUDAI KA ASAR CHOD JAATA HAI ITNA GHEHRA
HAR SHAY MAIN NAZAR AATA HAI UNKA CHEHERA..
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«Reply #8 on: February 15, 2010, 12:37:05 PM »
Quote from: cara on February 15, 2010, 12:16:30 PM
KYA BAAT HAI       VIKAS2210 JI......

DARD HAI YAADON KA JAAL
DARD HAI TOOTE HUE WADON KA KAMAAL
DARD JUDAI KA ASAR CHOD JAATA HAI ITNA GHEHRA
HAR SHAY MAIN NAZAR AATA HAI UNKA CHEHERA..


thanks CARA and wooow what a beautiful lines.

jeete hain muh uss ghadi ke intezaar
jab aaine se baahar aaye unka chehra
le sakun main haathon main unka chehra
ek baar jo aajaye aaine se baahar unka chehra.
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poppoetry
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«Reply #9 on: February 17, 2010, 03:59:24 PM »
Quote from: vikas2210 on February 14, 2010, 01:37:36 PM
Doston kuch likh raha hun aaj bahut dino ke baad. Sayad din aisa hai.Yaadon se pareshan ho gaya hun

Umeed hai aapka saath milega.



aaj phir unka chehra dikhne laga
jab bhi dekha aaina chehra unka dikhna laga
na soya jata hai na hi jaga jata hai
har pal chehra unka dikhne laga

paayr hai hai judaai ki tadap
par ab aur nahi jeeya jata hai
chehre main unke main phir khne laga
aaj phir chehra unka dikhne laga

Meri mehboob ke baat ki kuch aisi rahi
har pal main unki yad mai ghulne laga
wo sirf mer hai yeh sochne laga
main phir behkne laga unka chehra dekihne laga

Ajj ujhe phir unka chenra dkhne laga
har chehre main main unko dhundhne laga
main unko baht yaad karne laga
aaine main unko dekhne laga.

missing my jaan very much.

vikas


Bahut khoob vikas ji.......ek choti si koshish meri taraf se.....
ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi......

 
Waqt ka wo naazuk daur tha , wo pal hi tha jo kamzor tha
Beet gya wo daur bura , khud ko tu zra samjha
 
Tere apne hai sang tere,saath dege hamesha tera
Khushiyon se jod nata , gamon se tu door ho jaa
 
Sache dil se jo maange dua,sunta hai uski wo khuda
Dil hai tera saccha,toh kyu tu ghabraaya hai khada
 
Maan le ek baat tu meri,har pal tu muskuraa......
Bas muskuraa.........Bas muskurra........tu muskuraa.........
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Talat
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2010, 04:02:30 PM »
Quote from: vikas2210 on February 14, 2010, 01:37:36 PM
Doston kuch likh raha hun aaj bahut dino ke baad. Sayad din aisa hai.Yaadon se pareshan ho gaya hun

Umeed hai aapka saath milega.



aaj phir unka chehra dikhne laga
jab bhi dekha aaina chehra unka dikhna laga
na soya jata hai na hi jaga jata hai
har pal chehra unka dikhne laga

paayr hai hai judaai ki tadap
par ab aur nahi jeeya jata hai
chehre main unke main phir khne laga
aaj phir chehra unka dikhne laga

Meri mehboob ke baat ki kuch aisi rahi
har pal main unki yad mai ghulne laga
wo sirf mer hai yeh sochne laga
main phir behkne laga unka chehra dekihne laga

Ajj ujhe phir unka chenra dkhne laga
har chehre main main unko dhundhne laga
main unko baht yaad karne laga
aaine main unko dekhne laga.

missing my jaan very much.

vikas



Very touching Vikas...Bohot Khoob......
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Talat
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2010, 04:03:02 PM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on February 17, 2010, 03:59:24 PM
Bahut khoob vikas ji.......ek choti si koshish meri taraf se.....
ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi......

 
Waqt ka wo naazuk daur tha , wo pal hi tha jo kamzor tha
Beet gya wo daur bura , khud ko tu zra samjha
 
Tere apne hai sang tere,saath dege hamesha tera
Khushiyon se jod nata , gamon se tu door ho jaa
 
Sache dil se jo maange dua,sunta hai uski wo khuda
Dil hai tera saccha,toh kyu tu ghabraaya hai khada
 
Maan le ek baat tu meri,har pal tu muskuraa......
Bas muskuraa.........Bas muskurra........tu muskuraa.........

Nice reply Nikhaar
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poppoetry
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«Reply #12 on: February 18, 2010, 05:05:58 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on February 17, 2010, 04:03:02 PM
Nice reply Nikhaar
Thanx a lotttttt Celmiran ji
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vikas2210
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«Reply #13 on: March 20, 2010, 07:47:25 AM »
Quote from: Nikhaar on February 17, 2010, 03:59:24 PM
Bahut khoob vikas ji.......ek choti si koshish meri taraf se.....
ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi......

 
Waqt ka wo naazuk daur tha , wo pal hi tha jo kamzor tha
Beet gya wo daur bura , khud ko tu zra samjha
 
Tere apne hai sang tere,saath dege hamesha tera
Khushiyon se jod nata , gamon se tu door ho jaa
 
Sache dil se jo maange dua,sunta hai uski wo khuda
Dil hai tera saccha,toh kyu tu ghabraaya hai khada
 
Maan le ek baat tu meri,har pal tu muskuraa......
Bas muskuraa.........Bas muskurra........tu muskuraa.........


thanks and nice one tooo Nikhar ji.....
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vikas2210
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«Reply #14 on: March 20, 2010, 07:48:15 AM »
Thanks a lot Talat....
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