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Dard hi dard zindagi me aaj aur kuch bhi nahi hai
naseeb me aaj shayad umeedo ko koi kiran nahi hai
khamosh dil ko aaj dene sada koi nahi hai
khamoshi se pile gam iske siwa koi vupaay nahi hai...
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2007, 07:43:19 AM » |
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kya kahun kisse kahun dil ki baat aaj main
dard hi dard isme aur kuch bhi nahi hai
bechain karke aaj mujhe chor ke
rukh more liye wo yehan nahi hai
tarap meri dil ki ansooni kar ke
dekho aaj wo hame chor gaya hai
ankho me meri ansoo deke
apni duniya me dekho wo mashur baitha hai..
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«Reply #2 on: May 20, 2007, 11:16:28 PM » |
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wah kay abaat hai Punam ji... bahoot hi acha likha hai apne!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2007, 11:28:45 PM » |
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Punam
Bahut khoob !
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2007, 07:19:40 AM » |
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bohaat khoob punam
khumar-e-gum mein jeena ab toh mumkin nahi
tujhe bhool kar jeena ,mujh mein yeh himmat nahi
tu nahi toh teri sautan maut ko gale lag jaunga main
inteja hai yehi khuda se meri,woh bhi kahin teri tarah nikale beawfaa nahi
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2007, 07:22:13 AM » |
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bohaat khoob punam
khumar-e-gum mein jeena ab toh mumkin nahi
tujhe bhool kar jeena ,mujh mein yeh himmat nahi
tu nahi toh teri sautan maut ko gale lag jaunga main
inteja hai yehi khuda se meri,woh bhi kahin teri tarah nikale beawfaa nahi
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2007, 09:46:11 AM » |
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Thanx pooja ji...
Raj ji...
and Tkgng...sorry aap ka naam mujhe pata nahi ajeeb lag raha tha yeh naam so short kardi....
thanx sab ko...chalo hum khush naseeb hain aap log yeh pare...aur aap ko acha laga...
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2007, 09:50:17 AM » |
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koi baat nahi..kissi bhi naam se bula lo....
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2007, 09:51:42 AM » |
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ye zeher-e-mohabbat utar chuka hai nas nas me hamari
iss zeher ka asar se bachna na mumkin hai hamari
chor gaya ujaar ke jo duniya hamari
aa jata hai woh milne tasawar me hamari
bahot zakhm de chuka hai dil pe hamari
dard hi dard naseeb me kyun hai hamari
khuda ke dar se bhi laut aaya dua hamari
aaj koi nahi sath dard ke siva shayad yehi likha hai kismat me hamari...
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2007, 09:58:18 AM » |
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koi baat nahi..kissi bhi naam se bula lo.... Nahi ji plz apna naam toh batayiye.. sab ko pata hoga ..par main nayi aayi..aur yehan pehli baar aap se mili...plzzzz |
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2007, 10:01:59 AM » |
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kabhi humara naam hota tha asaam mein
ajj na jaane kayun pairon ki khak sa ho gaya
koi rakhta tha humein kabhi ankho ka noor bana kar
phir na jaane kayun usski kadmo ki dhool ho gaya
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2007, 10:25:35 AM » |
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Dil me likh li hun sirf aap hi ke naam
aap hi ke naam din raat leti hun
ankhe kabhi bhi dhoka de sakti
isliye naam dil pe likh rakhi hun...
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2007, 02:22:26 PM » |
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nice punam!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2007, 05:46:18 AM » |
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Thanx pooja ji...
Her raha aasan hota hai
par yeh ishq ki raha kyun nahi
iss raha pe pyaar bhi hai par isme
dard hi dard kyun khushi nahi
mil jate hai do dil magar
par kismat unki sath deti kyun nahi
hay khuda tune dil hi na banata
banaya to ishq ke raha aasaan karta kyun nahi...
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2007, 05:38:44 AM » |
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Punam nice .. TKGKNGK.. Bhaut khub
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