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«Reply #15 on: May 23, 2007, 09:56:54 AM » |
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Thanx paani ji...
chandni raato me milti hun saya se apni
bas ab sath rehe gaya yehi
hum toh woh musafhir hain
jinka koi manjil hi nahi
sehena hai kanto ke chuban bhi..
mohabbat ka wasiyat hai yehi
her mode par milti hun gam se...
ab toh samjhti hun meri takdeer yehi..
DARD HI DARD dil me ab to
keheti hai jaise teri mukaddar hai yehi...
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«Reply #16 on: May 23, 2007, 10:25:33 AM » |
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Punam
kya dard hai !
Excellent =D>
Good going !
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«Reply #17 on: May 24, 2007, 06:35:10 AM » |
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Punam
kya dard hai !
Excellent =D>
Good going ! tanku ji ... bas aap ki dua se...koshish kar rahi kuch likhne ki.... |
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«Reply #18 on: May 24, 2007, 06:36:39 AM » |
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kisse kya kahu aaj main
roothi thi sargamo se main
barbaadi ke apsane me
bolo kis kis ka naam leti main
pathar dil hai jag wale
kaise samjhaun kaisi hun bin aap ki main...
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«Reply #19 on: May 24, 2007, 10:59:18 AM » |
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Punam...very nice...keep writing..... and welcome to Yoindia  |
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«Reply #20 on: May 25, 2007, 07:13:55 AM » |
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Punam...very nice...keep writing..... and welcome to Yoindia thanx talat ji... |
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«Reply #21 on: May 25, 2007, 07:14:46 AM » |
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mila itna dard zindagi me
koi sapna dekhne se darti hun
aaj toh main apne aap se darti hun
dil me hai dar hi dard itna ke ...
isse unse chupane ki koshish karti rehti hun
hotho pe unka muskaan bani rehe yahi dua main karti hun...
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«Reply #22 on: May 25, 2007, 08:58:57 AM » |
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mila itna dard zindagi me
koi sapna dekhne se darti hun
aaj toh main apne aap se darti hun
dil me hai dar hi dard itna ke ...
isse unse chupane ki koshish karti rehti hun
hotho pe unka muskaan bani rehe yahi dua main karti hun... bhoot bhoot hee achal likha hai aapne keep writing netra... |
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«Reply #23 on: May 26, 2007, 09:09:16 AM » |
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mila itna dard zindagi me
koi sapna dekhne se darti hun
aaj toh main apne aap se darti hun
dil me hai dar hi dard itna ke ...
isse unse chupane ki koshish karti rehti hun
hotho pe unka muskaan bani rehe yahi dua main karti hun... diya hai dard jamane ne tujhe rahe aashiki me
ham bhee hooye the kattal kabhi ishk kee rah me
dard baat lo tum ham bategne khushi jo hai daman me mere
karlenge kabool un kanto ko jo biche the kabhi raho me tere
netra..
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«Reply #24 on: May 28, 2007, 06:39:17 AM » |
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mila itna dard zindagi me
koi sapna dekhne se darti hun
aaj toh main apne aap se darti hun
dil me hai dar hi dard itna ke ...
isse unse chupane ki koshish karti rehti hun
hotho pe unka muskaan bani rehe yahi dua main karti hun... bhoot bhoot hee achal likha hai aapne keep writing netra... Thanx Netra ji...aap ke bhi kuch kam nahi..bahot acha likhte ho aap... |
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«Reply #25 on: May 28, 2007, 06:44:06 AM » |
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mera gam ka kya tum uspe na jana
tum khush raho aur mujhe bhul jana
yaad tumhari kafi hai bas yehi chor jana
biti huyi her pal ko yehi dafhna ke chale jana...
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«Reply #26 on: May 28, 2007, 08:13:53 AM » |
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rahe manjil par tham gaye the kadam sans lene ko
dekha haseena ko ek pal ko sans bee tham gayee thi
ham to chale jayenge le kar tasveer ashik ki dil me
badee muddat se se ek tasveer basayee thee sapno me
n maloom tha utar ayee hai wo pari, aaj mere hee dil me
aaj samne hai wo par fir bhee tasveer hee lejaunga basakar dil me
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«Reply #27 on: May 29, 2007, 09:01:56 AM » |
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najar se najar chudana muskil ho gaya..
dil deke aaj hume yeh kya ho gaya..
woh hai ki unhe bas apni pari hai
mujh se jyada unko meri tasveer pasand aa gaya...
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«Reply #28 on: May 29, 2007, 09:21:47 AM » |
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najar se najar chudana muskil ho gaya..
dil deke aaj hume yeh kya ho gaya..
woh hai ki unhe bas apni pari hai
mujh se jyada unko meri tasveer pasand aa gaya... dekha tha tasvir ko ashkik huye the jab ham
tum to chale gye the sharmakar aye 'jigar'
tasveer hee basakar ankho me chale aaye the ham
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«Reply #29 on: May 29, 2007, 06:58:55 PM » |
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good job PUNAm and all frnds
bahut hi accha likha hai aap sab ne
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