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«Reply #60 on: June 19, 2007, 05:27:35 AM » |
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Dil me dard hi dard liye tadap rahi thi
aik baar mujhe paas bulaya toh hota
ansoo baha rahi thi jab tum ja rahe the
aik baar mud ke mujhe dekha toh hota
door hote huye tab toh tum paas the
aaj paas aake mujhe door kiya toh na hota
main kya kahun kya karun kaise roku tumhe ..
rok paati agar door jaane ka faisla tumhara na hota...
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«Reply #61 on: June 19, 2007, 06:57:45 AM » |
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Dil me dard hi dard liye tadap rahi thi
aik baar mujhe paas bulaya toh hota
ansoo baha rahi thi jab tum ja rahe the
aik baar mud ke mujhe dekha toh hota
door hote huye tab toh tum paas the
aaj paas aake mujhe door kiya toh na hota
main kya kahun kya karun kaise roku tumhe ..
rok paati agar door jaane ka faisla tumhara na hota... Punam ji.. wah .. kya baat hai.. bahut hi khub |
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«Reply #62 on: June 20, 2007, 05:19:43 AM » |
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Thanx paani ji...
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«Reply #63 on: June 20, 2007, 01:05:46 PM » |
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Dil me dard hi dard liye tadap rahi thi
aik baar mujhe paas bulaya toh hota
ansoo baha rahi thi jab tum ja rahe the
aik baar mud ke mujhe dekha toh hota
door hote huye tab toh tum paas the
aaj paas aake mujhe door kiya toh na hota
main kya kahun kya karun kaise roku tumhe ..
rok paati agar door jaane ka faisla tumhara na hota... Aane ka wada kare milne ko hamse wo aye hee nahi
ham bhee chal gaye the samjkar majbooree uskee jo thee hee nahi
unke wade the par kitne kin kinse samaj nahi saka tha mai
unhone seekha hee tha wada karna, nibhana kabhi seekha hee nahi
wo to khilte the kaliyo kee tarah bagiyaa me titliyo ke bheech
kitne bhawaron ko piliya that ras rukh ka apne, kisi ne ye jana he nahi
wo karte the intjaar aanke ka hamara bhee, par usne n jane kojane abhi tak hame pahachana hee nahi.........................
netra...
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«Reply #64 on: June 24, 2007, 07:44:49 AM » |
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Kya kahun tujhse ishq ki tadap
iss tadap ki dawa kuch bhi nahi
mere naseeb ka main tujhse kya kahoon
haath pe koi rekha dikhti hi nahi
aankho me khwaab kabhi hua karte the
aaj in aankho me aansoo ke siva kuch bhi nahi
aa jate ho yaado me apni marzi se
zindagi me ab inke siva rakha kuch bhi nahi...
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«Reply #65 on: June 25, 2007, 04:59:27 AM » |
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tadaf dil me liy baithe hai ham
par nahi hamdard dikhlayee kise ham
yaade hee sahara ban gaye hai jeena ka
wo bhee na raha to bhoot bejar rah jayenge ham
naumeede me umeed ka ek hee sahara rah gaya hai
tumbharee ek choti see jhalak jeene aas jaga gya hai
tum to ro bhee lete ho, tadaf dil kee dikha bhee dete ho
ham kya kare apne patthar dil ka, patthakar dil tum hee kahti ho
tadaf dil me liye baithe hai, tadaf ko dikhlaye kise ab ham...
netra..
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«Reply #66 on: June 25, 2007, 02:36:43 PM » |
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Aap se bichar kar ansoo baha rahi hun
gham kya hai aaj jaan gayi hun
her raha pe aap nazar aate ho
aap ki yaad me tadapti rehti hun
keha na saki kuch jo kehena chahi
aaj khud ko kosti rehti hun
saath beeta wo pal bhul na pati hun
yaad kar ke yun roti rehti hun
dil ki baat ab khat me likhti hun
bhej nahi pati khud parti rehti hun...
ishq ki aag me yun jal rahi hun
dil me dard hi dard liye fhirti hun...
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«Reply #67 on: June 26, 2007, 03:43:23 AM » |
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very nice bhoot acha likhta likhtee rahiye abhee kam jyada hai jawab nahi deskta.........par keep writing..
netra......
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«Reply #68 on: June 30, 2007, 04:55:38 AM » |
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kaha gay wo jinhe chod gaye the ham
nahi dekhte hai fija me ab jo darde-dil dekhlate the
chale gaye the kuch pal ko, rukne ka kahh kar unhe
wo nahi mele hame waha jaha chod kar gaye the ham
netra.........
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«Reply #69 on: July 02, 2007, 05:40:08 AM » |
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Aap se bichar kar ansoo baha rahi hun
gham kya hai aaj jaan gayi hun
her raha pe aap nazar aate ho
aap ki yaad me tadapti rehti hun
keha na saki kuch jo kehena chahi
aaj khud ko kosti rehti hun
saath beeta wo pal bhul na pati hun
yaad kar ke yun roti rehti hun
dil ki baat ab khat me likhti hun
bhej nahi pati khud parti rehti hun...
ishq ki aag me yun jal rahi hun
dil me dard hi dard liye fhirti hun... Wah punam, kitni khubsurti se haal-e-dil byaan kiya hao aap ne wah.. |
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«Reply #70 on: July 02, 2007, 05:41:20 AM » |
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Ishq ki raha nahi aasaan toh kya
isme agar hai kante toh kya
sath chalne ko to chal pare agar raha mur gaye toh kya
agar majboori ne kadam rok liye aap ruk gaye toh kya
zamane ke aage jhuk gaye aap aur saath chut gaya toh kya
uff tak na karungi chot dil pe lagi toh kya
rok lungi aansoo apne.. dard dil ko hua toh kya
jee lungi yeh bejaan zindagi mar na saki toh kya....
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«Reply #71 on: July 02, 2007, 07:15:16 AM » |
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Ishq ki raha nahi aasaan toh kya
isme agar hai kante toh kya
sath chalne ko to chal pare agar raha mur gaye toh kya
agar majboori ne kadam rok liye aap ruk gaye toh kya
zamane ke aage jhuk gaye aap aur saath chut gaya toh kya
uff tak na karungi chot dil pe lagi toh kya
rok lungi aansoo apne.. dard dil ko hua toh kya
jee lungi yeh bejaan zindagi mar na saki toh kya.... kyo bahate ho ansoo bhoot keemti hai ye chat jayenge badal game kuch samay to do rok lo ansooo ko kahi nasoor n ban jaye ye dil me dard bhoot hai tere, game jingdee jeete ho tum kyo tadfate ho yad me kisi ke, lot ayenge we ye kahate hai ham netra...... |
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«Reply #72 on: July 05, 2007, 08:28:35 AM » |
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rooth ke tum mujhse kabhi na dur jaana
aansoo bahaun yaad karke tumhe aisa hone na dena
mujhse nazar churake tum na chale jaana
tadapti rahun aik deedar ke liye aisa hone na dena
main sada doon tum ansuna na karna
mujhe tumse koi shikayat ho kabhi aisa hone na dena
dard hi dard mili zamane se mujhe
bichar ke tumse gham me tarsoon aisa hone na dena
wada karke mujhse kabhi mukar na jaana
tumhe bewafa samjhu kabhi aisa hone na dena
nazar bicha ke jab raha main dekhu...tum aa jana
intezaar hi karti rahu dekho kabhi aisa na hone dena...
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«Reply #73 on: July 06, 2007, 02:35:08 AM » |
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Aap se bichar kar ansoo baha rahi hun
gham kya hai aaj jaan gayi hun
her raha pe aap nazar aate ho
aap ki yaad me tadapti rehti hun
keha na saki kuch jo kehena chahi
aaj khud ko kosti rehti hun
saath beeta wo pal bhul na pati hun
yaad kar ke yun roti rehti hun
dil ki baat ab khat me likhti hun
bhej nahi pati khud parti rehti hun...
ishq ki aag me yun jal rahi hun
dil me dard hi dard liye fhirti hun... ufff Punam my little sis... itna dard? 
Bahut khobsurat alfaz main bayan ki hai aapne...
And Netra... you too..... toooooo good.
Keep Flowing .... God bless.[/color] |
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«Reply #74 on: July 06, 2007, 07:23:23 PM » |
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Yaa khuda.... yakin nahi aata itna dard
Punamji very well expressed, Netraji
Daad deni padegi wah kya kamal ka likhte ho
keep writing
Khuda Hafiz.
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