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Woh Puchte Hai Humse Ke kya Jaata Hai Muskuraane Mein Jeeo To Iss kadar Jeeo Ke Mazaa Aaye Chot khaane Mein
Hum kehte Hai Ke zindagi Ko Zinda-Dilli Se jeena Itna Asaan Nahi Yaha Sadiyan Beet Jaati Hai kisi Ko Bhoolane mein...
Dard Ho Dil Mein Aur Labon Se Aah Bhi Naa nikle!!! Kya Aisa Bhi koi Shaks Zinda Hai Iss Zamaane Mein...
Dil mein Hazaaro Gham Qaid Hai Aur chehre Par Ek Khokli Si muskaan!!! Bahut Waqt Lagta hai Mann-Roopi Aaene Ko Sajaane mein...
Aaj Gile-Shikwe Dil mein paalkar sab jee Lete Hai!!! Kaun Waqt Zaaya Kare Kisi Ruthe Hue Ko Manane mein...
Har Dil mein Baaki Ek kasak Si Zaroor Rehti Hai!!! Bahut fark Rehta hai Haqeeqat mein Aur Yuhi Nazar Aane mein...
"Khwaish" Rishte Aur Raaste Insaan Ke saath-Saath Hi Chalte Hai!!! Dono Hi Kabhi Baaz nahi Aate Insaan Ko Aazmaane Mein.....
~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2010, 04:58:57 PM » |
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sach kaha hai aapne khwaish ji ....har lafz sach.....
teri iss bat se sehmat hun main bht hai mushkil aah k sath muskurane me...
lekin hain iss zamane me kai log aise jo maza lete hain dard paane me
kuch aisa unhone dil paya hai dost k khud hi chot khate hain dard ko aazmane me
unhe kya khabar k kya guzarti hai auron k dil pe maza aata hai bas unhe unko tadpane me
humne aise log dekhen hain jinki zindagi guzar jati hai ek chhoti si na puri hui khwaish ki kasak mitane me...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 09:30:47 AM » |
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sach kaha hai aapne khwaish ji ....har lafz sach.....
teri iss bat se sehmat hun main bht hai mushkil aah k sath muskurane me...
lekin hain iss zamane me kai log aise jo maza lete hain dard paane me
kuch aisa unhone dil paya hai dost k khud hi chot khate hain dard ko aazmane me
unhe kya khabar k kya guzarti hai auron k dil pe maza aata hai bas unhe unko tadpane me
humne aise log dekhen hain jinki zindagi guzar jati hai ek chhoti si na puri hui khwaish ki kasak mitane me...!!!
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Anamika Ji Jo Apane Apna Waqt Diya..
Aur Kya Kahoon!!! Sivaae iske ke Lajawab!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2010, 09:41:33 AM » |
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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 09:18:04 PM » |
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Waah Khwaish ji waah... jazbaaton ko shabdon me utaarna koi aapse sikhe... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne , bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 09:19:33 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2010, 05:18:32 AM » |
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2010, 05:20:00 AM » |
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Good work Khwaish and Kasak ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2010, 11:51:04 AM » |
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Waah Khwaish ji waah... jazbaaton ko shabdon me utaarna koi aapse sikhe... bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne , bahut khoob likha hai...!!! Teh Dil Se Shukriya Kapilji..
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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2010, 11:42:17 PM » |
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Bhut khoob khwaish...........daad hazir hai quoob keejiye
aslam
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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2011, 01:06:58 PM » |
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Wah Wah Khwaish Bhai Kya Baat Hai Aakhri Line Bahut Achchi Lagi Mujhey...
Kasak Ji Aapne Bhi Achcha Likha Hai Rep Men...
Khush Rahiye...
~Shihab~
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2011, 01:25:58 AM » |
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Wah Ji Wah Kya Kehne Bohat Badiya Khwaish Ji Yeh Lines Bohat Hi Pyari Kahi Hain Aapne, Hume Behad Hi Pasand Aayin Bohat Khoob Aaj Gile-Shikwe Dil mein paalkar sab jee Lete Hai!!! Kaun Waqt Zaaya Kare Kisi Ruthe Hue Ko Manane mein...
"Khwaish" Rishte Aur Raaste Insaan Ke saath-Saath Hi Chalte Hai!!! Dono Hi Kabhi Baaz nahi Aate Insaan Ko Aazmaane Mein.....
~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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