Dard .... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on March 03, 2011, 06:29:19 PM
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jasbirsingh
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Har Dil Meh dard chupa hota hai,
Bayan karne ka andaz alag hota hai,
Kuch log ankho Meh dard bata dete hai,
Aur kisi ka dard hasi Meh chupa hota hai.




Jasbir Singh
hira_company@yahoo.com

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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #1 on: March 03, 2011, 06:35:44 PM »
Bahut Khub Jasbir Ji Sir
Aaj Bahut Dino Baad Aapka Likha Padh Rha Hu..
Kafi Time Baad Online Aaye HO Kya Sir..

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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #2 on: March 03, 2011, 06:40:18 PM »
Bahut Khub Jasbir Ji Sir
Aaj Bahut Dino Baad Aapka Likha Padh Rha Hu..
Kafi Time Baad Online Aaye HO Kya Sir..





Thanks Rishi Ji ... hanji ... kafi mahinoh baad aana hua hai ji .... thanks for your greetings sir ...
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #3 on: March 03, 2011, 08:10:05 PM »


Har Dil Meh dard chupa hota hai,
Bayan karne ka andaz alag hota hai,
Kuch log ankho Meh dard bata dete hai,
Aur kisi ka dard hasi Meh chupa hota hai.




Jasbir Singh
hira_company@yahoo.com








naaaaaice JS..............AFTER A LONG PERIOD SEEING U
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #4 on: March 03, 2011, 08:16:13 PM »
Thanks KA......

Jasbir Singh
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2011, 05:21:08 PM »


Thanks Rishi Ji ... hanji ... kafi mahinoh baad aana hua hai ji .... thanks for your greetings sir ...

Aate Rahna Sir Ab To Roz And Plz Dont Say To Me Sir
I M Not Sir Aapke Liye Sirf Rishi Only Rishi Sir So Plz Say Me Rishi
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dead heart
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«Reply #6 on: March 04, 2011, 07:49:55 PM »
Jasbir jee,
Akhri line toh dher sara sach liye hue hai..
4 lines main puri nazm kehgaye..
Bahaut khoob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2012, 02:44:31 PM »
Aate Rahna Sir Ab To Roz And Plz Dont Say To Me Sir
I M Not Sir Aapke Liye Sirf Rishi Only Rishi Sir So Plz Say Me Rishi

Ok rishi jii ....
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2012, 02:45:39 PM »
Jasbir jee,
Akhri line toh dher sara sach liye hue hai..
4 lines main puri nazm kehgaye..
Bahaut khoob..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Thanks Rahim Ji
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