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vikas2210
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mera dard tera dard
eh dard bada be-dard
shayron ke mahfil mai
sab kehte hai
mera dard bada hai tumse
issi baat par lik dete hai
gazale aur deewan
mai kahan jjaun kisse kahun
kaise kisi ko batooun
kitna dard hi mere dil mai
kaise katti hai raaten
kaise niklata hai din
in roti aankho ko kisko dikhaun
riste zakham dil ke kaise chupaun
dard ka koi paimana hota to
naap ke main bhi batata
kitna dard hai mere dil mai.
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«Reply #1 on: April 10, 2006, 11:44:49 AM » |
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bahut he gheri shayari likhe ho vikas jee...bahut he khoob.........!!!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #2 on: April 10, 2006, 11:54:46 AM » |
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salam ji shukriya bahut bahut
dard ka rishta mere dil se kuch aisa hai
jaise suraj ka chhand se
dard hai tabhi to dhadkta hai dil mera
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #3 on: April 10, 2006, 11:56:58 AM » |
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Excellent work Vikas ...
Keep it up ...
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vikas2210
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«Reply #4 on: April 10, 2006, 11:57:59 AM » |
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JHL sukriya
kuch aap bhi likhte to aur bhi acha lagta.......
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2006, 12:01:53 PM » |
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Mohabbat humse nidhayi na jaayegi,
Zamane se thokare khaayi na jaayegi,
Daastaan hamari zindagi ki unhe,
Apne hi muh se sunaayi na jaayegi ...
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«Reply #6 on: April 10, 2006, 12:09:16 PM » |
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Isq Da dhaya rabb ne kehar hai
dard mein dooba sara shehar hai
paimane darr paimane pe zindagi basar hai
zinda lash mein baaki naih koi kasar hai
meri takdeer se na milana apna mataam
iss kismat mein jaaney kitne kehar hain
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«Reply #7 on: April 10, 2006, 12:12:27 PM » |
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very nice JHL
dastan-e-mohabbat sunai nahi jaati
yeh to woh say hai jo chupai nahi jaati
zindgi se jo thi payari wo kabhi parayi nahi hoti
dil ke kareeb jo thi wo kabhi duur nahi hoti
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«Reply #8 on: April 10, 2006, 01:22:38 PM » |
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har dard par ek wasile yaar hota
kash ke wo bewafa mera dildaar hota
main maut ko gale lagakar har raat ko sota
kam se kam bewafa zindagi se to door hota
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«Reply #9 on: April 11, 2006, 10:39:21 AM » |
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Jo mere saath tune kiya
Woh mera dil hi tha jo sehta gaya
Dard dil main aaj itna hua
aanso banker ankho se wo behta gaya
kis se mange bhala aaj hum apni khoshi ko
Pyaar tera bhi ab nafrat main badalta gaya
jo mere saath tune kiya
woh mera dil hi tha jo sehta gaya
meri khamoshiya bhi tujhko ab chobne lagi
Zeher teri zuban ka kaya kuch kahta gaya
saath chalne ke liye raaste bhi mil gai the
per chaar qadam tu aage ham se chalta gaya
kaisi teri mohbbat thi woh mere sanam
dushmano ke gale tu khood milta gaya
teri khatir ham tu sab se lad aye the
per hamare khilaaf kaya kuch tu sunta gaya
prachai bhi aaj ki roshni ko chopa rahi thi
usi maazi ke andhero main aaj bhi tu liptta gaya
teri liye nazro se aaj sabki gir gaye the hum
tere wastte chorda tha sabko aur tu hume hi chord gaya
itne qabil nahi hai ke thaam le aaj koi hame
ek teri waja se sara jhaa bewafa ban gaya
~roshni~
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«Reply #10 on: April 12, 2006, 10:08:39 AM » |
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wooooow Roshni very nice. and mohsin ji good one.
Dard jo itna bhadha hai
ki aanshu tham gaye hai
ab ek maza sa aane laga hai
khawabo tu jo aane laga hai
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«Reply #11 on: April 12, 2006, 10:35:01 AM » |
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Pathar agar tha uska dil
To mera kaanch ka na banaya hota
Unhain pighalna nahi aaya to
Mujhe sambhalna hi sikhaya hota
Koi makaam hee na rahe to pata kiss kaam ka hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya anjaam kya hai
Usse ja kay koi kahe mujhe le lena hai apni safai mein zehar bhee
Wo fakath ye to bata dain ke meri aaisii khata kya hai
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vikas2210
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«Reply #12 on: April 12, 2006, 10:42:57 AM » |
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nirbhay ji aap yahan aaye khuda ki kudrat hai.
kabhi hum aapki shayri ko kabhi apne thread ko dekhte hai.
neer bahut hi badhiyaaaaaaaaa.
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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2006, 10:45:19 AM » |
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nirbhay ji aap yahan aaye khuda ki kudrat hai.
kabhi hum aapki shayri ko kabhi apne thread ko dekhte hai.
neer bahut hi badhiyaaaaaaaaa. Hhehe Ye sabb kya hai bhai?? Mujhe yahan likhna mana hai kiya  |
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2006, 10:54:14 AM » |
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arrrrrr bade bhaiiiiiiiii aap aaye mehrbani aapki.........
u r most welcome dear.......
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