dard ka paimana

by vikas2210 on April 10, 2006, 11:42:26 AM
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vikas2210
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«Reply #15 on: April 12, 2006, 10:59:23 AM »
meri baichan ruh ko karar de jaa
ek baar to apna deedar de jaa

jo nami chodi thi tune labo se apne
aankho mai baaki abhi bhi hai

jo saanso ki khushbu reh gai thi sanso mai meri
jdti utarti sanso mai baaki abhi bhi hai

salvate jo reh gai thi chaddar pe meri
abhi bhi vasi hi hai jaisi chor gai thi

tere aane ka intezaar jo uss din that
wo hi intezaar aaj bhi hai......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #16 on: April 12, 2006, 11:15:12 AM »
Bohat khoob Vikas, JHL & Nirbhay, Roshni & Mohsin...
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vikas2210
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«Reply #17 on: April 12, 2006, 11:28:01 AM »
Thanks Aryaan
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nirbhay
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«Reply #18 on: April 12, 2006, 01:14:33 PM »
Todd key khwab mere
woh apni duniya basanay chalein

De kar mujhe gham ke saaye
woh apni khushiya mananein chalein

Iss dil ko Todd kar
kaheen aur dil lagaaney chalein

Bujha ke duniya mein Chirag mere
woh apni shama jalanay chalein!!
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vikas2210
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«Reply #19 on: April 12, 2006, 02:16:54 PM »

jo chah that wo na mila to kaya gila
is jahan mai kisko mila hai dil chaha

kaya yeh kam hai humme saath to mila
kaya gum chahen raha kuch pal ka

mujhko keh kar apna woh chale gaye
duur bhale hi kitne ho yaaden to kareeb chor gaye
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Pooja
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«Reply #20 on: April 12, 2006, 02:51:39 PM »
Quote from: "nirbhay"
Pathar agar tha uska dil
To mera kaanch ka na banaya hota
Unhain pighalna nahi aaya to
Mujhe sambhalna hi sikhaya hota

Koi makaam hee na rahe to pata kiss kaam ka hai
Is bechain khamoshi ki wajah kya anjaam kya hai
Usse ja kay koi kahe mujhe le lena hai apni safai mein zehar bhee
Wo fakath ye to bata dain ke meri aaisii khata kya hai


bahoot achy neer!!!! bahoot khoob!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #21 on: April 27, 2006, 06:03:21 PM »
Fantastic work by all here ...
Keep it up all ...


Aaj hum aapki nigaaho mein nahi dil mein base hote,
Agar dua kabul karta khuda mera,
Par wo dua zaroor hogi kabul hamari,
Jiske liye aaj sar hai jhuka mera ...
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: April 27, 2006, 09:07:53 PM »
Tera sir jhuke kahin yah manjoor na hoga
Rub ke dar mai bhi najar se najar ka hi dastoor hoga
Mana dard ka paimana bhar chukka hai bahoot
Magar tere her dard ke liye, Umar bhar ka sabar hoga!!
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nirbhay
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«Reply #23 on: April 28, 2006, 02:47:42 AM »
Wah wwah bohat hii khoob JHL & Pooja Sis!!!
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #24 on: April 29, 2006, 05:59:25 PM »
Quote from: "Pooja"
Tera sir jhuke kahin yah manjoor na hoga
Rub ke dar mai bhi najar se najar ka hi dastoor hoga
Mana dard ka paimana bhar chukka hai bahoot
Magar tere her dard ke liye, Umar bhar ka sabar hoga!!



Dard ke paimaane ko aaj pii jaana hoga,
Hame lene us khuda ko bhi dharti pe aana hoga,
Jab jab tujhe koi gum hoga main bhlaaunga use aur,
Jab jab tere chehre pe khushi tab JHL phir deewana hoga ...
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ranjana
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«Reply #25 on: May 05, 2006, 03:52:20 AM »
very beautiful vikas ji.........bahut sundar likha hai aapne........

dard ........
aankho se chalka hai...
man se baha hai.......
hotho ne chupchaap saha hai....
tadap kar saha hai.....
dard ghana hai.....
mooh nahi modata .......
pind nahi chorata .......
pata nahi kis mitti  ka bana hai......n/m
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vikas2210
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«Reply #26 on: May 05, 2006, 04:21:50 AM »
Goof Ranju nicely shared.........

dard se mera rishta aisa
jaise mauta hai zindgi se
mai ka payale se....
aansu ka aankho se....
dil ka dhadkan se.....
mera tumhare se......
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Just_Hate_Love
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«Reply #27 on: May 09, 2006, 11:18:16 AM »
Good Ranjana and Vikas ...

Dard se mera rishta aisa ...
Jaisa chaand ka chaandni se,
Ret ka samundar se,
Aankhon ka nashe se,
Rooh ka jism se,
Parchaayi ka roshni se ...
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pandit
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«Reply #28 on: June 30, 2009, 03:48:37 PM »
mera dard tera dard
eh dard bada be-dard

shayron ke mahfil mai
sab kehte hai
mera dard bada hai tumse

issi baat par lik dete hai
gazale aur deewan

mai kahan jjaun kisse kahun
kaise kisi ko batooun
kitna dard hi mere dil mai

kaise katti hai raaten
kaise niklata hai din

in roti aankho ko kisko dikhaun
riste zakham dil ke kaise chupaun

dard ka koi paimana hota to
naap ke main bhi batata
kitna dard hai mere dil mai.


BAHUT KHOOB VIKAS JE..
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