dard ka tohfa:Shayri-E-Dard

Manav Mehra

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kayun dard ka tohfa hum tujhse paate hain
har bar tujhse zaleel hone chale aate hain

umeed kar lete hain ki shayad koi dawa mile
aor tujhse zakhmo ke liye namak hi pate hain

hoti hai koshish,do pal hi sahi,sath toh bane
par inhi do palon mein,dooriyan aor badate hain

Batao bhi kya kar rahi ho tum mere sath "Manasi"
Tere "Manav" ke lubon par,din raat shabd yeh aate hain


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Meena is back

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2007, 03:07:18 PM »

wah wah manav ji... simple and very nice!!!

tumne diya hai to hume yeh tofa bhi kabool hai,
kya paya kya khoya, yeh sochna ab fazool hai,
dil diya hai, to koi hisab nahi rakhte hum,
humara to pyar me to bas yehi ek asool hai!


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Manav Mehra

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2007, 03:29:50 PM »

bohat hi hazir jawab diya hai apne meena ji.. aor sach manaiye dil chu gaya hai
apki baat bilkul sahi hai... payar mein kya tol-mol... maine bohaat bar khud ko samjhya hai.. lekin jab extreme level par baat aa jati hai.. phir thodi selfishness aa jati hai mann mein.. shayad mann mein utni shi'ddat nahi hai.. jitni app ne apne lafzon mein bayan ki hai

ho jati hai khatta,hisab mein ulaj jate hain
tujhse door baithe sanam,aaise waqt bitate hain

kabhi kho jate hain teri payari yaadon mein hum
toh kabhi girte ashQ,teri bedardiyan ginwate hain


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Rajbir

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2007, 03:47:22 PM »

Manav and Meena

Bahut he sahi farmaya hai aap dono ne !

Keep it up !


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SHONA

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2007, 04:26:46 PM »

Beautifully written manav & equally good meena

bhigi aankho se muskurane mein maza aur hai
haste haste palke bhigane mein maza aur hai
baat zubaan se keh de to koi bi samaj le
khamoshi ko koi samjhe
to maza aur hai.....


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Manav Mehra

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2007, 04:33:46 PM »

Shukriya Rajbir...


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Manav Mehra

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2007, 04:45:01 PM »

Quote from: "SHONA"

Beautifully written manav & equqlly good meena

bhigi aankho se muskurane mein maza aur hai
haste haste palke bhigane mein maza aur hai
baat zubaan se keh de to koi bi samaj le
khamoshi ko koi samjhe
to maza aur hai.....

Shona.. abh aapko kya kahein

Ankhon mein Ashq jab suukh jayein,toh tadap ban jati
khamoshi jab hadh se bard jaye,toh ghutan ban jati hai
dekhna kahin payar mein zindagi se lamba intezar na ho
warna har Ashiq ki Mohabaat phir ek Sajja ban jati hai...


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angel4u

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #7 on: August 29, 2007, 05:44:58 PM »

Quote from: "Manav Mehra"

Quote from: "SHONA"

Nice one all...

Ye ashq dil ki banjar zameen par padke khud patthar ban gaye,
Ye tanhayi ke sannate khauf bhare manzar ban gaye,
Teri tamanna ki hai meri har ek dhadkan ne dhadakte hue,
Meri mohabbat ka anjaan dekh kar sitare bhi sharmsaar ban gaye...


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angel4u

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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2007, 05:57:44 PM »

Quote from: "Manav Mehra"

Quote from: "SHONA"


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dard ka tohfa

«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2007, 06:40:18 PM »

BAHUT KHOOB MANAVJI,SHONA,ANGEL,MEENA...SAB NE ACHA LIKHA HAI

MERE HALAAT WOH SAMAJ NAHI PAATE
AUR HUM BHI UNHE KUCH KEH NAHI PAATE
DARD TO BAHUT HAI IS DIL MEIN "KHWAISH"
PAR HUM HAQEEQAT BAYAN KAISE KARE?
KHAMOSH LAB MAJBURIYON SE KHUL NAHI PAATE
KAASH WOH SAMAJ LETE AANKHON SE KAHI BAATON KO
BAS AB KYA KAHEN?
UNKE BINA EK PAL BHI HUM REH NAHI PAATE


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Meena is back

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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2007, 09:18:12 AM »

manav ji, akar kuch kehna asan hota hai aur karna utna hi mushkil, agar mai yaha pe is tara ki shayari karti hoon then on the other side maine bohot mayaus bhari shayari bhi ki hai. its not that i am "attacking" u personally. i just like the jugal bandi in shayari with anyone :D i am sorry agar maine kuch galat likha ho ya apko hurt hua ho, maine yeh soch kar reply nahin likha tha!

thanks dosto! u have written nice also!!
:D


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