DARD KAISA HOTA HAI..... (plzz giv ur opnion)

by BHONDU on February 16, 2007, 02:50:50 PM
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Aksar mere dil mein ye sawaal aata hai,
kya bura hai ye dard jo sabko rulata hai.
ya bahut hi pyaara hai ye dard
jo khushi ke jaate hi humko gale lagata hai
aapne sahare jeena sikhlata hai.

kya ye dard kisi ki inayat hai
ya ye dushman hai aapna ansoo jike aadhar hai
per mujhe lagta hai ye mera yaar hai
her pal saath rehta hai ye tumse wafadaar hai

dard ko dekhne ki hoti hai bepannah chahat
warna BHONDU  yu hi likhta nhi hai
ab to lagta ye mera bhagwaan hai
hamesha saath rehta hai per dikhta nhi hai...
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2007, 02:54:44 PM »
wondeful  Bhondu.........  humesha ki  tarah aaj  bhi  bahot accha aap ne likha.........
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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2007, 02:58:53 PM »
sach kaha aapne Bhondu ji...

zindagi mein agar khushiyon ke siva kuch na ho
to kahan jeene ka maza aata hai
zindagi ko jeene layak to DARD hi banata hai
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«Reply #3 on: February 20, 2007, 03:23:40 PM »
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sach kaha aapne Bhondu ji...

zindagi mein agar khushiyon ke siva kuch na ho
to kahan jeene ka maza aata hai
zindagi ko jeene layak to DARD hi banata hai


bahut hi umda lines di hai aapne nikki ji...

aaj dil kyn aapna zor aajmata hai.
khusiyon ke bandhan ko tod nikal jaata hai.
aansoo ke sailaaab mein doobna ye chahta hai.
dard ko ye aapne seene mein chupata hai
zindgi ko jeene layak dard hi banata hai.

khusiyon ke zakmo mein dard ka malham rakhte hai.
aansoo ke sath hum swadh dard ka chakhte hai
rooth jaate hai yaar sabhi, chut jaate hai saath sabhi
ek saache saathi ki tarah saath ye nibhata hai.
zindgi ko jeene layak dard hi banata hai....
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«Reply #4 on: February 20, 2007, 03:52:23 PM »
wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Dost Kavi ji!!! Nikki good job!!

Dard hai sathi, dard hai sahara
Dard ke bina na samjh aye kon hai humara

Chip kar kahi ander, mujh main hi sama gaya
Ban kar mera hi roop, mera chehra dikha gaya

Gujarta gaya waqat, salo saal se Sath nibha gaya
Kar juda mujhe sansaar se, mera ek naya jahan basa gaya!!!
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«Reply #5 on: February 20, 2007, 05:31:08 PM »
wow, bhondu ji, really loved last 4 lines.

nice nikki ji and pooja ji as always wonderful...
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«Reply #6 on: February 21, 2007, 01:22:30 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai bahoot khoob Dost Kavi ji!!! Nikki good job!!

Dard hai sathi, dard hai sahara
Dard ke bina na samjh aye kon hai humara

Chip kar kahi ander, mujh main hi sama gaya
Ban kar mera hi roop, mera chehra dikha gaya

Gujarta gaya waqat, salo saal se Sath nibha gaya
Kar juda mujhe sansaar se, mera ek naya jahan basa gaya!!!


bahut aache pooja ji.....

dard hi saathi hai dard hi sahara hai.
bewafaaii ke is daur mein dard hi humara hai.

zindgi jeene ke liye dard aapni himmat hai
aur.. poochte hai wo ki "BHONDU" dard ki kya keemat hai.
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«Reply #7 on: February 21, 2007, 05:14:26 PM »
Aise Dhoka Diya Kisine Mujhe Ke HuM Ek Zinda Laash Bankar Reh Gaye,
Dard Ko Dard Hone Laga Mere Dardse Aur Mohabbat Ki NazarMe HuM Gir Gaye...
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«Reply #8 on: February 22, 2007, 01:06:47 PM »
Wow bhondu,nikki sis,pooja ji n angel...sabne bohat hi acha likha.
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«Reply #9 on: February 23, 2007, 05:11:01 AM »
very nice...like it

 ye dard na hota to aapki ye shayeri na hoti
dard ki humsafer ye purani yadein na hoti...

Quote from: "BHONDU"
Aksar mere dil mein ye sawaal aata hai,
kya bura hai ye dard jo sabko rulata hai.
ya bahut hi pyaara hai ye dard
jo khushi ke jaate hi humko gale lagata hai
aapne sahare jeena sikhlata hai.

kya ye dard kisi ki inayat hai
ya ye dushman hai aapna ansoo jike aadhar hai
per mujhe lagta hai ye mera yaar hai
her pal saath rehta hai ye tumse wafadaar hai

dard ko dekhne ki hoti hai bepannah chahat
warna BHONDU  yu hi likhta nhi hai
ab to lagta ye mera bhagwaan hai
hamesha saath rehta hai per dikhta nhi hai...
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«Reply #10 on: February 23, 2007, 05:11:48 AM »
very nice...like it

 ye dard na hota to aapki ye shayeri na hoti
dard ki humsafer ye purani yadein na hoti...

Quote from: "BHONDU"
Aksar mere dil mein ye sawaal aata hai,
kya bura hai ye dard jo sabko rulata hai.
ya bahut hi pyaara hai ye dard
jo khushi ke jaate hi humko gale lagata hai
aapne sahare jeena sikhlata hai.

kya ye dard kisi ki inayat hai
ya ye dushman hai aapna ansoo jike aadhar hai
per mujhe lagta hai ye mera yaar hai
her pal saath rehta hai ye tumse wafadaar hai

dard ko dekhne ki hoti hai bepannah chahat
warna BHONDU  yu hi likhta nhi hai
ab to lagta ye mera bhagwaan hai
hamesha saath rehta hai per dikhta nhi hai...
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«Reply #11 on: February 23, 2007, 01:08:02 PM »
Quote from: "angel4u"

Aise Dhoka Diya Kisine Mujhe Ke HuM Ek Zinda Laash Bankar Reh Gaye,
Dard Ko Dard Hone Laga Mere Dardse Aur Mohabbat Ki NazarMe HuM Gir Gaye...


galat baat hai angel...

mohabaat ki nazaro mein koi girta nhi hai.
per mohabaat ke saye mein jeevan gujarta nhi hai.
mohabbat mein khusi thi to dard mein bhi mazza aata hai.
dard humein duniya ki nazar dikhlata hai......
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«Reply #12 on: February 23, 2007, 01:12:14 PM »
Quote from: "mithoo"
very nice...like it

 ye dard na hota to aapki ye shayeri na hoti
dard ki humsafer ye purani yadein na hoti...

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sahi kaha hai mithoo ji....
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«Reply #13 on: February 23, 2007, 01:44:46 PM »
Very Very Nice Bhondu ji... Bahut sahii baat kahi aapne...

And Nice work all... Sab ne bahut achha likhe hai...
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«Reply #14 on: February 23, 2007, 01:58:44 PM »

Kya hai Dard, yeh humko batao,
Iskii kahanii humey bhi sunao...

Hai meethi chubhan yeh
Muhabbat ki pyaasii...
Ya bheegi huii si palkein,
Bharii jinme udaasii...

Yeh mehboob hai apna,
Jo Gale se lagaaye...
Ya dushman hai dil ka,
Jo humko jalaaye....

Sujhaana mushkil jisey,
Ek uljhii si pahelii...
Ya jeevan ko samjhaatii,
Koi puraani sahelii...

Humse bhi kaho koii iska kisaa,
Humari bhi isse pehchaan karwao...
Kya hai Dard, yeh humko batao,
Iskii kahanii humey bhi sunao... Usual Smile [/b]
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