Dard ke baad bhi, Tanhaai ke saath bhi ek aas apne ki.......

by rohit30002 on May 28, 2005, 11:14:28 AM
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rohit30002
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«Reply #45 on: July 04, 2005, 07:15:41 PM »
Quote from: "waheed_rose2004"
very  nice  rohit.......................................nice  work............



Thanks waheed
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«Reply #46 on: July 06, 2005, 04:11:17 PM »
peene de sharab "Gaalib" majjid mein baith kar
ya koi aisi jagah bata jahan khuda na ho
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aryan_mantri
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«Reply #47 on: July 07, 2005, 09:08:10 AM »
wah rohit jee great................
bahut aachi likhi hai
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rohit30002
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«Reply #48 on: July 07, 2005, 07:15:57 PM »
Quote from: "aryan_mantri"
wah rohit jee great................
bahut aachi likhi hai


Thanks aryan ji
Welcome to yoindia
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janu_anu
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«Reply #49 on: July 15, 2005, 04:55:17 PM »
Tere khyal se teri gali se bach jaata
saare shahar ki dushmani se bach jaata
agar gunah ka moka gawa diya hota
to main jamir ki sharmindgi se bach jaata
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rohit30002
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«Reply #50 on: July 16, 2005, 12:27:43 AM »
Quote from: "janu_anu"
Tere khyal se teri gali se bach jaata
saare shahar ki dushmani se bach jaata
agar gunah ka moka gawa diya hota
to main jamir ki sharmindgi se bach jaata



It's really great janu
bahut accha likha hai
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rohit30002
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«Reply #51 on: July 16, 2005, 02:31:20 AM »
Kaun rakhta hai yaad naamo ko, log chehre tak bhul jate hain...........
tum samundar ki baat karte ho log aankho mein dub jate hain.............
mohabbat jisne kari na ho , wo mohabbat kya jane................
mera dil tujhe ab bhi chahta hai tere dil ke baare mein khuda jane............
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janu_anu
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«Reply #52 on: July 22, 2005, 12:56:56 PM »
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww bahut khub

Tu inhe aansu samajh kar yun na mitti mein mila jaalim
payame dard-e-dil hai aur ashqo ki jubani hai.
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rohit30002
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«Reply #53 on: July 24, 2005, 11:20:12 PM »
Quote from: "janu_anu"
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww bahut khub

Tu inhe aansu samajh kar yun na mitti mein mila jaalim
payame dard-e-dil hai aur ashqo ki jubani hai.



Nice
Agar wo hamare aansuyon ki keemat hi samajh jaata...............
To phir wo hamara dil kaise tod jaata..............
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roshni246
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«Reply #54 on: May 10, 2006, 01:40:48 PM »
very gud rohit!!!!!
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indian_groom
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«Reply #55 on: May 12, 2006, 06:33:24 AM »
Quote from: "rohit30002"
[you]Apne aapko chand lines mein sawaara hai,
wo yahan likh raha hoon ummid karta hoon kii pasand aaye.
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Please dont copy this because this is allready petent ( Registered for all over world)

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[you]Ye lines abhi tak meri jindgi ke pal hain.........[/you]
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Ghar se jo nikla gungunata hua chala.....
Raste mein jo mila haath milata hua chala............

Jo mila jaisa mila dost banata hua chala............
Kisi ne diya jo dard uthata hua chala.................

Dil roya phir bhi har ashq palkon mein chhipata hua chala...........
Har khushi ke baad ek dard chahta hua chala............

Khud apna hi main majak udata hua chala...........
Par jo bhi mila udaas use mein hasata hua chala...........

Jo dil hua udaas to use bhi main samjhata hua chala............
Jindgi ke har daur ko aajmata hua chala...............

Tanhaai mein saaye ko saath bulata hua chala.............
Lakh hain dard phir bhi har dard ke saath muskurata hua chala............


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[you]Ye lines shyad meri jindgi mein aane wale pal ho[/you]
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Jo maut aayi najar to sang uske bhi kadam badata hua chala...........
Yun hi main jindgi ka saath nibhata hua chala................



Dard yahin khatam nahi hota E dost,
Dard aur aayenge abhi jindgi mein |
Ja rahe hain is vaade ke saath ,
kii phir aayenge is mehfil mein ||







ohho..........thats really nice ............rohit...........nice talent..........aur boot maat marna dobra :oops:  :evil:
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Rishi Soumya
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«Reply #56 on: May 13, 2006, 07:46:40 AM »
Bful wordings....
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keertika
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«Reply #57 on: May 13, 2006, 01:56:49 PM »
bahut achcha Rohit...aise hi likhte rahiye
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