dard ke rang (mere sang)

by bekarar on August 21, 2008, 05:28:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: August 22, 2008, 05:53:32 PM »
Jee Bhai Sanjeev...Fir se Taweel B'Tarteeb kuch alag hi andaaz aur kuch dard-e-bayaa'n bhi saaf va suffaf alfaaz k saath
aur kuch Lafzo ko jo Firaya Hai alag hi Maa'ne Me ki Har Dusri Line Paheli Line se Jeyaada Dil va Jehn-o-Fikra Ko Khinchti Hai

Allaah se dua karta hun ki 'aapko Wo Kalum se Nawaaze Jis k Kalaam Ki Kalum Aur Kari sada jari rahe '


Lugvi Maana kalum = hukumat va badshahi
            Kari = Rang-o-Sazi     

bahoot bahoot shukriya bhai raza...hamesha kee tarah aapne saraha aur housala-afzai ki Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: August 22, 2008, 05:59:24 PM »
Sahi kaha hai Sanjeev ji, ek zamaane mein yeh chhote chhote dard bahut bade laga karte thhe... Aur jaisa ki Celmira ne kaha "Ab naye dard hain naye dukh, purane dard lagte hain sukh" yeh bhi bilcul sach hai... Ab yeh baatein padh kar guzra waqt suhaana lagta hai.. Usual Smile Aur aaj ke dard..  icon_silent kabhi naa khatam hone wala safar...

Sanjeev ji aur Celmira... Sach mein, Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aap dono ne.. Applause

bahoot bahoot shukriya shikha.......... mai kahna bhi yahi chahta tha ki har dour ke dukh alag hote hain par utna hi asar rakhte hain utni hi takleef dete hain........
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«Reply #17 on: August 23, 2008, 03:22:51 AM »
VERY GOOD BEKARAR

MERE TO DARD BHI AURO KE KAM AATE HAIN
MAIN RO PADU TO KAIEE LOGH MUSKARATE HAIN
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«Reply #18 on: August 23, 2008, 01:13:19 PM »
Bohat kamaal ka likha hai Sanjeev jiju superb lines 
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mehbooba ka milna bhi dard tha,
aur bichadna usase bhi bada dard tha,


Wah wah nice lines..sanjeev ji
 
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«Reply #19 on: August 24, 2008, 05:15:27 AM »
VERY GOOD BEKARAR

MERE TO DARD BHI AURO KE KAM AATE HAIN
MAIN RO PADU TO KAIEE LOGH MUSKARATE HAIN

bahoot khoob likha bhai sajid aapne...aur pasand karne ka shukriya


Bohat kamaal ka likha hai Sanjeev jiju superb lines 
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mehbooba ka milna bhi dard tha,
aur bichadna usase bhi bada dard tha,


Wah wah kya lines hai jiju par mehbooba ka milna ..  tongue3
rukho rukho sis se kahenge hum ... NaNaNa Giggle


shukriya honey ji.......aur bar baar kisi sharif aadmi ko darana thik nahi Is it SO! Is it SO!
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«Reply #20 on: August 24, 2008, 09:57:15 AM »

shukriya honey ji.......aur bar baar kisi sharif aadmi ko darana thik nahi Is it SO! Is it SO!

 sad5 crybaby2 Meine toh mazaaq kiya tha mauf karna agar aapko bura laga toh
meine tik kardiya..... sad11
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«Reply #21 on: March 27, 2013, 08:36:22 PM »
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