DARD KI DALI

by reyan KHAN on September 25, 2008, 01:46:43 PM
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Tere dard ki dali mere honto per rakhi,
Wo katra katra pighal rahi hai.
Or mein katra katra ji raha hun,
Gujregi jab aakhri dard ki boond  gale se,
Mein apni aakhri saans bhi jehaad ker dunga,
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2008, 01:48:36 PM »
Tere dard ki dali mere honto per rakhi,
Wo katra katra pighal rahi hai.
Or mein katra katra ji raha hun,
Gujregi jab aakhri dard ki boond  gale se,
Mein apni aakhri saans bhi jehaad ker dunga,

Amazingly Good... Applause

Welcome to YoIndia and Keep Writing.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: September 30, 2008, 07:33:26 AM »
Nice one
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«Reply #3 on: September 30, 2008, 09:15:02 AM »
Nice One Reyan Khan Ji,.
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«Reply #4 on: September 30, 2008, 09:39:33 AM »
Dard Ki Daaliyaan Tootti Nahi, Hawaa Ke Jhonko Se,.
Inhe To Aadat Hai Toofaano Se Lardkar Jeene Ki,./
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«Reply #5 on: September 30, 2008, 10:02:12 AM »
Dard Ki Daaliyaan Tootti Nahi, Hawaa Ke Jhonko Se,.
Inhe To Aadat Hai Toofaano Se Lardkar Jeene Ki,./

Nice Lines Azeem.. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2008, 09:30:32 AM »
Shukriya Mahiya Ji,.
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«Reply #7 on: October 01, 2008, 09:37:08 AM »
Baghbaan Dard Ka Bo Raha Hoon Main,.
Khud Ki Pehchaan Bhi Kho Raha Hoon Main,.

Daaliyaan Dard Ki Phool Na Barsaa Saki,.
Kaanton Hi Ko Bistar Banaakar So Raha Hoon Main,.

Kis Kis ko apna Humraaz Banaata main "Jaanasheen",.
Khud Apni Zindagi Ki Haalat Par Ro Raha Hoon Main,.
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«Reply #8 on: October 02, 2008, 09:20:20 PM »
mohabbat main haar kar bhi jeet banake jeene walo ko mera salaam... icon_salut
original post was very nice and both of urs too azeem ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2008, 09:27:13 AM »
Thank You,.
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2008, 09:34:18 AM »
Dard Ki Pehchaan Bangaya Main Bhi Dekho,.
Ke Log Mohabbat Ke Bechaaron Ko Meri Misaal Dete Hain,.

_____________________________________-Jaanasheen-
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2008, 01:36:37 PM »
Bahut khoob reyan and azeem...
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«Reply #12 on: October 05, 2008, 02:03:24 PM »
Tere dard ki dali mere honto per rakhi,
Wo katra katra pighal rahi hai.
Or mein katra katra ji raha hun,
Gujregi jab aakhri dard ki boond  gale se,
Mein apni aakhri saans bhi jehaad ker dunga,

Very nice Khan jii
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2008, 02:11:25 PM »
Shukriya Husnaina Ji,.
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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2009, 05:51:11 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Reyhan ji mindblowing creation.beautiful lines by Azeem bhai and Sonal ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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