Dard ki dawa -Panna 4:Shayri-E-Dard

Roja

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«Reply #45 on: February 09, 2009, 07:51:02 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 07:49:14 AM

thanks a lot roja ji

muqaddar se jo mila dard tohkoi gilanahin
qasoor shayad dil ka tha saathi mila nahin

aaww... God Bless you...


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #46 on: February 09, 2009, 07:54:38 AM »

Bahoth qoob salil maza agaya !!

Meri juda-e-ne "Qadeer"usse bahoth rulaya hoga !!
Taze hain phool qabra pe koi aya hoga !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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salil2002

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #47 on: February 09, 2009, 08:04:48 AM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 09, 2009, 07:54:38 AM

Bahoth qoob salil maza agaya !!

Meri juda-e-ne usse bahoth rulaya hoga !!
Taze hain phool qabra pe koi aya hoga !!

Qadeer Toopchi

thanks qadeer bhai aap ka hi asar hai thanks roja aapko achcha laga..........

rakhe huye hain yeh phool pichhle baras se
meri barsi par inhe tum hata dena
darne laga hun main in andheron se
is toote chiraag ko meri qabr par jaala dena


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Pooja

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #48 on: February 09, 2009, 05:37:52 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 07:40:21 AM

Quote from: Pooja on March 14, 2008, 03:49:28 PM

Dard ki dawa ab to dard hi kare
Zindagi hai kaya, kon parwah kare
Ro liye itna ki ab rona bhi atta nahi
Aor rone ki ab parwah kyun kare

Behlaane se kab dil behlta hai yaha
Phir dard ko behlane ki chinta kyun kare
Dekhati hai tamsha to dekh lene do dunia ko
Is dunia ki ab parwah kyun kare

Bhatak rahi hai ajj pooja
To bhatak hi jaane do
Sidhi hai raah ya hai yah galat
Iski khabar ab kisi ko kaya kare

Rone se nahi sulajhata dard yah jaan chuke
Hasi main na jaane kitni baar khud ko rula chuke
Chalkate hai ansoo hansi main ya ab gum main
Iski pehchan ab pooja kahan kahan kare.......

Dard ki dawa ab to dard hi kare
Zindagi hai kaya, kon parwah kare...............

bahut hi achcha aur dil kochhu lene walakalaamhai pooja di

mat lagao malham mere zakhmo par
haan yeh dard oonki aakhiri nishani hai

bahoot bahoot shukaria.... kisi din bahoot he ajeeb mood main likhi gai thi yah kavita.... shukaria apko pasand aai...

do line main bahoot kuch likh gaye hai app Salil ji!!! Good work


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Pooja

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #49 on: February 09, 2009, 05:39:00 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on February 09, 2009, 07:54:38 AM

Bahoth qoob salil maza agaya !!

Meri juda-e-ne usse bahoth rulaya hoga !!
Taze hain phool qabra pe koi aya hoga !!

Qadeer Toopchi

wah kaya baat hai qadeer bhai... main iatni lambi lambi kavita likhati hu... tab jakar kuch ban paata hai aor apne do line main sab kah diya... bahoot khoob!!


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Pooja

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #50 on: February 09, 2009, 05:40:19 PM »

Quote from: salil2002 on February 09, 2009, 08:04:48 AM

wah wah wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob salil ji


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pankshivam

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #51 on: February 09, 2009, 06:35:02 PM »

Is Topic Pe Kisi ek Shyari ko Quote Karna mushkil hai
Aap logone itna Umda likha hai ki Tareef ke Labz nahi mil rahe
Sirf yahi kahunga
Aap log isi tarah likhte rahe aur hame padhne ko milta rahe...


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Pooja

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #52 on: February 09, 2009, 09:43:25 PM »

Shukaria Pank ji.... apki taraf se bhi yaha kuch add ho jaata to acha lagta.....


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salil2002

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #53 on: February 10, 2009, 05:04:26 AM »

thank u pooja di.......tht u like my creations


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Dard ki dawa

«Reply #54 on: February 10, 2009, 05:46:54 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on February 09, 2009, 05:39:00 PM

wah kaya baat hai qadeer bhai... main iatni lambi lambi kavita likhati hu... tab jakar kuch ban paata hai aor apne do line main sab kah diya... bahoot khoob!!

Shukriya Bahen !! Ye to apki nazar ka kamaal hai jo meri do lines ke ahesas ko pad leti hain !! waise is nacheez ki taherir me khuch bhi to nahi !! allah tumhe khuch rakhe bahen !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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