"dard kuch aur badhega to................."

by aaina on May 11, 2009, 09:46:35 PM

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aaina

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Teer kuch aur chalaoge to inaayat hogi
dard kuch aur badhega to mohabbat hogi

zakhm daine nhi aate to uski mashq karo
aise kaise mukammal ye raqaabat hogi

baat hi baat mai wo pehloo badal jata hai
jaane kis tarhaa.n khatm uski ye aadat hogi

haaye dewaar se lipte huway ye unke saaye
gar akela jo hua ghar to phir wehshat hogi

kiski aahat pe kaan dhare baitho ho aslam
wo to apno mein hain unko kahan fursat hogi


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madhuwesh

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Re: "dard kuch aur badhega to................."

«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2009, 11:19:08 PM »

wah aslam ji very very nice and touching.
really good one,keep it up. Applause


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pandit

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Re: "dard kuch aur badhega to................."

«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2009, 01:24:40 AM »

WAAH AAINA JEE..
KYA BAAT HAI........


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Roja

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Re: "dard kuch aur badhega to................."

«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2009, 01:39:55 AM »

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haaye dewaar se lipte huway ye unke saaye
gar akela jo hua ghar to phir wehshat hogi

kiski aahat pe kaan dhare baitho ho aslam
wo to apno mein hain unko kahan fursat hogi

Wah wah kya khoob likha hai aapne Aslam ji...


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: "dard kuch aur badhega to................."

«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2009, 05:20:54 AM »

Quote from: aaina on May 11, 2009, 09:46:35 PM

KYAA BAAT HAI AAINA SB...ZABARDAST...KALAAM HAI


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k.shael

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Re: "dard kuch aur badhega to................."

«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2009, 05:50:32 AM »

Bahut khoob Aaina Ji,

Shally.


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Sonu

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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2009, 05:52:37 AM »

Bahut khoob Aaina Ji.. javab nahi apka keep up the wonderful work Usual Smile


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: "dard kuch aur badhega to................."

«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2009, 07:37:14 AM »

Hello Aaina Ji
Very good, kafi achchhi ghazalen post kar rahe hain aap. Ghazal writing me aapki pakad kafi majboot maloom hoti hai. Aise hi likhte rahiye. Very nice.
SARVESH RASTOGI