Dard le le na teri jaan kaahin ~~ saahil

by salil2002 on August 18, 2009, 07:47:23 AM
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aaj dil bada bechain tha,aaj shaam bahut roya
poochha jo maine haale dil toh kehta hai aaraam nahin

beith kar kured raha hai zakhm saare puraane
kehta hai tumhe dard ho toh mujhe do ilzaam nahin

muskura ootha is baat par main,aur hasee na ruki
labon ko rok loon muskuraane se,dard kii aisi lagaam nahin

dil mera dekhta raha mujhko aur rota raha
kehta hai "saahil"yeh dard le le na teri jaan kaahin

maine de diya oose kaagaz mutthi main pakda hua
kii dost is ddard ko mita de,aisa koi LUKMAAN nahin

phir beith gaye hum jaam haathon main lekar khamoshi se
woh shaam is tarah ruk k gujri,jaise woh dard se anjaan nahin
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: August 18, 2009, 10:05:21 AM »
Bohot Bohot khooooooob Saahil ji... kaghaz pe rakhdiya hai, kaleja nikaal ke...  Applause  Applause  Applause
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #2 on: August 18, 2009, 11:48:15 AM »
saahil saaHeb:

Aadaab!

aik achchhi koShiSh ! daad! yuuNhi liKhate raheN .. duaa hay Zor-e-qalaam aur baRheN zeyaadaah!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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sanprem
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«Reply #3 on: August 18, 2009, 12:47:15 PM »
dard se kaleja bhi nikaala to muskurake
kya baat hai Applause
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salma786
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«Reply #4 on: August 19, 2009, 11:18:48 AM »
Bahoot khoob Sahil .. wonderful Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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salil2002
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2009, 11:04:28 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 18, 2009, 10:05:21 AM
Bohot Bohot khooooooob Saahil ji... kaghaz pe rakhdiya hai, kaleja nikaal ke...  Applause  Applause  Applause
Quote from: Dhaval on August 18, 2009, 11:48:15 AM
saahil saaHeb:

Aadaab!

aik achchhi koShiSh ! daad! yuuNhi liKhate raheN .. duaa hay Zor-e-qalaam aur baRheN zeyaadaah!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
Quote from: sanprem on August 18, 2009, 12:47:15 PM
dard se kaleja bhi nikaala to muskurake
kya baat hai Applause
Quote from: @kaash on August 18, 2009, 12:58:51 PM
bahot khoob likha hai aapne Sahil dear  Applause Applause Applause
very nice poem
Quote from: salma786 on August 19, 2009, 11:18:48 AM
Bahoot khoob Sahil .. wonderful Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
bahut bahut shukriya eanderi saheb,dhaval bhai,sanprem dost,kaash bhai, and salma ji
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2009, 04:32:03 PM »
Quote from: -Saahil- on August 18, 2009, 07:47:23 AM
aaj dil bada bechain tha,aaj shaam bahut roya
poochha jo maine haale dil toh kehta hai aaraam nahin

beith kar kured raha hai zakhm saare puraane
kehta hai tumhe dard ho toh mujhe do ilzaam nahin

muskura ootha is baat par main,aur hasee na ruki
labon ko rok loon muskuraane se,dard kii aisi lagaam nahin

dil mera dekhta raha mujhko aur rota raha
kehta hai "saahil"yeh dard le le na teri jaan kaahin

maine de diya oose kaagaz mutthi main pakda hua
kii dost is ddard ko mita de,aisa koi LUKMAAN nahin

phir beith gaye hum jaam haathon main lekar khamoshi se
woh shaam is tarah ruk k gujri,jaise woh dard se anjaan nahin


Bahut khoob. Touching lines. overall very good shayari  Thumbs UP
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2009, 06:15:05 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob saahil!!
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2009, 06:32:28 AM »
Quote from: Roja on August 21, 2009, 04:32:03 PM
Bahut khoob. Touching lines. overall very good shayari  Thumbs UP
thanks a lot roja dear
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2009, 06:33:33 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 21, 2009, 06:15:05 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahoot khoob saahil!!
thank u di
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2009, 06:59:51 AM »
Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob,really touching,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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salil2002
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2009, 10:19:09 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 25, 2009, 06:59:51 AM
Wah wah Saahil ji,bahut khoob,really touching,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks a lot laila dear
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