Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on April 26, 2010, 03:55:21 PM

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Jab kabhi hum apna dard nichodte hai
Behte hai bohat aasoo aur zabt todte hai

Nahi chodti unko sharmindgi yado ki
Rah_e_safar apna jo humsafar chodte hai

Na ban saka unse kuch bhi zamane me
Auro se kiya aksar jo ahad todte hai

Paththar ki zameen par paththar ke samne
Zinda mere shehar ke sar phodte hai

Jab aazmaya humne yeh baat humne jani
Jo todte hai aksar wahi dil ko jodte hai

Rukh hawao se mushkil ek aur bhi hai Ghayel
Hum shayri se apni rukh zamane ka modte hai

Sajid Ghayel


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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2010, 12:06:46 AM »

Lajawab peshkash!!!Bahut khoob!!


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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2010, 05:27:41 AM »

good one ghayel ji Applause


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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2010, 05:33:43 AM »

Ghayal sb. aapki kalam ki tareef me hum kuch bhi likheng kam hi padega, bahut umda , shabnam ko moti me tabdeel karne ka madda rakhte hai aap tabhi har mamuli si baat bhi aap jaise shayaro ki kalam se guzar k khaas hojaya karti hai. Aapke kalaamo se bahut kuch seekhne ko milega.


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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2010, 07:13:44 AM »

Bahut khoob Ghayel Ji


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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2010, 09:31:50 AM »

ALFAAZ MAIN GAR JADU HO TO INQALAAB AATA HAI,
WARNA YEH ZABAAN AKSAR RUSWAI KA SABAB HOTI HAI


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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 12:38:57 PM »

ahh kahe ya wah bhai , kya qoob kaha janab mann , 4th ashar me kya kahe diya mere bhai wah kya qoob , baaqi ashar bhi qoob rahe .. magar 4th ashar ke liye ghazal kahi hogi apne .. kya kahene dad hazir hai qubool karen ..

duwa go

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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2010, 12:41:13 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on April 27, 2010, 09:31:50 AM

ALFAAZ MAIN GAR JADU HO TO INQALAAB AATA HAI,
WARNA YEH ZABAAN AKSAR RUSWAI KA SABAB HOTI HAI

wallah saheba kya qoob baath kahi hai ,, wah kya almia hai sahab .. kya kahene .. bahoth sahi kaha apne .. dad hazir hai apki qidmath me .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..

khadim

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Re: Dard Nichodte hai.....( Ghayel )

«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2010, 01:09:54 PM »

Wah kya baat hai Sajid_Ghayel ji......

Pashtatey wahi hai jo inka saath chodte hai
na jaane "GHAYEL" ki shayri mein kya dum hai
wahi phirse aake insey naata jodte hai......