daR.d sey hamkAlaa.m rehTey hain.....

by laaiba on September 06, 2012, 06:14:10 PM
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bAa.t yeh sar E aA .m kehTey hain
              daR.d sey ham kAlaa.m rehTey hain
             
              ham to chaNchal haWaa k haathon sey
              rou.z tum ko sAlaa.m kehTey hain..

              yAa.d haii teiiri meiRE anDar tak
              zikr tei raa suBah shaa.m karTey hain

              isH.q mein khu.d ko hi bhuLaa kar..
              dil ko tei raa ghu laa.m kehTey hain

              maSnadey dil pe tumko biithaa kar
              shei.r bhee tei re naa.m kehTey hain''

laaiba ali
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2012, 06:20:49 PM »
Bahut khoob Laaiba jee
kya kahne..bahut umda...
har ashaar..bolta huaa
maqta..behatreen..
likhti rahiye Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2012, 07:07:50 PM »
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa mkv ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: September 06, 2012, 07:28:59 PM »
Simply beautiful, laaiba ji....bahot khoob
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2012, 12:42:24 AM »
nice
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2012, 04:12:33 AM »
bahut khoob Laaiba ji dheon daad qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2012, 04:19:01 AM »
Bahut Khub Laaiba Ji
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2012, 06:14:53 AM »
Quote from: Sps on September 06, 2012, 07:28:59 PM
Simply beautiful, laaiba ji....bahot khoob
bohat shukria aapkaa.....
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2012, 06:15:19 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on September 07, 2012, 12:42:24 AM
nice
thanks.....
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«Reply #9 on: September 07, 2012, 06:15:53 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 07, 2012, 04:12:33 AM
bahut khoob Laaiba ji dheon daad qubool karen
bohat bohat shukria aapkaa.....
shaad rahein...
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«Reply #10 on: September 07, 2012, 06:16:21 AM »
Quote from: Sanjeev kash on September 07, 2012, 04:19:01 AM
Bahut Khub Laaiba Ji
bohat shukria aapkaa.....
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«Reply #11 on: September 07, 2012, 09:50:49 AM »
Laaibaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH kia baat hai jee bahut khoob badi hi
pyaari gazal kahi hai ... sabhi ashaar behad khoob
lage hume aik se badhkar aik khayaal aur umdaa ahsaas...


Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Shayad aapko kafiye ne rok diya...

Likhati rahiye... aati rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile 
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«Reply #12 on: September 07, 2012, 10:01:25 AM »
very nice laaiba ji..
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«Reply #13 on: September 07, 2012, 11:02:50 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Bohot Khoob,, A perfect behr k sath umda kalam.. Kya hi bat hai mohtrama

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«Reply #14 on: September 07, 2012, 03:26:20 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Laaiba ji...!!!
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