daR.d sey hamkAlaa.m rehTey hain.....

by laaiba on September 06, 2012, 06:14:10 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 08, 2012, 05:27:06 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on September 06, 2012, 06:14:10 PM
bAa.t yeh sar E aA .m kehTey hain
              daR.d sey ham kAlaa.m rehTey hain
              
              ham to chaNchal haWaa k haathon sey
              rou.z tum ko sAlaa.m kehTey hain..

              yAa.d haii teiiri meiRE anDar tak
              zikr tei raa suBah shaa.m karTey hain

              isH.q mein khu.d ko hi bhuLaa kar..
              dil ko tei raa ghu laa.m kehTey hain

              maSnadey dil pe tumko biithaa kar
              shei.r bhee tei re naa.m kehTey hain''

laaiba ali


achi gahzal hai laaibaa ji

matla aur maktaa behr se khariz lage mujhe
dekh len ik baar ... shayed mai ghalat hun

maSnadey .. is lafz pe thoda confuse hun....
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laaiba
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«Reply #16 on: September 08, 2012, 06:37:40 AM »
Quote from: janumanu on September 08, 2012, 05:27:06 AM

achi gahzal hai laaibaa ji

matla aur maktaa behr se khariz lage mujhe
dekh len ik baar ... shayed mai ghalat hun

maSnadey .. is lafz pe thoda confuse hun....

aadab janumanu ji
bohat khushee hui aap ne sarahaa or kami ki janib ishara kia..main dekh leti hoo ,beher yeh chuni main ne aap pls deikh lein......faa i laa tan, ma faa i lun, faa lun....
            2  1  2  2 ,  1  2  1  2   , 2  2
baa.t  yeh sar e  aa .m keh tey hain
 2  1   2   2  1   2  1  2   2   2
faa i  laa tan,ma faa i lun,faa lun
dar.d sey ham ka laa.m reh tey hain
 2  1  2   2,  1  2  1  2   2   2
 faa i laa tan. ma faa i lun, faa lun
   2 1  2   2  ,1   2  1  2   , 2  2
  mas na dey dil pe tum ko bee thaa kar
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  she.R  bhi  tei re  naa m  keh tey hain.....

ap ise ab deikh kr bata dein beher se kharij kaha.n hain
bohat shookria.....
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«Reply #17 on: September 08, 2012, 06:52:58 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on September 06, 2012, 06:14:10 PM
bAa.t yeh sar E aA .m kehTey hain
              daR.d sey ham kAlaa.m rehTey hain
             
              ham to chaNchal haWaa k haathon sey
              rou.z tum ko sAlaa.m kehTey hain..

              yAa.d haii teiiri meiRE anDar tak
              zikr tei raa suBah shaa.m karTey hain

              isH.q mein khu.d ko hi bhuLaa kar..
              dil ko tei raa ghu laa.m kehTey hain

              maSnadey dil pe tumko biithaa kar
              shei.r bhee tei re naa.m kehTey hain''

laaiba ali


Bahut Bahut Khooob Laaiba ji..

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laaiba
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«Reply #18 on: September 08, 2012, 06:56:42 AM »
bohat shookria aapkaa....
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janumanu
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«Reply #19 on: September 08, 2012, 09:40:40 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on September 08, 2012, 06:37:40 AM
aadab janumanu ji
bohat khushee hui aap ne sarahaa or kami ki janib ishara kia..main dekh leti hoo ,beher yeh chuni main ne aap pls deikh lein......faa i laa tan, ma faa i lun, faa lun....
            2  1  2  2 ,  1  2  1  2   , 2  2
baa.t  yeh sar e  aa .m keh tey hain
 2  1   2   2  1   2  1  2   2   2
faa i  laa tan,ma faa i lun,faa lun
dar.d sey ham ka laa.m reh tey hain
 2  1  2   2,  1  2  1  2   2   2
 faa i laa tan. ma faa i lun, faa lun
   2 1  2   2  ,1   2  1  2   , 2  2
  mas na dey dil pe tum ko bee thaa kar
   2  1   2   2  1   2   1  2   2   2
  she.R  bhi  tei re  naa m  keh tey hain.....

ap ise ab deikh kr bata dein beher se kharij kaha.n hain
bohat shookria.....

aapne j sar-e-aam baandha hai wo ghalat hai

sar-e-aam........ ko s--re--aam padha jata hai ,,,

aur masnad ,,, ye lafz saaf nahi huee hai.. shayed iske taha bhi sar-e-aam wala masalaa hai

sar-e-aam
ko behr mai

s-re-aam .. ke wazn pe liyaa jayega ..
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laaiba
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«Reply #20 on: September 08, 2012, 06:54:09 PM »
aapkee baat sahee hai lekin lafz sar hai or usk neeche zeir hai
sar 2 zeir ko 1 pe lia hai ...
mas nad ke daal mein bhi harf ke neeche zeir aati hai
iss liye main ne isse 1 pr liya...
aap ke nuqta nazr se bhi theek ho ga Usual Smile
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janumanu
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«Reply #21 on: September 09, 2012, 11:23:24 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on September 08, 2012, 06:54:09 PM
aapkee baat sahee hai lekin lafz sar hai or usk neeche zeir hai
sar 2 zeir ko 1 pe lia hai ...
mas nad ke daal mein bhi harf ke neeche zeir aati hai
iss liye main ne isse 1 pr liya...
aap ke nuqta nazr se bhi theek ho ga Usual Smile

ji lafz wahi hai aapne jo kaha .. lekin jab .... sar-e-hafil hoga to.... lafz s-re-meH-fil hoga ,,,,

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