~*Dard~*~

by pankshivam on July 03, 2009, 09:11:45 PM
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pankshivam
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Dard itna hai meri aahon me,
Rota rahta hai dil zindagi ki bahon me...

Ye ishq hi to hai jo jalata hai sanson ko,
Dekhta hun pyar jab bhi is duniya ki nigahon me...

Rokar kuch likhkar bahla leta hun khud ko kabhi,
Rashk aata hai kabhi kabhi dekhkar pyar karne walon ki aadaon me...

Milta mujhe bhi vo pyar to aaj ye shayar na hota,
Shayad kahi koi kami thi meri hi wafaoon me...

Aaj khushi bhi hai aur gam bhi apni halat pe,
Vo na hota to dard na hota meri panahon me...

Vo hasne bhi nahi deta mujhe aur ro bhi nahi pata hun,
Jane kaisa asar aaj bhi hai uski har aati huyi sadaon me...

~Pank~
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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #1 on: July 03, 2009, 09:18:24 PM »
achha likha hai pankshivam ji.
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dead heart
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«Reply #2 on: July 03, 2009, 09:18:32 PM »
 Applause Applause Pank bhaijan aap wakei ek bahaut ache shayar hai...Hamesha se hi apko padna bahaut acha lagta hai... Applause Applause
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mistufer
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«Reply #3 on: July 03, 2009, 09:20:41 PM »

Dard itna hai meri aahon me,
Rota rahta hai dil zindagi ki bahon me...

Ye ishq hi to hai jo jalata hai sanson ko,
Dekhta hun pyar jab bhi is duniya ki nigahon me...

Rokar kuch likhkar bahla leta hun khud ko kabhi,
Rashk aata hai kabhi kabhi dekhkar pyar karne walon ki aadaon me...

Milta mujhe bhi vo pyar to aaj ye shayar na hota,
Shayad kahi koi kami thi meri hi wafaoon me...

Aaj khushi bhi hai aur gam bhi apni halat pe,
Vo na hota to dard na hota meri panahon me...

Vo hasne bhi nahi deta mujhe aur ro bhi nahi pata hun,
Jane kaisa asar aaj bhi hai uski har aati huyi sadaon me...

~Pank~

pank ji
bahut badhiya tahreer likhi hai
har sher mein dard jhalakta hai
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pankshivam
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«Reply #4 on: July 03, 2009, 09:23:09 PM »
achha likha hai pankshivam ji.
Shukriya Sayyid Sahab
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pankshivam
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2009, 09:25:14 PM »
Applause Applause Pank bhaijan aap wakei ek bahaut ache shayar hai...Hamesha se hi apko padna bahaut acha lagta hai... Applause Applause
Shukriya Rahim Bhai
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pankshivam
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2009, 09:26:30 PM »
pank ji
bahut badhiya tahreer likhi hai
har sher mein dard jhalakta hai
Shukriya Niraji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: July 04, 2009, 02:49:32 AM »
Nice one Shivam Ji
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pankshivam
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«Reply #8 on: July 04, 2009, 06:29:05 AM »
Nice one Shivam Ji
Thanks Rajeshji
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: July 04, 2009, 06:40:21 AM »

Dard itna hai meri aahon me,
Rota rahta hai dil zindagi ki bahon me...

Ye ishq hi to hai jo jalata hai sanson ko,
Dekhta hun pyar jab bhi is duniya ki nigahon me...

Rokar kuch likhkar bahla leta hun khud ko kabhi,
Rashk aata hai kabhi kabhi dekhkar pyar karne walon ki aadaon me...

Milta mujhe bhi vo pyar to aaj ye shayar na hota,
Shayad kahi koi kami thi meri hi wafaoon me...

Aaj khushi bhi hai aur gam bhi apni halat pe,
Vo na hota to dard na hota meri panahon me...

Vo hasne bhi nahi deta mujhe aur ro bhi nahi pata hun,
Jane kaisa asar aaj bhi hai uski har aati huyi sadaon me...

~Pank~

ek ek line dard main doobi, dard ki gahari ko dikhati hu...
Ahh likhu wah likhu...
pad kar kavita apki,
Soch ain pad gai hu
prashnsa kin shabdo main likhu.....


Good creation, good work...
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pankshivam
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«Reply #10 on: July 04, 2009, 06:47:17 AM »
Thanks Poojaji
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cara
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«Reply #11 on: July 04, 2009, 09:41:37 AM »
kya baat hai....pankji ...

mila jo tera pyar,main tera yaar bangaya
mila jo tera DARD,main shayar bangaya.
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superspawn10
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«Reply #12 on: July 04, 2009, 10:04:02 AM »
Wah kya baat hai pank ji...Bohot hi badhiya likha hai aapne... Applause
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pankshivam
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«Reply #13 on: July 04, 2009, 10:36:23 AM »
kya baat hai....pankji ...

mila jo tera pyar,main tera yaar bangaya
mila jo tera DARD,main shayar bangaya.
Shukriya Caraji
Thanks for nice lines

Dard ki aahat pe teri kahani yad aayi...
Maut ke aagosh me zindgani yaad aayi...

Na kar paye umr bhar izhar-e-gam bhi tujhse...
Chhalak aaye ashk jab un lamhon ki nishani yaad aayi...

~pank~
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Deepati
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 04:39:16 AM »

Dard itna hai meri aahon me,
Rota rahta hai dil zindagi ki bahon me...

Ye ishq hi to hai jo jalata hai sanson ko,
Dekhta hun pyar jab bhi is duniya ki nigahon me...

Rokar kuch likhkar bahla leta hun khud ko kabhi,
Rashk aata hai kabhi kabhi dekhkar pyar karne walon ki aadaon me...

Milta mujhe bhi vo pyar to aaj ye shayar na hota,
Shayad kahi koi kami thi meri hi wafaoon me...

Aaj khushi bhi hai aur gam bhi apni halat pe,
Vo na hota to dard na hota meri panahon me...

Vo hasne bhi nahi deta mujhe aur ro bhi nahi pata hun,
Jane kaisa asar aaj bhi hai uski har aati huyi sadaon me...

~Pank~

Wah Wah, Pank Ji, Ek baar phir se bahut he khoobsurat alfaazon mein dard ko bayaan kiya hai! Dil ko chhoo gaye aapke dil se nikle huye alfaaz!  Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob! Applause Applause
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