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by smruti on August 28, 2009, 10:20:57 AM
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smruti
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saari duniya ne hamain tukhraya hai
phir usne tukhraya to kya hua,
aree yahaan to roj toden jaate hajaaron ashiqkon ke dil
phir usne hamaara tod diya to kya hua.
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 10:26:36 AM »
bahut achche smruti
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aaina
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2009, 01:25:47 AM »
saari duniya ne hamain tukhraya hai
phir usne tukhraya to kya hua,
aree yahaan to roj toden jaate hajaaron ashiqkon ke dil
phir usne hamaara tod diya to kya hua.

very nice


dil jinke toot jaate hain wo roya nahi karte
mohabbat ke youn aansu dhoya nahi karte
agr hai succhi mohabbat to usko aabaad rakho
sundar seepiyo.n ko samndar mai duboya nahi karte
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DhavalRami
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2009, 04:04:56 AM »
Smruti jee:

namaste!

bazm meiN aapka swaagat hay..! dard bharaa ehsaas! Khuub lafzoN meiN bayaa.n kiyaa hay.. liKhate raheN yuuNhi.. apni koShiShoN se bazm ko sajaate rahiYe!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 01:43:33 AM »
Bahut khoob Smruti ji,beautiful lines by Aslam ji. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Roja
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2009, 03:35:48 AM »
Nice 1 smruti ji. Yoindia mein aapka swagat hai  Usual Smile
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smruti
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«Reply #6 on: September 02, 2009, 11:25:51 AM »
aapne duwaye di dil ko sakoon mila iss badnaseeb sayar ko kuch to najrana mila,sukrya .....
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Yoindia Support
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«Reply #7 on: September 02, 2009, 11:29:18 AM »
Moved to Shayari-e-Dard !
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